I have no idea of how this story is going to turn out but all I know is that my friends think im a good writer and one introduced me to fanfiction last year and ever since I've been reading! So if theres stuff I should change or anything wrong with my story please tell me what to fix! well I think I'm just gunna shut up and write your story now! Here you are!
"Kagome, honey you have to wake up! School's starting in 20 minutes! Your going to be late!" Kagome's mother shouted at the foot of the stairs.
"Why didn't you wake me sooner!" Kagome screamed in complete surprise falling out of bed. " I have to study exams start tomorrow!"
"I've been trying Kagome dear! Your not exactly a easy person to wake up!"
A few minutes later Kagome fell down the last couple steps and scrambled into the kitchen.
"Hojo hasn't been by in a while. Is he ok?" Kagome's mother asked while she handed Kagome her coat and lunch box.
"Oh he's fine, he's just been working early and late at the grocery store with his mother. They've had a lot of buisness lately." Kagome said cheerfully.
"Oh, okay tell him he has to come by sometime. We all miss him." Kagome's mother shouted after her as she ran out the front door. "Oh and Kagome, Happy Birthday!"
"Kagome! Buyo's in the Bone-Eaters well house and he wont come out!" Souta cried as he ran up to Kagome.
"Did you try to loure him out with his cat food? Or even that musty old fish that Grampa has in the garden shrine?" Kagome asked in a I-so-don't-have-time-to-deal-with-this voice.
"I did, but he still wont come out! Kagome will you go down there and get him? Please?"
"Why cant you do it yourself?"
"Are you kidding? Theres something down there!"
"Yea its called the cat." Kagome said smiling at her brothers nevousness. Rolling her eyes she started walking away.
"No, you can't leave sis!" Souta said running in front of her and kneeling on both knees with his hands clasped together tightly as if praying.
"Fine but you have to do my chours for a month, and could you not look like your worshipping me. You can worship me later." Kagome half laughed.
"Buyo, here kitty kitty kitty! Kags has some yummy mistical thinggy that Grampa keeps around the house! Buyo?" As Kagome tried convincing the cat to come up she noticed a blue light inside the well. "Souta keep trying to get Buyo out. I really have to get to school now."
Standing Kagome was suddenly grabbed and pulled down the bone-eaters well.
"KAGOME!" Souta screamed his voice cracking. "KAGOME," and that was the last thing she heard before fainting.
Oh yes, just as you though! Its a cliffy!
This story is an art and I'm the artist NOT!-me
Please review this story! Its my first one and I personally dont really like it but my friends convinced me to put it up! Review and tell me the painfully honest truth about it!