I decided to try freeverse, since I've read a few and adored the style and, well, freedom of it. This is also my first Harry Potter 'story' (even though I'm working on another). Also, it's fine if you don't agree with which houses I put the next gen characters in, it's just the personalities I decided to give them. I also put them in the birth order that I thought up.
If anyone could give tips on writing freeverse, it'd be appreciated.
First off is
TEDDY LUPIN
walking up those
s... ...
t...
e
...p
... ...s
trips on the third one
falls flat on his face
gets it honest, though
sits down, his now
brightredhair
covered up by the HAT
w.h.i.s.p.e.r.s
float through his
m-i-n-d
murmurs of
intellegencepridewit
drown out
old prayers of
Hufflepuff like Mother
or
Gryffindor like Father
it should have been
O
B
V
I
O
U
S
from the
s.t.a.r.t
but
E!X!P!E!C!T!A!T!I!O!N!S
blinded him
(They wouldn't let him be teddy without being LUPIN)
they expected
redgold
or
yellowblack
but those were
destroyedruinedgone
with a
ShOuT
from a
HAT
a
Y~E~L~L
of
bronzeblue
teddy could be TEDDY
smartfunnycrazy
sweetsarcasticproud
clumsykindresponsible
all it took
was
O
N
E
S/C/R/E/A/M
of
"RAVENCLAW!"