so I repost this chapter again because I found out that it's really was bad and has so many errors . I'm trying to make it better but I still know that probably you'll see some errors in the future

I'm trying to improve myself and be, better I'm still learning :)

Hello everyone

So this is my first story ever, and to be honest I'm writing because I need to improve my English, as you see I am not a native English speaker so I thought it may help. And I'm pretty sure you'll find lots of mistakes grammatically or linguistically , so I hope if you could help me to improve my English. I'll be very thankful if you Review and tell me about my mistakes so I could avoid them next time.

Thanks a lot and I hope you enjoy it.

P.S. all HP original stories belong to J.K. Rowling. However, the plot in this one is all mine

Chapter 1 : He's still alive

He was running out of breath it wasn't easy to come here without someone sees you he knew that no one would be able to see him but yet he had to be careful he won't let anyone comes between him and his mission , he walked through the hallway that lead him to a large black door he pull off his wand out of his bucket and whispered: " Alohamora"

The door opened and he found himself standing at the same place that he hated the most, he couldn't move he was thinking about what he was up to, he was very nerves but yet he knew if he made it right everything will be perfect again, this is his only chance he needs to make the most of it, he need to make sure that everything will be alright. This plan especially should have no mistakes.

Seven weeks earlier:

He was lying on the ground hearing very familiar voices

"Is he died?"

"Don't say that Ronald"

"What happened? Is he okay?"

"I don't know"

"There is something wrong"

The red head boy walked several steps until he was close enough to his best friend: "Harry do you hear me mate?" he asked

Harry mumbled: "Ron?"

"Yes bro I'm Ron, are you okay?"

He slowly opened his eyes and looked straight at the bunch of people who were around him. Ron was the first person he saw behind him was Hermione standing next to Ginny and Neville who was holding hands with a blond girl her face was almost covered with blood and she looked very tired but yet she smiled when their eyes met that was Luna Lovegood .

They all looked worried about him so he said: "yes Ron I'm fine how are you?" and he stood next to his friends

Ron: "I'm fine"

Hermione: " you did it Harry I can't believe, you did it you killed him " and she hugged him

Harry after they separated from each other's arms: " me neither Hermione, anyway how's everyone"

Neville: "well, we've lost some of our people but the rest of us are doing fine"

Harry: "who've we lost"

Hermione: "Um Harry, I'm afraid that Remus ….. "

Harry: "I know about Remus I've talked to him after it happened who's else ?"

Hermione: " you've talked to him ?"

Harry: " I'll explain later"

Luna: "We've lost Fred"

He said , shocked by the news: " WHAT!"

He looked at Ron and Ginny and said : "I'm sorry I didn't want anyone to die for me , I'm so sorry guys"

Ginny: " it's not your fault "

Ron: " let's go inside mom was worried about you Harry"

They were walking and for the first time in the past twenty-four hours he realized what actually happened to the only place he can call a home. The smell of blood was all over the place , died ( Death Eaters ) bodies everywhere officially no one cared to bury them or to put them in a decent place . the effects of the battle filled the place. when they interred to the great hall his eyes were looking for the Wesley's . Here they are sitting together along with professor McGonagall and Hagrid. He sat next to Gorge trying to say something , to say that he never wanted Fred or anyone to die for him , trying to say that he faced Voldemort in order to save their lives , he was pretty sure when he went to Voldemort that he will never go to make it out alive but that's fine that what he wanted he wanted to put an end to this war even though if that's mean he'll die. He was ready to die . But he failed he couldn't save everyone especially those who he consider a family

I'm sorry, " he said , it's the only thing he was able to say"

Gorge: " Harry I just want you to know that no one blames you for what happened, it wasn't your fault ok?"

Harry smiled at him : "Ok, thanks Gorge"

Professor McGonagall : " I believe that you all tired by now" then she looked over Mr. and Mrs. Wesley " you can use the fireplace in my office to go home"

Mr. Wesley: " yes , thank you" and he turned to Harry and Hermione " and you tow will come with us as well "

They say goodbye to Luna , Neville, and Hagrid and followed professor McGonagall to her office.

So what do you think ? this is just the beginning I promise it will be more interesting later on. But what do you think so far?