Hiya! Kidd here with a new story. I hope I can finish this one... Anywho, I'm aware the formats a little funky, it's suppose to be, it has a 'hidden' message in it. Not all chapters will be like this, cuz it took forever to write! The format for this was inspired by Ellen Hopkins' novels, I've read Burned and Identical. Both very good.


Murders are suppose to be bad right?

Bringing death

To everyone around them. I guess

that's how most people view them. But

not me, If it wasn't for a certain murder

I would be dead. He was there to save

me. I was so grateful, I gave him food,

a safe place for him to come back to.

A beautiful friendship blossomed

between us. He was keeping me

alive. Keeping me alive, and for that, I

am thankful to him. Without his

kindness, I would have taken my own

life. I would have been sent straight to

hell from

here . That boy was truly my Saviour.

He understood me, much more then

my dead parents did. He knew what

it was like to do bad things. He knew

what it was like to have someone be

better than knew envy. He

knew me. He knew me better than

I knew myself.

It was scary to know I lost myself

like that. But it was nice to have

someone to help

me find myself

again. He was there to help

To make me better. For the time

he was in my life I considered

myself human again. I considered

myself whole. He was the one that

could fix

my broken soul, I was saved. I was saved

by a fallen angel before I fell completely.

I was loved again. Then the day came,

for his final murder. He confessed his

love, promised he wouldn't get hurt,

he would see me again. Did you really

promised me?

That was just another painful hope lost.


Iffy, huh? I know the words to the side may be off a little, I lined them up the best I could. Read, Review and all that good stuff.

~Kidd