WHAT IT BEEEE? First of all, I hope none of you knew this was coming. To be honest, I wasn't very satisfied with the recent entries because they seemed like copies of the real thing with OCs thrown in. I wasn't satisfied with my grammar and vocabulary issues either. That's why I've decided to mix it up a bit. A whole lot has changed. At first, I didn't mean to change a lot. Then stuff happened and now here it is. Anyways, hope you enjoy it.
CH. 1 New Celestial Being
2301 A.D. Republic of Krugis
"This battle is a holy war offered up to God." The voice of Ali-Al Saachez rang in all of her servants' ears. The children who fought for him in the name of 'God' ran through the ruined buildings of Krugis, using small machine guns to fight the giant Anf machines attacking their homeland. And as you can imagine, it was a very futile attempt.
Two kids attempted to take down an Anf with their machine guns. The gigantic machine turned around and looked down at the kids as if mocking them. One cannon blast left a splash of red to color the dirt brown remains of Krugis.
More bodies were piled across the terrible wasteland. Bodies of young children, with not an adult in sight. These children were brainwashed with the mindset of fighting in the name of God, not knowing they were serving under a fight-crazed freak.
Three young kids in particular sprinted towards a wall, diving as an Anf fired a blast from it's cannon. Sweat poured down their foreheads as they realized that they had escaped the grasp of death.
A boy with black hair wearing a brown, tattered cloak breathed heavily. It was too much. He couldn't take much more of this.
"Soran! We need to get out of here!" He cried.
The brown-haired boy known as Soran had similar thoughts. But he knew that trying to escape this wasteland was like trying to escape Hell. And five purgatorial guards wouldn't let them pass easily.
The other person with them was a girl with flowing brown hair, wearing a same-colored dress. She probably would've been a lovely young woman if it weren't for the chaos that erupted within their homeland.
"Don't worry Emir." She calmed her friend. "God will protect us."
"There's no such being as God, Amina." Soran flatly stated.
"Don't be so hasty in saying that." Amina attempted to convince her friend.
Suddenly, an Anf's eye flashed in front of them. They gasped and immediately ran to the other side of the wall. Their wall of protection was easily obliterated by a cannon blast, causing them to run towards another hiding spot.
A boy hid inside the building they were about to hide in. He had slightly longer brown hair than Soran. He gasped as he saw them. "What? Get outta here! This place is for me only!"
"Sepehr!" Emir cried.
The boy immediately noticed Amina. "Amina! You can stay!"
"What? You'll let me stay, but you'll leave Emir and Soran to die?" She gasped.
Sepehr had a crush on Amina for a while, but didn't know how to approach her because she always hung around with her two guy friends. He had always said to himself that he'd protect her in times of danger, but he could never admit he was a coward.
A blast rocked the building. Soran cursed under his breath and sprinted outside to the Anf attacking them and threw a grenade at it's face! It made impact, exploding and knocking down the Anf!
"He did it!" Emir exclaimed.
But the grenade couldn't deal significant damage. It quickly got up and aimed it's cannon at a frozen Soran.
"Soran!" Amina screamed, pushing him out of the way as the Anf fired it's cannon! Her shriek got louder as the blast grazed her ankle and destroyed the building Sepehr was hiding in!
Emir immediately took action, throwing another grenade at that Anf, knocking it down again. Amina howled in pain as the wound on her ankle deepened, with a small puddle of blood forming.
"HELLLPPPP!" She shrieked to her two friends. "Help me, you guys!"
"I-" Soran's eyes widened. Another Anf was coming their way and they had no time to pick her up and run away.
"Please help me!" She begged her two friends.
"Soran! We need to get out of here!" Emir shouted, gripping his friend's wrist. Soran was frozen in place, not knowing what to do. He couldn't decide, as Emir dragged him away while Amina screamed for them.
The two were at the end of the rope. They has ran straight into an Anf, staring down at them with malicious intent.
They couldn't move. The machine pointed it's cannon straight at them.
Suddenly, a beam from the sky struck right through it's head, causing it to explode! Several more beams rained from on high, destroying every other machine in the town!
The two looked up into the sky to see an amazing sight. A gray-colored mobile suit floated in the sky, with huge amounts of green particles being emitted from it's back. The particles emitted flowed together into the shape of two wings.
It looked down at them, as if it were the saviour of mankind.
And Emir and Soran stared back in awe.
"Amazing..."
2307 A.D. Ptolemaios
Souji Shirotsuki zipped up his red jumpsuit within Celestial Being's main ship, the Ptolemaios. He gave a large sigh, weighted down by the pressure of the actions to come.
He glanced at the mirror attached to his locker. He had neck-length black hair and light brown skin, courtesy of his experiences in Krugis. He was actually very clean compared to the kids in the KPSA in Krugis, because he was a bit of a coward compared to most.
Souji had matured from then. Now, he was a Gundam Meister. An organization dedicated to ending all war.
He shuddered. No surprise. Today, they were about to become Earth's greatest enemy.
"You okay?"
He blinked and turned around. A young man with long brown hair and pale skin wearing a green jumpsuit patted him on the shoulder. "Don't worry about it. We're all in this together."
"Lockon Stratos..." Souji sighed, more with relief than worry. Lockon was like the big brother of the two youngest male Meisters and so he took care of them when the others ignored them. He said that they were much easier to deal with than his true younger brother.
"I'll be protecting you guys from the rear, so take care of things okay?" Lockon gave him a thumbs-up. "You excited about going back to Earth."
Souji nodded. "Yeah. I'm very excited about all this."
"Don't let it get to your head." A man with dark brown hair and a bronze jumpsuit walked in. "You'll easily get killed."
"Uh..." Souji frowned.
"Come on, Origen Admantus!" Lockon said. "Aren't you excited at the very least?"
"Of course I am." He responded flatly. "But I'm not so excited as to get myself killed on the first mission. A Gundam Meister needs to be calm and collected at times like theses."
"Now now. We all have the same goal, so there's no need for conflict." A young man with long green brown hair wearing an orange jumpsuit walked in as well.
"Allelujah Haptism." Origen stated his name. "You still have a long way to go."
Allelujah frowned. "What is that supposed to mean?"
"You are still too inexperienced." Now a pale-skinned purple-haired young man walked inside, wearing a purple jumpsuit. "Your skills at piloting the Gundam is sub-par at best. I don't know why you're a Gundam Meister."
"What did you say?" Allelujah glared at him.
