Ok guyz a guy here sent a preview that he somehow didnt understand the story so I tried to make a new one. This will be the edited one its more better than that first one I made
In Star's room a black portal with brown swirls suddenly came to view. Then first came out was Star Butterfly a cute and bubbly princes with ocean blue eyes and long yellow hair. Then came out was Marco,an average guy with chesnut-colored eyes,brown hair and a birth mark on his right cheek (and they both stillwear the usual clothes). As they came out the portal,they did not notice the paper that suddenly fluttered out of the closed the portal. Marco and Star were jumping in joy as they shouted...
"Wooohoooo! This is our one hundredth victory against evil" Star and Marco shouted
"I dont want to stop your glee but please lower your voices a little im trying to read here"Mrs. Diaz shouted from the dining room table
"sorry mom!"Marco Replied "hey Star let's celebrate. I'll get the juice and you start the oven"
"Yeah ok"she said
So Marco and Star ran downstairs Marco pulled the 1 liter of orage juice from the fridge then star turned on the and Star ran back upstairs Marco placed the pitcher on thd top of Star's desk and ran back fixed up the table. Marco went up slowly while carrying the plate of nacho's,Star opened the door for him. Then the good smelling nacho's came in the room. Marco placed it on the desk next to the orange juice then they started eating. While eating Marco saw the paper he stood up and picked it up. On the paper was a teenage boy with yellow hair,skyblue eyes and wore a brown cloak with a hoodie. It also worewhite shirt with brown pants. There were words under the picture too saying...
MISSING
Darrel Cutter
Last seen:On Mewni fighting the white dragon
Time seen:exactly6:45pm,september 14
he also had a bag with him
Reward:50time crystals
"Star? Do you know this guy?" Marco asked
"yes,hes our greatest dual sword fighter"Star explained"and my..." Star almost said boyfriend
"your what Star?" Marco asked confusedly
"I wish I had a time crystal" Star said nervously
"And what is a time crystal?" Marco asked
"Well its a crystal that changes you past" Star explained with a slight burp on the end"just say what time you want to go and problem"
"oh okay"
They both stood up when they noticed the time was 11:30 pm Marco went back to his room,washed his hands and brushed his teeth. Star on the other side was taking a shower. Marco keeps thinking -Darrel is Stars what?- he didnt and again he thought. Then came to him was a bad idea but it will solve his sneaked in Star's room then opened her chest he puuled out ever peice of clothing then...he found Star's Diary then put all her clothes back then slowly he walked back to his room he opened the diary,flipped the pages. He found it! The top ten of Star's crush's and boyfriends he thought-maybe the top one is her boyfriend!- then he read...top 10 was Furgeson?!...then was Alfonzo...then Justin...then a bunch of guys I dont know top three was Oskar Greason...Marco blushed very red on this one ...top 2 was Marco Diaz then top 1 was...
"DARREL CUTTER?!" Marco shouted very loud
"YES! MARCO DIAZ!" Marco jumped and almost hit the cieling Star was beside him. Star grabbed her Diary,then when Star was about to hit marco on the face with a book...someone knocked hard on the front door causing Star to let go of the book then slamming it on Marco's bare foot
"YEEEEEEOOOOWW!"Marco screamed
Star didn't care what happened to Marco's foot. She went down and opened the door.
"who is it?" Star asked
"Im looking for my Star shine" a boy with yellow said
"Darrel?"
Ok guyz it took me 2/30(2hrs and 30 mins) to do this please leave a favorite and a preview ok bye