Burn In Hell! (part 1)
By:Wouldn't U like 2 no( )
I guess if reveiws are so important then reveiw if you liked my first story or chapter whatever it really is(I know I won't get many reveiws anyways)
Flash Back...Kyo: YOU DAMN RAT! YOU'LL SEE ONE DAY I WILL BEAT YOU IN A BATTLE, JUST YOU WAIT!
Yuki:Why don't you stop whinning for once and make a good use of yourself?
Kyo:(gets even more pissed off and explodes) YOU'RE SO FULL OF IT!(Tried to attack Yuki but sadly fails)
(Yuki attacks Kyo...and knocks him down)
THUD
Yuki:When will you ever learn you stupit cat?
Kyo:GRRRR...End of Flash Back...
Kyo:I can't belive that that damn rat beat me like that again...grrr why does he always come up as number one?..ARGG I CAN'T STAND IT, WHEN AM I GOING TO BEAT HIM!IT JUST MAKES ME SO SICK TO HAVE TO PUT UP WITH SOMEONE LIKE RAT-BOY... ESPECIALY HAVING TO LIVE WITH HIM , HE'S SUCH A BIG PAIN IN THE --
:HI Kyo!
(Tohrus voice had broken into Kyo's thoughts)
Kyo:AGHH!
Tohru:OH! I'm sorry did I startle you again?
(Cat ears pop out) Kyo: WHY DO YOU HAVE TO KEEP SNEAKING UP ON ME LIKE THAT?
Tohru:Well I.--
(Shigure interupts cough,like he usually does,cough)
Shigure:Calm down Kyo after all she did say she was sorry for scaring you like that.
Kyo:WHO SAID I GOT SCARED HUH?
Shigure: Well you did scream didn't you?
Kyo:I DIDN'T SCREAM I WAS JUST SURPRIZED BY HER THATS ALL!
Shigure: If thats what you say...
Kyo: HEY I'M NOT LYING!
Tohru:...uum..
( Kyo and Shigure still arguing about stuff - -)
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A FEW MOMENTS LATER
:Tohru you're still here good!
( Room quiets down from sudden surprize)
Kyo:WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE!
Momiji: I just thought that I'd come and see how Tohrus doing.
Tohru: Oh ..well thank you.
Momiji:Say Tohru why don't we go outside to the nearest park play?
Tohru:Well...okay!
Momiji:YAY! TOHRU'S COMING WITH ME!
Momji: Hey why don't we invite Yuki, Kyo, And Shigure too?
Kyo:AGH,WHY THE HELL WOUL'D I WANT TO GO OUTSIDE TO PLAY IN SOME STUPID PARK?
Momiji:AWWW, come with us, come with us!PPPLLLLEEEAASSEE?
Kyo:(starts hitting Momiji on the head with his knuckles or at leasts starts rubbing his knuckles as hard as he can on Momiji's head...)
Momiji:OOOWWWW!Somebody Kyo's hitting me!
Kyo:WILL YOU SHUT UP?
Shigure:Come on now Kyo, don't be so hard on him besides I think that we could all use some fresh air.
Kyo:WELL I DON'T WANT RAT-BOY COMING ALONG! This is'nt gonna go well
Seconds Later
Momiji:YUKI! WHERE ARE YOUUUUUU?
Kyo:COULD YOU GET ANY LOUDER!
:We could ask you the exact same question and it still wouldn't change would it (coldly) you stupid cat?
Tohru: Oh,Yuki we were just about to invite you to come with us to the park.
Momiji:Come with us, COME WITH US!
Yuki:Umm...okay.
Kyo:Gggrrrr...
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Another Few Seconds Later
Yuki:Ms. Honda are you ready to go?
Tohru:..Uh..yes I'm ready.
(Momiji's on the swinging upsidedown on the monkey bars , Shigure's going down the slide... O o...Tohru's softly swinging,Yuki's swinging next to Tohruor at least just sitting on the swing like her,and Kyo's using his martial art skills to uhh"gently" knock down a telephone wire, tree,pole...those big pieces of tree that hold up the telephone wires if you didn't understand me back there
Momiji:WEEEE! This is so much fun! Don't you think so too Tohru?
Tohru:Hmm?..Oh! Y..yes this is fun.
(Tohru's just looking around when she sees Shigure)
Tohru:Oh no! Shigure watch out you're going to--
(THUD)
Shigure:Oww...(in a muffled kind of way) I think I bit my tounge!(sticks his tounge out)
(Great I bet he can't even feel his tounge now...)
Shigure:AGHH! I CAN'T FEEL MY TOUNGE!Stupidly starts running around...in..uhh...circles...
(...U C now "kibbles n' bits," for brains can't feel his own tounge (sarcasticly)is'nt this going well?
Tohru:Shigure are you okay?
Shigure:(still running around in circles 'cause of the pain)
Kyo:(trips Shigure in order to talk to him don't worry Shigure fell on his back (softly)even though it would've been funny if he fell on his face and messed that up too...hmmm...oh well...)
Momiji:(franticly)What are we going to do?What if Shigure dies because he doesn't have a tounge in the future? What if he dies because of a nose bleed? SOMEBODY DO SOMETHING!
(yes, Kyo did knock Shigure on his face even though I said I woundn't make that happen... : ) uumm...mwa ha ha?
Everyone:(looks at Momiji because of his scary and weird thoughtsalso because Momiji is'nt the one to say these kinds of things)
Kyo:Agh,he's fine that dogs gotten hit on the head twice as hard by me, than him running into the side of the slide(like he probably does evertime he goes to a park)
Tohru:But what are we going to do it really looks like he's in pain
Kyo:Grrr, He can burn in hell for all we care and he'd still pretend that he's in pain
Shigure:(muffled)What makes you think that I fake to be in pain when I'm really hurt?
Yuki:Nothing he probably just figured that because he's so simple minded
Kyo:OKAY RAT-BOY YOU WANNA FIGHT? WELL YOU GOT ONE!
Yuki:...(sigh)..
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So thats the end of my first story (or a chapter anyways) like I said reveiw if U liked it and U can ask me questions about anything(I'm saying this beause im boared most of the time n.n) unless if I don't no what U R talking about (n.n;) I'll try 2 answer questions as soon as possible! Reveiw! (keep reviewing so I can write about what happens 2 that idiot Shigure) since I think it sucked 'cause i'm not a good writer U don't have to reveiw X( and if U want out about the flashback review so I can can write about it in my next story...Yes, I no why did I call it "Burn In Hell," if I'm only going 2 make a character say it once if I get at least 6+ reveiews people will say it alot more next time :)! I might take a while though so 4 the next 5 days if I don't get caught writting this on the computer XD I'll b trying 2 write part 2 of the story : ) oh no I made another smilie (twitch,twitch)