Hybrid
Poem 1
On some unknown islands;
A dingo and a crocodile were friends;
Always hanging around together;
Thinking that it will last forever.
Then two scientists came;
Giving these ground a name;
Capturing everything they could find;
And having an evil plan in their mind;
Our dingo and crocodile;
Were among the hostages;
Thinking about their exile;
And those lost ages.
They would be mutated;
To bring the world in hell;
At the same time, they got mutated;
But something didn't go well.
The two friends disappeared;
A weird creature appeared;
We then named it;
Hybrid.
Author's comment: This fanfiction will have three poems and I think ten chapters (Including the proloque and the epilogue). I first started it in June/July 2011 on my Ipod touch but it wouldn'T be as long as the one I am writing right now. Also, I had to restore my Ipod since it has been months since I didn't updated it so I lost the half-worked fanfic. In August 2011, I started over the fanfic but I had school so I could barely continue it. Then, I became a member of in January 2012 (When I became 18 years old and got my own computer for Christmas). This is my first fanfic so I want your MOST honest opinion(s) about my work so far (I know I was lazy to try to find something tha rims with "mutated"). English is not my main language.