"Stop getting people so pissed off at you, Tieria!" A girl walked into the guys locker room, surprising all of them. She had long brown hair, wearing a turquoise jumpsuit. "Geez, all you guys need to cheer up!"
"Rachel Apokata, it's not us." Tieria replied. "You're just too crazy."
"What? Come on! I'll take you on!" Rachel jumped at the purple-haired Meister, but forgot that there was no gravity in space and ended up floating away. "NOOOOO!"
"Idiot." Tieria turned away. Origen did the same.
"But you can always count on Rachel to lighten the mood." Lockon smiled.
"Really." Allelujah agreed.
"The mission will begin shortly." Entering the room was the final Gundam Meister. He had dark brown skin with even darker hair, wearing a blue jumpsuit. "Lockon Stratos, Souji Shirotsuki. Prepare for launch."
"We know. We know." Souji nodded. "Let's do it, Setsuna."
AEU Orbital Elevator, AEU Military Testing Ground
Near the AEU's Orbital Elevator, the Military Testing Ground was very busy. It was a rather prideful day for them, as they were unveiling their new advanced mobile suit. Several spectators sat at the bleachers, amazed at what they were seeing.
Within a model city, several turrets with target boards attached above them sat at ready. Suddenly, a turquoise mobile suit that looked like some skinny airplane-like humanoid flew through the air, causing them to fire rapidly at it!
It easily dodged all the bullets and fired electromagnetically-accelerated live rounds from it's linear rifle. They all hit their mark, disabling all the turrets in front of it.
It landed on the ground, spotting three more turrets. It quickly blocked it's bullets by rotating it's defense rod to great speeds on it's elbow, then quickly fired at the remaining turrets in the sky.
The crowd gasped in amazement. It was definitely a top-quality mobile suit.
A young man stood at the top of the bleachers with binoculars, frowning. "That Patrick. He's such a showoff." The young man had dark green hair wearing a black suit and gray slacks.
"Are you jealous?" Another young man smiled at his friend. He had black hair, wearing the same clothes as his friend.
"Chip Franklin, Dale Bash." One other young man patted his two friends on his head. He had neck-length blue hair wearing a gray blazer and black slacks. "Why are you two worked up over some guy?"
"Lieutenant Peter Loewen!" The two saluted their superior. "We didn't realize you were here!"
"Of course I am." Peter sat down on the empty seat in front of him. "I wanted to see the mobile suit that will eventually replace our Hellion after all."
"I don't get it, Lietenant." Chip sighed. "You're a much better pilot than that bastard Colasour. Why aren't you getting all the glory?"
"War isn't about being a hero." Peter replied. "And I'm much more of a reserved guy anyway. Don't doubt Colasour's abilities though. He's definitely better than some pilots here."
"I suppose." Dale replied. "Still, it's kind of sad to let go of the Hellion. We had some great times with those mobile suits."
"I know." Peter said with a sad smile. "I know."
Suddenly, someone bumped into him. He blinked and turned to see a young woman with chocolate brown skin and flowing brown hair, wearing a black suit and gray slacks. "Oh I'm sorry..."
"No, I apologize." She turned and bowed, though she flashed a small smile at them.
As she left, Dale whistled. "Whoa. That woman sure is a beauty."
"Young woman, probably." Peter said. "She looks like she's in her late teens."
"Damn." Chip grimaced.
Dale snorted.
"But did you notice?" Peter looked at her departing figure. "She's wearing a pin with the insignia of the Union on it. And that was a soldier's pin too."
"The Union?" Dale gasped. "What's their army doing here?"
"Probably to scout any new enemies." Chip replied. "Plus, the Enact's heavily based off their Flag mobile suit, so they probably think we plagurized them."
Peter sighed. "What's this world coming to?"
Meanwhile, a young man sat at one of the bleachers, staring at the Enact as it continued to show off in the sky. Unlike the other spectators, he had a more amused look than surprised.
"Mobile suit Enact, the AEU's first solar energy-powered mobile suit." Billy Katagiri murmured as he looked on at the suit.
"It's definitely... interesting, don't you think?"
Billy turned around. A blond-haired young man wearing a black suit walked down towards Billy, with the same chocolate-colored young woman at his side. "I guess."
Billy snorted. "What's this? The Union's ace coming to check up on potential enemy forces along with his girlfriend?"
"Of course not." The blond replied. "This is Amina Halabi, an Ensign mobile suit pilot for MSWAD. Though she hasn't been in any real battles, she's definitely a genius when it comes to simulations."
"It's nice to meet you, Mr. Katagiri." She bowed. "I've heard a lot about you from Lieutenant Graham Aker."
"I'm sure they're all... positive?" Billy raised an eyebrow.
"Sure it is." They both took a seat next to him.
"The AEU's falling behind on the orbital elevator development race." Graham said, observing the Enact. "At the very least, they'd like to show their competitive spirit by developing new mobile suits."
"It looks just like the Union Flag though." Amina said. "In fact... it's an exact copy!"
"Not exactly." Billy said. "It looks a little... how should I say? Plumper?"
"Hey you! Over there!"
The three blinked. The Enact's pilot slipped out of his cockpit and yelled at them. "What did you say? HUH?"
Billy could hardly contain his laughter, and Amina giggled.
Graham raised an eyebrow. "At least the hearing system's good."
The pilot blinked as he glanced at Amina. "Ohohoho! What a cutie! HEY GIRL! YOU WANNA GO ON A DATE SOMETIME?"
"Patrick's making a fool of himself." Dale grinned. "What a joke."
"Hey hey." Peter frowned. "That's a Union soldier making fun of our mobile suit. Show some European pride, soldiers."
"Uh... yes sir."
The spectators laughed at Patrick's 'humor.'
Meanwhile, two mobile suits were dropping from the sky next to the orbital elevator.
The faster one was a white, rather naked mobile suit with a blue torso extended to it's shoulders with white trim. Unlike the Exia, it also had blue skirt and knee armor.
The other one behind it was slightly more naked, with a red torso and shoe trim. Yet, a big red airplane-looking Subflight Lifter was attached to it's back for improved flight abilities to make up for it's nakedness.
Both had an interesting generator attached to their backs. They both emitted a green particle that, from a distance, made them look like falling stars from space.
"Lockon's already in position, Soran." Souji said, then gasped as he realized he had just said Setsuna's name. "Whoops."
"My name is not Soran, Souji Shirotsuki." Setsuna stated. "I am Setsuna F. Seiei, Gundam Meister of Celestial Being."
"I know. Sorry." Souji sighed. Soran was no longer the frightened, unconfident boy he was in the past. But he had gained a colder personality instead, making it harder for him to approach his old friend.
