Hello this is my first fanfic and starts after The Rise of Nine. Hope you like! I dont always have internet. Started on 21/8/13.
Chapter 1 Number Four/John
"Down this hallway!" Nine shouts as we run down the hallway. But honestly I think he has no idea where we are going. He just keeps laughing every time he sees a Mogadorian. I cant beleive were only missing one more member of the Garde. We have Numbers Six Seven, Eight, Nine and even Number Ten. Who came on another ship from Lorien.
"Nine do you even know where were going?" Six shouts as he hurls his staff at a Mog.
"Why would you think I have a clue where were going sweetheart?"Nine says casually. Suddenly he's thrown into the wall by a force I can only guess was Six's Telekinesis. I wonder what Legacies the others have than shown.
I light my Lumen and set about five or six Mogs on fire. They melt into ash. Its rather revolting.
"Nine let me go first. I have Night Vision." She says shyly.
"Alright Pickles"Nine says casually.
"Pickles?" She stops dead in her tracks "The names Marina." She says. I just burst out laughing. Then Mogs swarm into the hallway. I run into the crowd and start kicking and jabbing and then stabbing. I've developed quite the routine, kick, jab, snap, spit (A/N:Spitting from Mog ash in his mouth) , elbow throw with Telekinesis. I'm also a Loric Fireball, so that makes every hit just the more effective. So They get set on fire and melt. I look around and find Sarah with a Mog Cannon. I never knew she was so skilled with a gun/lethal weapon. I slice with my dagger now. My dagger is on fire right now. I slash and stab. I finish off the last Mog.
"Johnny that was my Mog!" Nine shouts at me.
"Your so cruel Nine!" I turn my body. "Follow me." I hear Nine complaining in the back about not wanting to follow me. I ignore it and just keep on walking.
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Six
I. Hate. Sarah. She just skips right next to me trying to make me jealous. Whenever I am near her. I am about to throw her into the mountains but that would just piss John off. It really pisses me off though. I am jealous but she needs to stop before she gets hurt. I can tell the others don't like her though. Shes just a bitch. She's just like 'John can do this!' and 'John can do that!' Honestly we all know what he can do. And its a whole lot more then her. We pull in at a hotel called 'The Hampton Inn'. It looks nice from the outside. Hopefully its the same on the inside.
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I'm staying with Marina and Ella. John's with Sarah and BK, and Nines with Eight. I think its a good way. I refuse to bunk with Sarah for her own good. I pace around in the room. I finally find that I stink and go to the bathroom to take a shower. I come out and Marina and Ella are asleep. I leave a note saying 'Went for fresh air' smack in the middle of the TV. I open the door and go to the elevator and hit the button for the roof. I turn invisible in the elevator and walk out when it reaches the roof. I sit on the edge and just think.
So I hope you guys liked the first chapter of 'The Fall of Five my way' Its going to be longer chapters hopefully later on. I know its annoying to say this but I really need to know how I'm doing so please review I'm new to this. Also I wont have Internet Half the time, so I'll write when I dont have Internet so that when I do have Internet it should be a BIG UPDATE. Hardyboyzrockz2 Out!