Hybrid

Poem 1

On some unknown islands;

A dingo and a crocodile were friends;

Always hanging around together;

Thinking that it will last forever.

Then two scientists came;

Giving these ground a name;

Capturing everything they could find;

And having an evil plan in their mind;

Our dingo and crocodile;

Were among the hostages;

Thinking about their exile;

And those lost ages.

They would be mutated;

To bring the world in hell;

At the same time, they got mutated;

But something didn't go well.

The two friends disappeared;

A weird creature appeared;

We then named it;

Hybrid.

Author's comment: This fanfiction will have three poems and I think ten chapters (Including the proloque and the epilogue). I first started it in June/July 2011 on my Ipod touch but it wouldn'T be as long as the one I am writing right now. Also, I had to restore my Ipod since it has been months since I didn't updated it so I lost the half-worked fanfic. In August 2011, I started over the fanfic but I had school so I could barely continue it. Then, I became a member of in January 2012 (When I became 18 years old and got my own computer for Christmas). This is my first fanfic so I want your MOST honest opinion(s) about my work so far (I know I was lazy to try to find something tha rims with "mutated"). English is not my main language.