Hi, so this is my first time posting on this site, so I am freaking terrified that this will suck. If you think it does, give me a reason why. If you are reading this, you just made my life (besides the time I met Brandon Mull and got some sighed books from him). I will try to respond ASAP, but that could be difficult. Well,
DISCLAIMER: I own nothing. XP Darn it! I want Jack so I can make him dark! Did I say that out loud?
The cold is my best friend,
The darkness doesn't seem to end.
I don't remember a time I've not felt sad,
It's been so long since I've been glad.
Alone for 300 years,
With no one to wipe my tears.
I woke in a pond some night ago,
Drowning in water, so very low.
A silver orb shining in the night,
Gave me blue eyes and hair so white.
He gave me that and also a name,
But with memories gone, still to gain.
Abandoned and forgotten by all,
No one to hear my anguished call.
They say I don't exist; I'm just a saying,
Still for someone to see me is what I've been praying.
I'm always with children but they never see,
They don't even recognize the name of me.
Even the child who believes in all,
Passes through me like he would a hall.
The only time one has said my name is in the Christmas Song,
Or in bad movies where I'm portrayed so horribly wrong.
A shepherd's staff is what I carry,
Aware of everything; always wary.
In 1968 I created a snow storm,
People were inside so long trying to keep warm.
I've seen death and pain,
A friend I'll never gain.
So why am I still here?
I just depressed myself.
Hey, reganrocks, if you're reading this, hi!
Please tell me what you think, because, personally, I think this sucks. And just an FYI, the spirit of Life hates me, so responses and other stories will (most likely) take forever for me to get up. I love you if you read this. PTYL (post to you later) hopefully.
So, I got a review from a guest, and I'd like to reply. I reply to users using PMs.
K9kid- I'm so glad you think this does not suck! :) I love that you love this! Your review means so much to me, and I will try to not be so hard on myself. Thank you for reading!