Hi, this is my restart of an old story and my first fanfict. I really hope that you guys will like my story and please tell me how i can improve or any suggestions.
There he was, standing in front of the house of what looked like a normal muggle home
There he was, standing in front of the house of what looked like a normal muggle home. Meanwhile it was the exact opposite. It was the summer home for the Headmistress of Merlin's Academy, Florence Dorny. He walked up to the door and rang the door bell. He remember the last time he has seen Florence he had asked her to do a favor for him a little over a month ago. At the moment the door opened. Florence Dorny was a short middle aged woman with black curly hair and sparkling blue eyes. Once she opened the door, her face turned into a shocked expression.
"Hello Florence," the old man said with a smile. Florence face came back to reality, "Hello, come in, come in," she said to the man, who walked into the house. Florence looked outside and locked the door, turned on the lights.
Florence walked into the kitchen and the man followed her in. "Would you like some tea?" He nodded. Florence looked pale and while Florence was getting the tea ready, she kept on turning back at the man who was in her house. It's not everyday that one of Florence's old friends to come and visit her randomly. The man noticed this and said, "Florence, why do you look so pale? Last time I came, you had some color on you."
Florence turned and looked at the man who sat at her kitchen table, she said while laughing, "Well Albus, it's not everyday you have an unexpected visitor, who happened to be an old friend from Europe, at 11:30 at night. At least," she paused. "You called 5 minutes before you showed up last time." Albus Dumbledore looked at her when she said this and smiled. "True Florence, but there is a major time difference between England and America, so you have to excuse me for random night time appearance."
"Why have you come, Albus? I know it's not just to check up on the charge you left me."
"How is he doing by the way?" Albus asked. Florence sighed because of his change of subject but answered the man anyway. "He was much work Albus, much work." Albus said, "I did warn you Florence. I barely convinced him to come talk to me, never mind trying to convince him to stay here in America for the summer in another school." "True Albus, you did warn me. You also believed that my students can change him." Florence stated. "Well, did they?" Albus questioned with a sparkle in his eye. "Yes, quite a bit actually, but sometimes his old self comes out. We can't change everything about the boy. He has been brought up 16 years or so with these ideas smashed into his brain." Florence stated. "Well, then that's all we can ask for out of the young man, especially what he has been through." Albus said with disappointment. "Albus I've been meaning to ask you," Florence said, "how did the child finally come to talk to you?" At this Albus smile faded and Florence already regretted asking this question. Albus then said "Because his mother was murdered by his father on the orders of the Dark Lord. He had no one else to go to." Florence sat back in her chair quickly in shock, afraid to ask her next question, "Why did the Dark Lord tell his father to murder his wife?" Albus looked ashamed, and then he said, "To show that he was still loyal to him." Florence jumped in rage, and her face turned to a deep red. Florence started screaming "To show where his loyalties are? Who does these kinds of things? Oh, if the Dark lord wasn't who he was I'd show him a thing or two." Albus just stated with no expression, "Unfortunately, he is the dark lord." Florence then calmed down and sat in the chair she was in before.
There was a silence pause in the room, but Florence broke it when she asked "Now, Albus, why have you come?" She didn't mean to be so rude, but she knew if she didn't push Albus wasn't going to tell her anytime soon.
Albus signed. "I went over the prophecy by Merlin that we were talking about last time I was here." Florence eyes went wide but she stayed silent for Dumbledore to continue on. "You see, going over the prophecy, the prophecy does state certain "soldiers" in help defeating Voldemort. However, there is more. The prophecy deals with a certain amount of people. This is what I'm trying to figure out. When Merlin speaks he talks of 8 soldiers, and the founders. However he also speaks of guardians that are formed from each soldier and founder and they will create an equal balance for the world's liking. We need to break this prophecy up piece by piece, to figure out who these people are." Florence nodded in agreement.
There was a slight pause, and then Albus said with a smile, "Florence, I think you should make more tea." Florence looked at him with an expression of confusion and question. "You must tell me details about what happened here with my student. And also… we have a school year to plan." As if Florence was shocked with electricity, her eyes went wide and the sparkle in her eyes came back. Florence understood that Albus already had suspicionson what the prophecy meant, and it possibly dealt with some of her students. "Well Albus, I'll start to make the tea while I tell you everything that happened to the child. Then we shall discuss school activities for the coming year and discuss more on this prophecy."
Albus looked through his glasses with those sparkling eyes and said, "Florence, I might be here longer than expected, because I have a feeling I'll be here until the end of the week." "Albus, I have the same feeling." Florence said with a smile.
The tea whistled and Florence poured the tea into two huge mugs, while Albus listened intently to the story about the student he left at the school. Both of the Heads of the Wizardry schools had smiles on their faces and sparkles in their eyes, waiting to see how the new year will turn out to be. Especially, since they are planning it together.
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