This is my first Fanfic. So be nice in the reviews. Also, I don't own any
body in this story but Tony. Now to the story.
Once Lost, now found.
The day was how it is every day in the cul-de-sac. Rolf was playing basketball, Sarah and Jimmy playing dolls, Kevin and Nazz talking to each other, and Jonny getting lured into one of the Ed's scams. "Come one, come all." yelled Eddy. He was using a collectable bottle cap scam. Then suddenly a car drives in Nazz's driveway. Then a medium size boy walks out of the car on passenger side. He has sleek black hair up into small spikes, a black tee shirt with Linkin Park across it, dark blue jeans, and a gold stud in his ear lobe. He is slightly taller than Edd and has the same eyes and skin tone than Nazz. He than walks into Nazz's house.
Nazz stares at the house. "I wonder who that was." "Probably a dork." grimaces Kevin. "Let's check it out Kevin." So they go over to Nazz's house. Nazz's parents are sitting down on the couch like they were waiting for Nazz. Nazz's dad speaks up first "Nazz we have tell you something. You have a twin brother." "I do!" Then the boy from before walks in."This is your brother, Zack."
To be continued.....
Huh. Good so far. I don't think it's too bad for a first try. Well I will get more chapters later. Give me some ideas in your reviews.
Once Lost, now found.
The day was how it is every day in the cul-de-sac. Rolf was playing basketball, Sarah and Jimmy playing dolls, Kevin and Nazz talking to each other, and Jonny getting lured into one of the Ed's scams. "Come one, come all." yelled Eddy. He was using a collectable bottle cap scam. Then suddenly a car drives in Nazz's driveway. Then a medium size boy walks out of the car on passenger side. He has sleek black hair up into small spikes, a black tee shirt with Linkin Park across it, dark blue jeans, and a gold stud in his ear lobe. He is slightly taller than Edd and has the same eyes and skin tone than Nazz. He than walks into Nazz's house.
Nazz stares at the house. "I wonder who that was." "Probably a dork." grimaces Kevin. "Let's check it out Kevin." So they go over to Nazz's house. Nazz's parents are sitting down on the couch like they were waiting for Nazz. Nazz's dad speaks up first "Nazz we have tell you something. You have a twin brother." "I do!" Then the boy from before walks in."This is your brother, Zack."
To be continued.....
Huh. Good so far. I don't think it's too bad for a first try. Well I will get more chapters later. Give me some ideas in your reviews.