So guys, this is an anniversary project because I have now been on FanFiction for 1 year (and one week, at the time I'm writing this). This was the first Warriors fanfic I ever wrote on FanFiction. I deleted it because I didn't think it was good. I have another one that was my actual, very first Warriors fanfic that was really bad that I have as one, big, ten-page document on my computer. It's pretty bad, and I might post it as a joke that's totally unedited later on.
So here it is!
This Sorrelpaw is the son/daughter of Lionblaze and Cinderheart shown in the manga at the end of Bramblestar's Storm. I am conveying Sorrelpaw as a she-cat.
Allegiances
ThunderClan
Leader-
Bramblestar
Deputy-
Bumblestripe
Medicine Cats-
Leafpool
Jayfeather
Warriors-
Brackenfur
Cloudtail
Apprentice: Hollypaw
Brightheart
Millie
Thornclaw
Spiderleg
Apprentice: Amberpaw
Birchfall
Apprentice: Sorrelpaw
Whitewing
Apprentice: Dewpaw
Berrynose
Mousewhisker
Apprentice: Fernpaw
Cinderheart
Ivypool
Apprentice: Snowpaw
Lionblaze
Dovewing
Rosepetal
Poppyfrost
Lilyheart
Cherryfall
Molewhisker
Stormcloud
Apprentices-
Hollypaw: Black she-cat with dark green eyes
Amberpaw
Sorrelpaw: Brown she-cat with leaf-green eyes
Dewpaw
Fernpaw: Dark smoky she-cat with black stripes and leaf-green eyes
Queens-
Daisy
Squirrelflight
Kits: Lightningkit (Golden tabby tom with amber eyes), Shadekit (Gray-black she-kit with dark green eyes), Gustkit (Gray and white she-kit with dark green eyes), Streamkit (Blue-gray tabby tom with amber eyes)
Mate: Bramblestar
Elders-
Graystripe
Sandstorm
Purdy
ShadowClan
Leader-
Rowanstar
Deputy-
Crowfrost
Medicine Cat-
Littlecloud
Warriors-
Tawnypelt
Grasstail
Owlclaw
Scorchfur
Tigerheart
Ferretclaw
Spikefur
Pinenose
Stoatfur
Pouncetail
Queens-
Snowbird
Dawnpelt
Elders-
Snaketail
Whitewater
Ratscar
Oakfur
Smokefoot
Kinkfur
Ivytail
WindClan
Leader-
Onestar
Deputy-
Harespring
Medicine Cat-
Kestrelflight
Warriors-
Slightleap
Crowfeather
Feathersong
Nightcloud
Hootfeather
Gorsetail
Weaselfur
Leaftail
Oatcloud
Emberfoot
Heathertail
Breezepelt
Furzepelt
Crouchfoot
Larkwing
Queens-
Sedgewhisker
Elders-
Whiskernose
Whitetail
RiverClan
Leader-
Mistystar
Reedwhisker
Apprentice: Lizardpaw
Medicine Cats-
Mothwing
Willowshine
Warriors-
Mintfur
Minnowtail
Mallownose
Apprentice: Havenpaw
Grasspelt
Duskfur
Mosspelt
Perchwing
Shimmerpelt
Lakeheart
Heronwing
Queens-
Icewing
Petalfur
Elders-
Pouncefoot
Pebblefoot
Rushtail
Other Animals
Smoky
Coriander
Midnight
Prologue
Sorrelpaw quietly padded through the undergrowth, tracking a water vole in a stream. It was plump, and she couldn't possibly let it escape. She crept closer and closer...
"Hi, Sorrelpaw! What're you doing?"
Sorrelpaw saw the vole bounce out of reach. "Mouse-dung!" she hissed.
"Sorrelpaw? You alright? Why are you out here, so close to ShadowClan?" ThunderClan had a recent scuffle with ShadowClan because a ThunderClan was supposedly crossing the border, but the scent told them that ThunderClan was still three fox-lengths in their own territory.
Sorrelpaw turned to her unaware sister Fernpaw. "I was hunting a water vole, until you came crashing through the brambles."
She hung her head. "Sorry."
Sorrelpaw decided to forgive her sister. She did it all the time. "It's alright. Do you want to come hunt with me?"
"Sure," she answered.
They went to another part of the stream. Fernpaw went on the side closest to ShadowClan. She didn't particularly want her to, but since Sorrelpaw had gotten sick only a few days after battle training began, Fernpaw knew more moves, and insisted she should be closest.
"Wait," Fernpaw meowed. "I think I hear something."
"I don't hear-"
"Shhh!" Fernpaw crept into ShadowClan territory. She turned around and smiled. "It's a pheasant."
"It's ShadowClan's pheasant," Sorrelpaw reminded her tabby sister.
She snorted. "Whatever." She dashed into the pines and disappeared.
Sorrelpaw was about to pursue her sister, but she decided not to. That would get them both into trouble. She just decided to stay clear of the border until she heard a screech that clearly belonged to Fernpaw.
"I'm coming!" she yowled as she dashed into the shadows.
Sorrelpaw found Fernpaw on the ground, hysterical. Hot anger flooded Sorrelpaw. She dragged her sister into ThunderClan territory by her scruff and hissed at her. Fernpaw was attempting to get up, but kept collapsing. She was finally able to stand, and she was still giggling.
"Drop dead, Fernpaw!" she yowled. Fernpaw crumbled to the ground.
"Get up," Sorrelpaw growled. "This isn't the time for another joke. Especially since Bramblestar's about to know what you did."
Fernpaw didn't move.
She rolled her eyes. "Come on."
Fernpaw still didn't get up. Sorrelpaw now knew something was wrong. Fernpaw would have gotten up by now.
"F-Fernpaw?" she shakily asked as she ran to her. Her flanks weren't moving.
No! What happened? she thought as tears ran down her cheeks. She leaned in to Fernpaw's ear. "I'm sorry," she whispered. "Please come back."r
Fernpaw's eyes shot open and she vomited on the ground. She looked at unbelieving Sorrelpaw. "Ugh. What happened?" she asked. "I feel sick."
Sorrelpaw quickly thought of an explanation for her sister, since she apparently had no memory that she had just died. "You ate a bird with maggots in it."
"And you didn't tell me?"
"I did. You were too busy talking to Dewpaw for you to listen to me. Now come on." Sorrelpaw was careful to base her answer out of a real happening. Fernpaw actually ate a thrush while talking to Dewpaw earlier today.
As she helped Fernpaw up, she saw a pair of golden eyes staring at her inside a bush in ShadowClan territory, but ignored them in relief that her sister was okay.
So do you think it's good? I really tried to make it better than the original, if you happened to read it in the three days it was on FanFiction.