I deleted all my stories, if you noticed I don't know why I push myself to hard to do things, I try to be a better writer but I feel as if im going through pressure. Math is really starting to bug me, having a teacher who treats you like a baby doesn't help either, but I just have to suck that up and not let u guys down, so I decided to start fresh. Here's a new story that im determined to keep and finished!
Paul's POV
I want her.
Everything about her drives me….Crazy
But, it is simple to take away an innocent little thirteen year old girl from two… guys, especially if one's your rival that you swear to destroy?
But who am I to her?
Some cold, selfish bastard who abuses my pokemon?
Who is she?
She is Dawn Hikari, the perky little coordinator. Everything about her fills me butterfrees, the sight of her smile, how her crystal blue eyes sparkle, and how her hair flows in the breeze.
I presume you think she's with that excuse of a trainer?
Don't make me laugh; I'm not like her idiot traveling companion, who thinks he can be a champion by just grinning at my pokemon and hoping for the best
How pathetic…
She doesn't deserve a trainer like that to be her friend. She deserves someone who will be strong for her, who will take care of her, and who will love her.
She's perfect in every way, a true angel.
Prepare yourself Dawn Hikari…
I'm going to kidnapped you my angel...
Because you'll will be mine...
Yeah so here's the beginning, I'm trying to make my chapters shorter so I can keep up better. Any suggestions or HELPFUL criticism would be appreciated thank you
GTG-IIPG