"Exusia, destination confirmed." Setsuna said with a monotone voice. "GN Particles will be deactivated at arrival point."
"Showtime..." Souji murmured. "Gundam Alauda, arriving at destination point."
At the Training Ground's security station, one soldier's computer began to beep. He pressed a button and gasped as he saw two unknown mobile suits falling towards the Ground. "Captain, two unknown mobile weapons approaching."
"What?" The captain immediately got up, prompting the other soldiers to quickly locate the mobile suit. "Which unit is it from? The Union? Human Reform League?"
Another soldier gasped. "There's no response on our radar! It's been jammed!"
"Use the camera then!"
The small camera outside of the station focused in on the mobile suit at high rez. They all gasped in surprise, horror, and wonderment at the unknown mobile suits.
"An unknown?" Patrick frowned as the station communicated to him. "But why now- ACK!" He cringed as his communication got jammed.
The spectators were equally shocked at seeing the two falling lights. It was a beautiful sight, but some were more concerned if it was an enemy.
"A mobile suit?" Billy frowned upon seeing it. "I didn't know they had a weapon like that?"
"That weapon..." Amina gasped, sparking the attention of the two men. "I've seen those mobile suits before..."
"You have? Where?"
A flashback surged through Amina's memory, of being left behind by Soran and Emir. Then that mobile suit appeared, glowing in that radiant green light. It was her saviour. And now it flew in the form of two different colored mobile suits, with that same light.
"My childhood... Krugis..." Amina could barely say anything.
"What did you say?" Graham asked.
They couldn't get any farther on their conversation. The two mobile suits have landed and turned to face the Enact.
"Whoa. That's definitely a Flag copy." Souji remarked.
Setsuna stayed silent.
"The hell are those things?" Chip frowned. "I've never seen those mobile weapons before."
"Neither have I." Dale said. "You think they're friend or foe?"
"Judging by the way they're staring at the Enact, I'd have to say the latter." Peter said. "This doesn't look good for Patrick."
"What should we do, sir?"
"Let's observe for now." Peter commanded. "We'll strike later."
One of the men in front took out his cellphone. "Enact! Can you come in Enact! Patrick! Dammit! It's not connecting!"
"What happened to the communications?" Graham asked.
"That mobile suit..." Amina muttered. "It can do things other mobile suits cannot."
A man walked down the steps. "Everyone! You've been advised to leave the area immediately!" Several men jumped out of their seats and started for the exit except for a few.
"They don't know who's mobile suit that is, huh?" Peter murmured. "This just makes the situation more confusing."
No one noticed as Patrick slipped back into the Enact's cockpit, turning the mobile suit on. "Hey hey. Who are you working for? The Union? The Human Reform League? Either way, you've just stepped into enemy territory. And I'm not gonna let you go that easily!"
"Whoa." Souji raised an eyebrow. "Didn't expect the AEU to be so brave."
"That Colasour's gonna die." Dale turned around in shame. "I hate the guy, but I can't bare to watch!"
"You think he'll die, chief?" Chip asked.
"Like I said before, we can't be certain of anything." Peter replied. "Though... I have bad feelings about this.
"Patrick, what's he doing?" One of the AEU guys snapped. "Doesn't he realized how much it cost to make that suit?"
"Actually, this might be a good thing. Seeing as Patrick is the AEU's ace." Another man grinned. "If he succeeds in defeating them, the Enact's value will go up."
"You bastards." Patrick said smugly. "Do you have any idea who I am? I'm AEU's Patrick Colasour! I'm the special expert in battle simulations! I won't let you guys show otherwise!"
"Conceited, much?" Souji said.
The Enact's forearm opened up, and it drew a stick with a needle attached: a sonic blade. The sonic blade began to rotate at extreme speeds, causing everyone to cover their ears in pain.
"Idiot!" Dale yelled.
"Aghhh!" Chip screamed.
"The Enact's definitely a top-of-the-line mobile suit." Peter said, unfazed by the rotating blade. "But those mobile suits are standing still. It's as if they aren't frightened at all by the Enact."
"Take this!" Patrick roared charging towards the blue mobile suit!
"Exusia, eliminating target," was Setsuna's reply.
Exusia eyes flashed. The Enact attempted to stab Exusia with it's sonic blade, but it drew a silver sword from it's left arm and sliced the Enact's arm off! It's arm fell to the ground with a thud.
"What the-" Graham exclaimed.
Amina gasped.
"Damn." Peter whistled.
And all the other spectators were silent, except for the sound of their mouths dropping wide.
"Very efficient, Setsuna." Souji nodded approvingly. "I'm sure Tieria would be proud."
"Why you...!" Patrick growled. "You just don't get it, do you?"
The Enact immediately fired a bullet from it's linear rifle, which Exusia dodged easily by twisting. The strange mobile suit quickly drew a beam saber from behind it's shoulder, slicing off the Enact's rifle!
"I'M-"
Exusia sliced off it's right arm with it's GN Claymore.
"-SPECIAL-"
Exusia sliced off it's head with it's GN Beam Saber.
"-FAMOUS-"
Then the mobile suit returned it's beam saber and claymore back to it's resting sheaths.
"-SIMULATIONS EXPERT!"
The Enact fell to the ground with a thud.
And the spectators couldn't move. They were all too shocked. Some were frightened that the unknowns would attack them if they had made one small step.
Graham apparently wasn't as he snatched a spectator's binoculars. He looked through them right at the unknowns, hoping for some sort of identification. He found his mark right on the forehead. "Gun...dam...? Is that the name of the mobile suit?"
"It's called Gundam?" Amina repeated.
"That thing sure is a beast." Peter said. "It took the Enact down in less than ten seconds."
"Should we consider it an enemy?" Dale asked.
"Now we should." Peter responded. "It just destroyed our mobile suit. Come on guys, let's grab our Hellions and go raise hell!"
"Yes sir!"
"Good job, Setsuna." Souji communicated. "We sure gave a lasting impression on the AEU."
"Exusia and Alauda, first phase complete." Setsuna reported. "Moving on to the second phase."
Light began to emit from the generators attached to the mobile suits' backs. The generators itself began to rotate, causing them to fly into the air.
"That light's causing them to fly." Amina observed. "So that's how the mobile suit from before was able to stay in the air without propulsion."
"Bastard! Where did you go?"
They looked down to see Patrick jump out of the remains of the Enact. "You bastard! I'll get you for this!"
"He let the pilot live?" Amina asked.
