HEY guys! REVIEW! I wanna know what you think, what like/don't like about it. This is the first chapter I have wrote a few more but I havn't finished the whole thing yet! ;) (if u r confused at the start just keep reading, it explains it's self)

I stormed out of the car slamming the door behind me, I could hear his footsteps trying to keep up with me. I marched right up to my brother's front door, I had a key to his place. I walked in and slammed the door in his face.
'Hails, come on please let me in, I love you, I'm sorry!' David pleaded from behind the door.

'Go Away!' I yelled at him.

'Please my beautiful Barakitten.' He continued to beg.

'Fuck off!' I screamed through the door. He didn't reply. I looked through the peep hole in time to see the elevator doors slide shut behind him. I slid down the door and sat on the floor with my head in my hands.

'Strom? Is that you?' my brother Jack said coming out of his room. He was wearing his PJ's and looked exhausted. I just realized he had only got back from tour today. I started to feel really bad for waking him up. Storm was a stupid name he called me because my name is HAILey, get it hail? yeah I know, smart. He saw me sitting on the floor crying and walked over to me. He sat down next to me. he put an arm around me and let me cry against his chest. For a 23 year old he knew just how to comfort me and that was not to ask any questions.

'Jack who is it?' his fiancé Ronnie said coming out looking tired as well. 'Oh hey Hailey, what is it?' she said coming over and sitting on my other side. I tried to talk, I took a deep breath to stop crying. It didn't work.
'Jack?' I said trying to calm down.

'Yeah?'

'Could I live here for I while?' I said trying to joke.

'Sure Hails you stay as long as you want,' he said with a weak smile. We got up and Jack gave me one of his t shirts for pyjamas. I pulled my tooth brush out of the bathroom cabinet. I stayed here a lot, whenever that dick hurt me. I wasn't going to forgive him this time. I usually had spares here. Even some of the clothes I didn't wear often here.

'We are going back to bed because we got back from tour today and my baby sister woke me up in the middle of the night.' Jack said from outside the door. I rolled my eyes

'Kay, night night, Jacky poo!' he hated being called that. I brushed the tugs out of my hair gently and tied it back. My hair was blue, not naturally of course but I bleached and dyed it blue. It was the same colour as my eyes and it looked nice. I washed of my tear stained make up and crawled into bed. I curled up into a ball and remembered the events of the day.

I had come home early from my best friend Shane's house, because I wasn't feeling to good. I had found him with some other girl doing it on my bed. I thought you weren't home till 10! He said looking surprised as I strolled into my room. The girl looked disgusted to be even near him anymore. Sorry I replied sarcastically please continue, but could you drive me to my brothers place when you're done. I was heartbroken, He had got up pulling on his clothes chasing me out the door, yelling I'll call you at the girl in the bed. She looked physically sick, poor thing. She thought he loved her. I squeezed my eyes shut forcing myself to sleep. I woke up to the sound of voices, I heard jack laugh, he was probably watching TV. I put the pillow over my head, it was no use, I wasn't getting back to sleep. I got up and walked into the kitchen to find Alex there, he turned around and smiled at me. I blushed, mostly because I was in PJ's that barely covered my ass.

'Hey Storm.' He said winking at me 'I didn't know you were here?'

'Well I wasn't until about 1 am.' I replied with a grimace

'Ooh what happened to baby Hailey?' he smirked.

'Nothing.' I grunted, I wasn't a baby, I was 21 thanks.

'Awww, please? Tell Uncle Alex!' he said pouting.

'Fine' I said laughing, I launched into the story.

' Daawww, Hailey's having boy troubles.' He said giving me a hug. Jack walked in.

'Alex stop hitting on my sister you perv!' Jack said. I laughed as Alex let me go, he wasn't hitting on me. I wish he was though but Alex was just naturally flirty. I liked him a lot though but to him I was just his best mates little sister. Ronnie strolled into the kitchen, Jack draped an arm over her lazily and kissed her forehead.

'So how was warped?' I asked them casually

'It was great!' said Alex. I was so jealous of All Time Low.

'Maybe next time we go, you'll be there to?' Jack added with a smile.

I laughed. 'Yeah right,' I said sarcastically. I was in a band too. I was the singer/guitarist. My best friend Shane was on Bass. My other friend Harry were on drums. We were really good, we just haven't quite, been discovered yet. We were called Reckless Dreaming.

Alex smirked and Jack was shaking in silent laughter.

'What?' I said confused about what was so funny.

'Go on, tell her Jack,' Alex said sniggering

'Fine, Okay Storm you are kind of coming with us next tour.'

'What!' I managed to choke out.

'Well,' Alex continued for Jack 'well our manager Matt was having trouble finding us a new opening act because We are the in Crowd cancelled on us, Jack mentioned that you had a band and he jumped at the chance.'

'You are kidding me!' I said staring at him seriously. He shook his head sincerely. I jumped on him hugging him. I ran over to Jack and Ronnie and hugged them too.

'I love you guys!' I squealed 'I have to tell the guys, and could you drive me to band practice?' I said pulling out my phone.

Alex laughed 'yeah sure, Ronnie and Jack are going out soon, so we can carpool.'

Pack your bags ladies, we are going on tour. My brother just told me that we are going to be opening for All Time Low on their next tour in two months! Xxx I texted Shane and Harry, in case you are wondering, yeah, I am in a band where I am the only girl. I never really had any 'girl' friends. They were ttoo much work. Shane had been my mest mate forever and I met Harry in highschhol/

Within a minute I had 2 replies

Shane-You are totally kidding.

Harry-yeah right!

I told them I was dead serious and to meet at Harry's house in an hour for practice their replies were mostly just okay see you in a few! I went into my bedroom and pulled on my clothes. It took me a while to find something decent to wear. I eventually found a pair of skinnies and a black JAGK t shirt with blue writing, it went great with my hair. I texted Davis to tell him I was picking up my stuff and if he could put it in boxes.

Okay I will do, I am truly sorry about off this storm xx I sighed at the name. I didn't mind being called Strom it just sounded really weird calling someone that.

Alex, Ronnie and Jack were blasting New Found Glory all the way to Harry's house. Jack was singing along really bad, but Alex sounded like an angel. Ronnie and Jack were going out to lunch. Alex wanted to see the new band, it would have been more romantic if he hadn't said. "Sure, I got nothin' better to do." I started singing along too. I had heard this song a few times so I knew most of the words. We started to sing really loudly, we got a few disapproving stares from pedestrians but we just kept laughing and singing. Jack and Ronnie dropped us off, I headed to Harry's house strolling right past the front door.

'Where are we going?' Alex said, he looked like he has just committed a crime. I laughed and grabbed his hand leading him into Harry's back yard. I walked down the steps to his basement. I did the special band knock.

'Enter.' I heard Shane say creepily from behind the door.

I laughed at my best friend and walked in dragging a confused looking Alex in behind me. We were such weirdo's it was embarrassing. Shane bounded up to me and we did our super-secret handshake that took us hours to perfect.

'Hailey in Daw HOUWSE!' yelled Harry from behind his drum kit.

'Dudes, this is Alex' I said pointing to Alex in the corner who obviously didn't want to interrupt our weird display of affection. 'Alex theses are mah dudes. Shane and Harry. I said motioning to both of them.'

'Hey,' said Shane shaking his hand.

'Nice to meet you man.' Harry said not getting up from behind his drums.