Hello, so this is my first fanfic EVER and I wasn't so sure if it was any good so I decided I'll upload it and see what people think of it. So please leave a review so I know if I should continue it or drop it.
Just take in consideration that this is somewhat of an introduction to the story.
Anyway thanks for dropping by!
Chapter 1: In the middle of the night.
It was a cold night, most people were already at home sleeping in a warm bed, others were just wandering outside looking for some fun, and there was she, walking down a poor lit street late at night, with her hands buried deep within the pockets of her jacket .
It wasn't that she wasn't aware of the danger that could befall her, more like she had little choice in the matter.
So why was Lucy Heartfilia, a young pretty girl, roaming the streets alone at night?
The answer was simple… because she had nowhere to go.
And why did she had nowhere to go?
Because that same morning she had ran away from home, or more accurately from her father.
After many years, since her mother's death, of trying her hardest to please her father hoping that he would maybe, just maybe, say something warm to her, she had finally given up on the idea of her father ever loving her.
So she had left, and nothing anyone said could make her go back to that cold prison called "home".
The only things she had brought with her were in the backpack resting in her shoulder: some clothes, her diary, and an old picture of her mother and her. She had also taken some money that she had been secretly saving for a while, and she hoped that it would last until she found a job.
After she left her house she had taken a train to somewhere far away, and ended up in this town called Magnolia, the travel had taken a few hours and after that she had lost the time sightseeing, which now she regretted since it had gotten so late and she still had no place to sleep.
So now she was desperately searching for a cheap hotel to spend the night, but so far no luck. She was starting to get nervous, biting her lip and burying her hands deeper in her pockets she speeded up a little.
As she was about to turn around a corner a guy appeared in front of her.
"Hey babe" Said the blond guy while a lewd smile spread across his face.
Lucy jumped back in surprise bumping with another guy at her back. 'When did he get behind me?! '
"Where do you think you are going?" Said the other guy, a black haired tall guy, while grabbing her arm strongly.
Suddenly a sense of dread spread across Lucy's body, and she tried to free her arm in vain "Let go of me!" She yelled at the tall guy.
"Why go so soon? The fun is just beginning" Said the blond guy walking closer to Lucy while another scary smile crossed his face.
"HEL-!" Lucy tried to scream before the tall guy covered her mouth and started dragging her to the nearest alley in the side of a building.
Lucy struggled trying to get free but the guy was too strong for her, the other guy got impatient and pulling something from his pocket he pressed it against Lucy's throat. "I would stop that if I were you"
Lucy stopped instantly eyes wide open, she felt the cold metal against her skin, and fear enveloped her heart, there was a knife in her neck.
Time seemed to move in slow motion as she let the guys drag her to the back of the alley, her whole body trembling slightly, there was no longer anything covering her mouth but the fear wouldn't let her scream as the knife was still resting against her neck.
The two guys got rid of her jacket, while one of them started to touch her tight roughly until he reached the hem of her denim skirt and started to pull it up, the feeling becoming more nauseating by the second.
The other guy was touching her stomach under her shirt, but then he seemed to decide that the shirt was getting in his way so he ripped it in half, exposing her laced bra underneath.
Lucy gasped at the sudden action, but didn't dare to scream as the weapon never left her throat. All the touching and the dirty conversation between the guys (about who should go first and so on) were seriously making her feel like throwing up.
She never been so scared in her life, the fear was like a snake crushing her heart, and she couldn't hold it in anymore. Tears began to pour down her cheeks as small sobs escaped her mouth.
'If only I hadn't ran away from home….. Is papa worried about me? I didn't even left a note'
She thought, the sobs becoming more audible and the tears sliding down her neck.
Meanwhile the guys had been groping Lucy shamelessly. And Lucy had given up on hope of being saved as the blond guy started to unzip his pants.
But something unexpected happened….. Suddenly one of the guys was torn apart from Lucy's trembling body and crashed against some boxes and trash on the side.
"What the-!" Was all the other guy, the tall one, got to say as he turned around just to get a punch straight in the face.
Lucy was sure she heard a "crack" and the guy's nose was now dripping blood, before the blond guy could reach the knife that had fallen on the floor, the unknown "hero" stomped on his hand with force making him scream in pain and then kicking his face with his other leg.
But he didn't stop there, he got back to the tall guy kneeling on the floor covering his nose with his hands and started to punch him viciously until he was left unconscious, and even then he landed a strong kick in the guy's stomach. The process was repeated with the blond guy.
Lucy was shocked beyond belief, everything happened so fast!
She hadn't dared to move an inch, the tears and sobs had stopped but the trembling didn't.
The brutality of the man that saved her had left her speechless, she didn't know if she should thank him or if she should run away before he hit her too.
Finally he turned to her, making her flinch. It was very dark so she couldn't see his face, but she felt his intense gaze slowly traveling her body.
Suddenly she felt embarrassed and hurriedly arranged her clothes the best she could. Though there was little she could do with her torn shirt.
The stranger passed a hand trough his hair clearly annoyed at something while he whispered some curses under his breath, and then unexpectedly kicked once more the guy lying in front of him.
Silently he took off his shirt and threw it at her, she barely managed to catch it, still a little shocked from all that happened in just a few minutes. She glanced up in an attempt to thank her savior but before she could say anything he was already walking out the alley. Lucy stared at his back as he disappeared from her sight taking notice of his long black hair.
She decided to wear the flannel shirt, it had a red checkered design, though it was too big for her that she could almost us it as a dress. It had a nice masculine scent to it which made Lucy blush for some reason.
Quickly picking up her jacket and backpack from the floor, she ran away from that place as fast as possible. Her savior was nowhere to be seen, so she decided to just keep on running.
In the end she found a 24 hours coffee shop and spent the rest of the night there.
The waitress was very nice and beautiful, apparently her name was Mirajane, and asked if there was something wrong when she brought Lucy her coffee. She looked really worried so Lucy wondered what kind of face she was making.
At first Lucy answered that everything was fine but later when Mirajane brought her some apple pie, which she hadn't ordered, and smiled warmly at her Lucy couldn't help but start crying quietly, the tension finally leaving her body.
There was something about Mirajane that made Lucy trust her, so in the end she told her what had happened between sobs.
Mirajane hugged her warmly, like an older sister would. "You are safe now" She had said.
And Lucy had believed her.
She was safe, all because some mysterious man whom she didn't had the change to thank had decided to save her. Slowly fatigue overwhelmed her and she felt very tired.
'I hope I meet him again…my hero…' Was the last thing in her mind as she drifted to sleep.
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Should I continue it or not? Do you want to read more? Is it boring?
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