"I see..." Graham frowned. "Although they destroyed the new mobile suit, they spared the pilot. But the mobile suit purposely targeted that mobile suit, despite it before a top-secret AEU project. Should that be taken as some sort of warning? If that's so, the AEU won't take this lightly."
The sirens began to blare. Several mass-produced AEU mobile suits known as the Hellion rolled out of the warehouses and flew to the air in jet form. Target: Gundam.
Command Room, Ptolemaios
"Units loaded, mission mode at ready. Exusia and Alauda have completed the first phase within the alloted time." The brown-haired girl wearing a white spacesuit said as she typed into the computer. Her name is Christina Sierra. "Now entering the second phase."
"Setsuna's doing things perfectly, as usual." Lasse Aeon said at the front of the command room. He had light brown skin and black hair. "He didn't even need Souji's help."
"If he did need help with one mobile suit, then he wouldn't be qualified to be in Celestial Being." Lichtendahl Tsery said next to him. He had white skin with light brown hair.
"Don't talk during the mission!" Christina snapped. "We're entering the third phase."
"Don't be so rigid, Christina." A woman entered the room. She had long dark brown hair with creamy pale skin. She is Celestial Being's tactical forecaster, Sumeragi Li Noriega. "It's Celestial Being's first performance, so let's go all out!"
Christina gasped upon realization. "EHHH? You're drinking alcohol?"
"Seriously?" Lichty was equally surprised.
"It's all right!" Sumeragi protested. "I'm just the strategist. The rest is up to you guys." She took a big swig of her drink.
The girl facing opposite of Christina typed away at her computer, ignoring what they were doing. She had long pink hair and a blank stare on her face. Name: Feldt Grace.
"Container loading complete." She stated. "Kyrios is entering the catapult deck. Adunai will follow."
The containers surrounding the Ptolemaios stopped rotating. Within the center of the ship, a single aircraft was being sent down by a platform. It was an orange colored jet with black and white trim.
"This is it Hallelujah. This is what you've been waiting for." Allelujah spoke to himself inside Kyrios. He smiled sadly as he put his helmet on. "I'm sort of sad though."
"Kyrios has arrived at the catapult deck." Feldt reported. "Fixing catapult energy to 520. Kyrios has entered linear field. Preparations complete. The timing is up to you."
"I have control." Allelujah responded. "Kyrios, Allelujah Haptism, commencing intervention."
He pressed the button on Kyrios's main control stick, thrusting Kyrios forward on the catapult. It launched itself out with a burst of GN particles from it's back boosters.
"Continuing with Adunai." Feldt said. "Entering catapult."
The next unit to come down was not one jet, but three. Each was colored bronze, and each also had a black streak right down the middle.
Origen sighed. "Am I a hypocrite, to scold others when they are worried, yet I am worried myself? Well, that doesn't matter anymore."
"Catapult energy stable." Feldt said. "The Adunai Flyer has entered the linear field. The timing is transferred to you."
"Adunai, Origen Admantus, beginning operation!"
The Adunai Flyer immediately zoomed out of Ptolemaios. It was soon followed after by two other units: It's Leg Flyer and Chest Flyer.
Human Reform League Orbital Elevator, Heaven's Pillar
The orbital elevator is a huge elevator that extends from Earth to space. The reason for this elevator was to provide transportation to the two areas, as well as transporting solar energy to the entire world.
Each nation had their own elevator. Heaven's Pillar was the Human Reform League's orbital elevator, and today was a special day for them.
"Reporting from the Orbital Elevator, Heaven's Pillar." The newswoman reported. "This self-sufficient station is now holding a party to commemorate it's tenth anniversary. The party is being held inside the elevator, with attendance including ambassadors, military men..."
"Would you like a drink?" A waiter asked the young woman in front of him.
She turned around. She had two long braids with chinese hats on each bob. She had creamy white skin, wearing a purple chinese dress. Her name is Wang Liu Mei.
The man blushed, thinking she was beautiful.
She smiled. "Yes please."
Liu Mei floated towards him and took the cup with the straw and giggled. "Having your face turn red isn't very manly, you know."
"Ah..." He turned away, embarrassed.
She giggled again and floated away, taking a sip of her drink.
"Wang Liu Mei?"
She blinked and turned around to see a strange-looking young man floating towards her. He had long blond hair and wore strange clothes: a white tight tank top with yellow trim. Same with his pants.
"Hmmm?" She raised an eyebrow at him. "What is someone from Team Trinity doing here?"
"I came to watch the show." He winked at her. "And please call me Gabriel, Ms. Liu Mei."
"Trying to flirt with me will get you nowhere, Gabriel." She turned away from them.
Suddenly, another young man floated towards her. He had short, brown hair with a braid wearing a blue, male chinese dress. He is Liu Mei's loyal servant, Hong Long.
"It is time, my lady." He said.
Her eyes widened. "It's finally beginning. Celestial Being's..."
"...Gundam Meisters..." Gabriel finished.
Back at the bottom of the AEU's orbital elevator, a battle was occuring in the sky. Alauda and Exusia were both engaged in combat against six AEU Hellions, who were firing a storm of bullets at them.
They dodged the storm easily by moving out of the way. The Hellions were persistant, turning around and firing again.
"These guys are good." Peter murmured inside of a Hellion. "The mobility of their mobile suits is superb."
Setsuna scoffed. Exusia's GN Claymore attached to it's left arm arose, revealing a GN Vulcan. It fired continuously, with each bullet missing. One Hellion took that as a weakness and attempted to charge at Exusia, but the pilot screamed in horror as the mobile suit sliced right through him!
Another Hellion flew behind Exusia and attempted to fire a surprise attack. Suddenly, his Hellion was sliced in half and exploded! Behind it, Alauda floated in the air with a double-bladed beam saber in it's hand.
"Don't count me out." Souji said. "I'm just as good as Setsuna."
"Sir, what should we do?" Chip cried.
"Reinforcements are arriving." Peter calmly said. "Be patient and defend yourself."
Peter turned off the communications and barely dodged a blast from Exusia's GN Vulcan. "Still, these mobile suits are very frightening to do battle with. I'm not sure if I'll make it out alive."
Another explosion occured. The third Hellion unit was destroyed by Alauda's GN Machine Guns on it's Subflight Lifter.
"Got him." Souji murmured. "Still, it's strange that they're so low on number. You'd think-"
His thoughts were cut off as a rain of bullets fell upon the mobile suits. Souji and Setsuna both dodged in time.
