This is my first story, so constructive criticism is very welcome. This chapter is pretty short, but they will get longer, so don't worry. Tell me if its good and if i should change something Thanks!
Chapter One
Waiting
I loved my faction. I always had and I probably always would. I would always miss my friends and family from it. I was Amity. And I was happy. But there was always something missing. Some thrill. The first time I had felt this was when I was very little. I didn't yet understand the feeling, so I ignored it. As I got older, I decided that I would wait for the day of the faction tests to come. I told myself that day would help me figure out which faction I really belonged to. It was today. It was now.
I was sitting with my two older brothers, and some of our friends. We were triplets, so we would have our faction tests on the same day. One of my brothers I would have hated, except we weren't allowed to hate in Amity. But we all knew, and we didn't kid ourselves. My oldest brother, however, was another story. We were extremely close. We told each other everything. We even felt the same way about not fitting in at Amity.
Right now he was sitting beside me, looking extremely over-protective. It was okward for us when we sat next to my other brother, Nate, but we acted nice enough to him, so we got away with it. We were all nervous. Which faction would we get? It was called alphabetically, so Nate would go first, then me because my name was Rachel. Then Zander would go last. They called Nate. Some others from our faction were called. They didn't seem bothered. The majority of my friends had already gone. Nate came back. They called me. I stood up, and smoothed the soft yellow fabric of my Amity dress. Zander gave me an encouraging smile. I Walked into the room.