"Just as I thought." Setsuna said. "The AEU has installed hangers within their Orbital Elevator."
"Tch! Reinforcements!" Souji yelled, firing it's machine guns! Each blast missed as each split into groups, assaulting the mobile suits!
"Hah! Let's do this!" Dale roared, flying towards the red mobile suit!
"Dale!" Peter gasped. "Don't underestimate them now that we have help! They're still very powerful!"
Back on the ground, a white mobile suit that looked very similar to the other Gundams laid hidden behind some rocks. It had dark green armor covering most of it's body, blending in with the small patches of green grass on the rocks.
Inside of the mobile suit was Lockon and an orange ball called Haro. Haro was a special program, designed for the purpose of protecting the user as he sniped down the targets. It could talk too!
"Lockon! Reinforcements approaching! Reinforcements approaching!" Haro exclaimed.
Lockon chuckled. "That's just like Setsuna, to get in over his head. I doubt Souji will do anything to stop him from doing something rash."
He sat up and took the aiming system attached to the top of the cockpit. He leveled it with the appearance of a sniper aiming at a target with a sniper rifle.
"Let's do this, Haro!" Lockon grinned. "Gundam Dynames and Lockon Stratos's first battle!"
Exusia dodged other blasts from the Hellions' linear rifle, but the overwhelming firepower stopped it from attacking. Meanwhile, Alauda attempted to get attacks in, but the Hellions kept dodging and attacking.
"This is bad Setsuna!" Souji cried. "I can't fight back!"
"Tch!" Setsuna grimaced, firing the Exusia's shoulder-mounted GN Machine Cannons. The attacks were powerful, but the Hellions still dodged.
"There's only two of them! As long as we swarm them, we can take them out!" Dale yelled confidently. "Attack!"
He was cut off. A beam from the ground pierced a cloud and struck through his Hellion, killing him!
"Dale!" Peter and Chip cried.
"Where did it attack from?" A soldier cried. He too was cut off, as another beam struck right through his mobile suit!
"Lockon?" Setsuna announced.
"It's about time!" Souji exclaimed.
Dynames held a huge sniper rifle in it's hand, targeting the Hellions flying the sky. It's 'V'-shaped emblem lowered to cover it's eyes, revealing a circular scope on it's forehead. It calmly laid on the ground, firing the enemies as they attempted to figure out who was attacking them.
"Dynames, sniping the targets!" Lockon yelled, firing more beams from Dynames' GN Sniper Rifle. They were very accurate and precise, destroying three other Hellions!
Peter clenched his teeth. "We need to retreat!"
"What?" Chip gasped. "But what about revenge for Dale?"
"We can't defeat them in our current state!" Peter yelled. "We have to get outta here!"
"Urghh... yes sir..." Chip muttered.
The two Hellions flew away at full speeds, with two other Hellions following. That unfortunate pair was met by Alauda and Exusia, who blocked their way. Exusia quickly sliced through one with it's GN Claymore as Alauda slashed through the other with it's double-bladed GN Beam Saber.
Exia's eyes flashed. "Second phase..."
Dynames's emblem arose, with it's eyes flashing as well. "...complete..."
Alauda's eyes flashed last. "Now it's up to those guys..."
Back at the AEU's Training Ground parking lot, Graham, Billy, and Amina sat inside the former's van.
Billy turned to Graham. "You think those mobile suits attacked the AEU in order to warn them?"
He nodded. "The AEU's trying to show the world they have more military strength than what they can have. This is probably a warning to the government."
"How do you figure that?"
"You should ask the Gundam pilots." Graham replied with a smile. "Still, I don't think the AEU will take this lying down. What do you make of all this, Ensign Halabi."
Amina was staring out the window in search of the Gundams, but no such luck. "I don't know either. But now that I think about it, those two Gundams were different than the ones I encountered as a child."
"Really?"
She turned to her superior. "The first one I saw had an overflowing green aura enveloping it. Those two had the same light, but not as much as the previous."
"Hmmm...?" Billy didn't know what to think, so he responded with this. "I wonder what the future has in store for us now."
Human Reform League, Orbiting Satellite Station
In space, each orbital elevator had it's own station. These stations were connected by a chain of satellites, although they didn't serve much purpose. They were for military purposes only.
Inside of the station, a soldier frowned as a few pop-ups appeared on his screen. "Another sensor went off. There's a lot of debris floating around huh?"
"At least they aren't as big as they usually are." The soldier next to him said.
"I'm sure some debris from an old satellite got ripped out."
"Make sure we're on high alert." Their captain said, walking behind them. "Don't forget that they're holding a ceremony within Heaven's Pillar."
"Roger."
The soldier then amplified their big screen, and everyone gasped.
"What is that?" The captain exclaimed.
"I'm amplifying it now." The solider typed a few buttons.
The screen amplified to get closer. Several mobile suits were attempting to break into the satellites! Lightwave shields blocked their path though, putting up a fight against these suits.
"Are those mobile suits?" The captain gasped.
"They're attempting to break through the shields using debris!" The soldier exclaimed. "But they're being buffered by the shield! Do they want to die?"One of the mobile suits exploded! "I knew it!"
"Then they're only at the substructure..." He murmured.
"Are they terrorists, sir?" The soldier asked.
"I'm positive." The captain replied. "Prepare the third airborne team to scramble!"
The alarms went off. Pilots rushed into the mobile suit deck fully clothed, wearing a green baggy suit with a helmet with one eyehole. Three Tieren Space Types awaited the pilots. They were two, rather bulky mobile suits with one red eye.
A man with black hair and light brown skin clenched his teeth as he placed his helmet on. "Dammit. They attack us on the day of the ceremony..."
"Lieutenant Seiryu Yamato!" A soldier quickly floated toward him, with a rather frightened tone. "I've only had a hundred hours of space training-"
"It doesn't matter!" Seiryu barked, hopping into his Tieren. "Stop them no matter what! You'll get a double promotion if you do!"
Within a hallway of the orbital elevator's station, a peculiar old soldier floated through it. His most distinguishing mark was the scar on his left eye. A few more soldiers followed after him, informing him of the situation.
"Hellions, you say?" He muttered. "That AEU... This is what happens when you do your damned arms trading to third-party nations!"
Back at the party room, several uniformed soldiers began to float towards the center hole to leave.
Wang Liu Mei smiled. "Wow. They're leaving in crowds."
"Should we follow?" Hong Long asked.
"Of course not." She replied. "But, Ms. Sumeragi's predictions were right on the nose about this."
Gabriel also stared through the window. "This is Celestial Being's main branch's debut. Just how do they fare, compared to us?"
"Launching!" Seiryu announced, flying out of the deck along with two other Tierens. They began flying towards the seven Hellions who were attempting to break through the satellites.
"Lieutenant! We're the only ones out here!" The same soldier from before cried.
"That doesn't matter!" Seiryu roared at the trainee. "We need to protect the civilians!"
The three circled behind the satellite rings and fired the machine guns on the mobile suits' left arms. The Hellions were slightly faster, dodging every bullet. Right above the action, two other Hellions flew toward the station with a missile-filled box.
"Shit!" Seiryu gasped. "They've got missiles!"
The box opened up, with three missiles launched directly at the station!
"They've secured the route for a direct hit!" The soldier gasped. "We can't intercept!"
The captain gritted his teeth in despair.
Suddenly, three beams shot out from an unknown direction, destroying all three missiles! The impact caused the entire station to quake! The party-goers felt the impact in confusion.
"What just happened?" A civilian asked.
Wang Liu Mei closed her eyes, a smile on her face. "Gundam."
Four jet planes flashed from the vast reaches of space, heading towards the satellite station. "Gundam Kyrios and Adunai."
"What the hell is that?" Seiryu cried.
"Ms. Sumeragi's predictions were correct, as usual." Allelujah muttered from within Kyrios.
"Yeah." Origen agreed.
The Hellions fired at the two Gundam jet planes, but they all missed because of their superior mobility. Kyrios fired from it's GN Submachine Gun, destroying two of them.
"Docking to form Adunai." Origen announced.
The Adunai Flyer folded itself to form the stomach and torso of the Gundam. The Chest Flyer folded itself as well and attached to the top of the Adunai Flyer, becoming the shoulders and head. The Leg Flyer docked underneath the suit, becoming the legs.
"Adunai formed." Origen finished.
"Lieutenant, are those our allies?" The trainee asked.
"I have no idea." Seiryu replied. "They aren't attacking us, but I wouldn't provoke them. Let's just see what they will do."
"Adunai, using GN Mega Cannon." The Meister said. Adunai's 'V' crest rose upward, revealing a small cannon placed within the forehead.
"Fire." The small cannon unleashed a huge burst at three Hellions, destroying them!
"Holy crap!" Seiryu screamed. "What kind of weapon is that?"
"...I think I just crapped my pants, sir." The newbie reported.
"Are they guerillas?" Allelujah snapped. "They're just damned terrorists! Rachel! Tieria!"
Five other Hellions flew towards the station with great speed attempting a suicide attack. However two unknown mobile suits appeared in front of and behind the Hellions. It caused the station's big screen to black out!
"What the-"
"Virtue and Phasma, huh?" Gabriel whispered, amidst several concerned bystanders. "They're definitely overpowering."
The mobile suit behind the Hellion had light-blue armor covering it's chest. It had a triangular-shaped head with flowing silver head. The green light being emitted from it's back complemented it's beautiful look.
"Where did that come from?" A Hellion pilot gasped.
"It's important to look behind you, wherever you go." Rachel mocked them. "I guess that doesn't matter anymore. DIE!"
Phasma drew a stave stored behind it's waist. It emitted a curved beam blade at the tip: it was a beam scythe! It rose the weapon to the air before slicing the two Hellions in front of her!
Virtue was the huge, bulky mobile suit in front of the remaining three Hellions. Black armor covered some parts of the suit, but it was extremely bulky that it seemed like armor was unnecessary.
"Time to show the whole world Celestial Being is serious." Tieria said. "Virtue, commencing intervention."
Virtue held up a gigantic cannon, charging up GN particles. Rachel's eyes widened, and flew out of the way. The Hellions realized too late, as Virtue unleashed a massive beam that doubled the size of Adunai's mega cannon! It easily eliminated the remaining three Hellions.
"Third phase, complete." Tieria reported.
"That was amazing, Tieria..." Rachel said in awe.
"You overdid it, again." Allelujah muttered. "Honestly..."
Origen didn't speak a word.
"Okay men. Time to go." Seiryu ordered calmly. Piss was leaking out of his pants in horror, but he wasn't about to report that.
"Sir, I've pissed my pants as well." The newbie said.
"Shut up!" Seiryu barked, frightened that the guy almost caught on to his small accident. "Let's get back before those unknowns get to us!"
Special Economic Zone: Tokyo
Tokyo was a huge city. Towering buildings and skyscrapers were built firmly into the ground, with thousands of occupants. It had a fair share of green grass, but it was most likely fake. Mt. Fuji was off in the horizon.
"Good morning. It's time for JNN News." The newswoman said. "We have more details concerning the events that took place in the orbital elevator, Heaven's Pillar. In Japan's earlier hours, terrorists in mobile suits attacked the Human Reform League's orbital elevator. Furthermore, unidentified mobile suits have intercepted their attempt. These images were shown by our very own JNN cameraman."
The screen switched to show the two mobile suits (Virtue and Phasma) as they floated triumphantly.
In the crowded cafeteria of the college campus, two young teenagers ran towards the telescreen. The girl had long blond hair while the guy had neck-length brown hair.
The girl stared up at the screen. "What's going on?"
"Apparently, those things stopped the terrorist attack." A man replied.
"A mobile suit?" She asked.
"Which army?" The boy asked.
"No one knows." The man shrugged.
At another table, a young long-haired brunette stared at the screen while sipping a cup of tea. She wore a black tanktop with a short white skirt and sandals. "Wow. Those guys sure did the trick there."
"Francesca?"
The girl blinked and turned around. A young man with short brown hair and a school uniform walked up to her. "I didn't know you were here."
"Maybe I didn't want you to know." She replied with a glare. "Anyways, what do you want, Leon?"
"Eh?" He blinked, startled by Francesca's anger. "Wh- Why are you so mad at-"
"Why do you keep on stalking me?" She growled, getting out her chair. "You keep on following me and following me that it's really creepy. Why?"
Leon backed away. "Wait, Fra-"
Francesca grabbed her stuffs and walked out of the cafeteria, leaving a stupified Leon in his place.
The guys around him laughed. "Man Leon! You'll never get a girl like Francesca! Never!"
"Shut up." Leon muttered. "One of these days, Francesca will be mine."
"You sound like a perv."
The screen flashed back to the newswoman. "We have breaking news. JNN has received a video message from the group claiming responsibility of defeating the terrorists. While we have no information proving it, we still believe what they have to say. We will display the entire message uncut, right now."
The screen switched to an old, bald man sitting in a chair in the center of an unknown room. It was a plain room, with an open window to reveal a foggy view.
"I will now deliver a message to the many people of the world." The man spoke. "We are Celestial Being. We are a private armed organization that utilizes the mobile suit Gundam. The purpose, for which we exist, is to end all warfare on this planet. We do not seek personal gain. To eliminate the hearts of strife is what we stand for. I shall now announce our current intentions for mankind. Domination, energy, religion, whatever reason you have; We will go into battle to stop your intentions. By doing so, we will reform the world. No matter who it is, if they support war, then they will face us."
People around the world was watching this, from the Union, to the AEU, to the Human Reform League. There mouths dropped in shock, as if they couldn't believe what the man was saying.
"We are Celestial Being." He repeated. "We exist as a personal military to end all wars. I repeat-"
At the orbital elevator's station, the scarred man stared at the screen. "Ending all wars, huh?"
"That old man is the ringleader of those mobile suits?" Seiryu gaped.
"...I'm a little scared, sir." The newbie (who's name is Bill Johnson) muttered.
At the AEU's military hospital, Patrick gasped as he watched the video. "It's them! That guy who attacked me was part of that organization!"
Peter and Chip also watched from the same room, visiting Patrick. "Celestial Being? They killed Dale?"
"Those bastards..." Chip growled, his body shaking with anger.
Peter was very angry as well, but he knew when to compose himself. "Calm down, Franklin. We'll get revenge... in due time."
"The world is changing." Wang Liu Mei whispered as she and Hong Long rode a train down the orbital elevator.
In the kingdom of Azadistan, Princess Marina Ismail also watched this video. "They want to end all warfare... with warfare?"
Night fell as Graham drove off in his van across the desert wasteland. "Hahaha! You've gotta be kidding me! Ending violence using violence! What kind of hypocritical organization are you, Celestial Being!"
In an unknown city, an orange-haired man smiled as he stared out to the vast horizon. "It's beginning Ribbons. The time of revolution."
The green-haired man behind him said nothing.
"And it's about time that my plan should start working it's course." He grinned. "Our little servant..."
Back in the Ptolemaios, Allelujah, Tieria, Origen and Rachel watched the video with the rest of Celestial Being's crew.
"Hallelujah, the world will change." Allelujah spoke to himself with a smile.
"I will strike down Earth's evil with my scythe." Rachel whispered. "This is very exciting!"
"Hmph." Origen scowled. "Why must we make such a flashy entrance?"
"Because we will be the judge of mankind." Tieria replied, leveling his glasses.
"Well then, let's celebrate the completion of our debut!" Rachel hopped to space and grabbed Christina's seat. "Let's drink up!"
"Ehhh?" Christina turned around. "Not you too!"
"Huh?"
Lichty suppressed a laugh. "We can't have two drunks running around this ship."
"Honestly..." Lasse smiled.
Sumeragi was the only one in the ship with mixed feelings. "Still, the things that we're doing is very... bad..."
Back on Earth, Lockon switched off his holographic computer. "It's beginning... no, it's already begun. We can't stop now."
"Don't stop! Don't stop! Don't stop!" Haro repeated.
"We're lighting a fire under Earth's seat." Lockon said. "You know that right? Setsuna? Souji?"
Setsuna took off his helmet and stared at the three Gundams. "Yeah, I know."
"Sorry, but I'm in this organization for more than ending violence." Souji responded. "But I know my duties, and I'll fulfill them. After all, we're Celestial Being's..."
"...Gundam Meisters..." Setsuna finished.
So what did you think of the rewrite of the rewrite guys? Did you love it? Did you hate it? Please show me in a review!
Anyways, most of the characters didn't change. In fact, I added new characters that will be prominent in each nation. Hopefully, you'll get to know and love them as well as the canon characters. The only one who really changed was Naoto Takeuchi, who has become Souji Shirotsuki. He's a lot more cowardly than the previous protagonist, and that's to give him character.
So here's the new mecha profiles. And now, I have reasons for the creation of each mobile suit. Took me awhile to make them up.
GN-001M Gundam Exusia
The Gundam Exusia was the first third-generation mobile suit to be created by Krung Thep after the original Gundam Meisters were killed. Originally, this mobile suit was designed to be a close-ranged Seven Swords System mobile suit, but time restrictions halted that plan. The result was a well-balanced suit with more equal amounts of close-range and long-ranged weaponry, although it's user preferred the former. The mobile suit is lightly armored to take advantage of the solar furnace's advanced propulsion system. This mobile suit was assigned the third-generation Gundam Meister Setsuna F. Seiei.
Model Number: GN-001M
Code Name: Gundam Exusia
Unit Type: Prototype General-Purpose Mobile Suit
Manufacturer: Krung Thep
Operator: Celestial Being
Pilot: Setsuna F. Seiei
Accommodation: Pilot only, cockpit in torso
Dimensions: Overall height 18.3 meters
Weight: Max gross weight 57.2 tons
Armor Materials: E-Carbon, GN Composite Armor
Power Plant: GN Drive
Special Features: Optical Camouflage, Assault Container, Trans-Am System (later on), GNR-001E GN Arms Type-E
Looks: It's still the same Exia in terms of body shape. It has added blue knee and skirt armor to make up for the lost weight in beam daggers. White trim on each piece of armor. The 'V'-shaped emblem is still white. Red shoes.
Weapons: GN Claymore, later upgraded into GN Sword Rifle, stored in left arm, hand-carried in use; 2x GN Vulcan, stored in forearms, hand-operated in use; 2x GN Machine Cannon, fire-linked, stored in shoulders; 2x GN Beam Saber, stored behind shoulders, hand-carried in use; GN Shield, mounted on left arm;
Comments: Are you guys shocked? Appalled? Any feelings at all? The reason for creating this mobile suit was to let people know that I will focus on the canon protagonists as well, so that you don't think my OCs will be dominant in the story. Anyway, Exusia's weaponry is actually based off the Wing Gundam's, minus the Buster Rifle. I still wanted Exusia to be primarily a close-ranged suit, but it didn't exactly work out (in terms of how many close-ranged weapons there are compared to long-ranged). Still, it's a pretty impressive mobile suit. I HOPE YOU GUYS DON'T HATE ME. Expect other changes to the canon protagonists' mobile suits as well.
GNL-XA Gundam Alauda
The Gundam Alauda was the first of three prototype mobile suits in Krung Thep's special L-Project. They were originally designed to be support units to the primary Gundams, but ended up as strong as them. The Alauda was designed with close-ranged air combat in mind, being granted a special Subflight Lifter to easily fight in the air. It's armament is very conventional, being able to react to different situations with variability. It's speed surpasses the Exusia through the enhanced, combined propulsion of the GN Drive and the Subflight Lifter. This mobile suit was assigned to third-generation Gundam Meister Souji Shirotsuki.
Model Number: GNL-XA
Code Name: Gundam Alauda
Unit Type: Prototype Close-Quarters Combat Mobile Suit
Manufacturer: Krung Thep
Operator: Celestial Being
Pilot: Souji Shirotsuki
Accommodation: Pilot only, cockpit in torso
Dimensions: Overall height 18.4 meters
Weight: Max gross weight 58.2 tons
Armor Materials: E-Carbon, GN Composite Armor
Power Plant: GN Drive
Special Features: Optical Camouflage, Subflight Lifter, Assault Container, Eclatant Lumiere (later on), Trans-Am System (later on)
Looks: Resembles the Astraea more than how the Exia did. Instead, the entire mobile suit is colored crimson red with white trim like the Justice. The torso is colored black. The Subflight Lifter rests on its back and can fold out to spread it's wings, with the same colors as the Alauda
Weapons: 2x GN Beam Saber, stored behind shoulders, hand-carried in use, can be combined to be double-bladed; 2x GN Boomerang, stored behind the waist, hand-carried in use, doubles as beam daggers; 2x GN Vulcan, stored in forearms, hand-operated in use; GN Shield, mounted on left arm;
Optional Weapons: Subflight Lifter: 2x GN Beam Machine Gun, fire-linked, stored on top of jetpack; 2x GN Beam Blade, mounted on wings; GN Hammer;
Comments: Yup, this is the new Alauda. I've finally come up with a reason for it's creation, other than 'I created it 'cause I wanted to'! The 'L' is the first intial of my last name, so there's a reason for that too. You'll first notice that it isn't as overpowered as the previous Alauda. I realized I kinda gave it too much weapons when I first created it, especially with the Subflight Lifter. It's got two beam sabers, as opposed to the single double-bladed one. It's even got beam boomerangs. Now it really represents the Justice. It even almost looks like it! The Alauda is faster than the Exusia, but only by a little bit. Also, the Eclatant Lumiere will be introduced later when the mobile suits are upgraded.
GNL-XB Gundam Phasma
The Gundam Phasma was the second of three prototype mobile suits in Krung Thep's special L-Project. The Phasma has an enhanced stealth system that surpasses the optical camouflage each Gundam is equipped with. Eventually the creators realized that they had an invisible weapon on their hands, and completed the ghostly image with the Grim Reaper's weapon: the scythe. The Phasma was lightly equipped to be extremely fast and extremely terrifying, and it's true to it's title as it's wielded by the really hyper death-defying Gundam Meister Rachel Apokata.
Model Number: GNL-XB
Code Name: Gundam Phasma
Unit Type: Prototype Stealth Mobile Suit
Manufacturer: Krung Thep
Operator: Celestial Being
Pilot: Rachel Apokata
Accommodation: Pilot only, cockpit in torso
Dimensions: Overall height 16.9 meters
Weight: Max gross weight 48.1 tons
Armor Materials: E-Carbon, GN Composite Armor
Power Plant: GN Drive
Special Features: Optical Camouflage, Stealth Cloak, Assault Container, Trans-Am System (later on)
Looks: Looks just like Nadleeh with turquoise chest armor and a triangular head. It's hair is silver instead of black, because it's much easier to see. The 'V'-shaped emblem is just like Deathscythe's.
Weapons: GN Beam Scythe, stored behind waist, hand-carried in use; GN Claw Arm, mounts GN Cannon; 4-Tube GN Missile Launcher, mounted in skirt, each contains six missiles; GN Shield, mounted on left arm;
Comments: The Phasma hasn't changed much. I've taken out the vulcans and the machine guns because I thought they were useless. Instead, I equipped it to be more versatile. The missile launcher and cannon are for long-range, and the claw arm and scythe are for short-range. And it's got the Stealth Cloak, which is a very powerful (and frightening) weapon in the hands of the psycho Rachel. But yeah, it's still based off the Deathscythe and Shenlong.
GNL-XC Gundam Adunai
The Gundam Adunai was the final prototype mobile suit produced in Krung Thep's special L-Project. Because of Adunai's large body weight and height, the creators decided to create a Core Flyer system to give it an escape pod in case of emergencies. Adunai is heavily armed for artillery combat alongside Virtue, except it has a more conventional arsenal. It has giant beam sabers for close combat and the mega cannon and rifles for long-ranged combat. Because of it's extremely difficult-to-use arsenal, it needed a well-disciplined pilot. And so it was given to the mysterious Gundam Meister Origen Admantus.
Model Number: GNL-XC
Code Name: Gundam Adunai
Unit Type: Prototype Transformable Heavy Assault Mobile Suit
Manufacturer: Krung Thep
Operator: Celestial Being
Pilot: Origen Admantus
Accommodation: Pilot only, cockpit in torso
Dimensions: Overall height 19.6 meters
Weight: 68.4 tons
Armor Materials: E-Carbon, GN Composite Armor
Power Plant: GN Drive
Special Features: Optical Camouflage, Core Fighter System, Assault Container, Trans-Am System (later on)
Looks: Looks like the ZZ with Virtue's head. Instead of the Double Zeta's colors, the blue is bronze and everything else is black. It doesn't have the giant backpack, and it has two 'V'-shaped emblems.
Weapons: GN Mega Cannon, mounted in forehead; 2x GN Missile Launcher, mounted in skirt, twenty-one missiles each; 2x GN Hyper Beam Saber , mounted in shoulders, doubles as fire-linked beam guns in Core Fighter Mode; 2x GN Shield, mounted on shoulders;
Optional Weapons: GN Double Beam Rifle
Comments: Not much change here either. The biggest change (in fact, the only change) is the Double Beam Rifle. I thought the Cannon-Rifle was a bit too overpowered for Adunai. Thus, I just gave it the Double Zeta's double-barrel rifle instead. It's the same as before.
Long intro chapter again. Sorry about the rewrite guys, but I really wanted to do this. I wanted to revise this in so many ways, so I rewrote it again. A rewrite of a rewrite hahaha. Anyways, please click that review button and just tell me how I did. Tell me if it's good or bad. I don't care if it's very harsh critism (though I don't love it, I'll still accept it). Just tell me... something.
Alright, so review!