Hey, this is the revised version of chapter one, not much different but I hope it makes moire sense and I hope you like it. I have two other stories Divergent: no war and Official Dauntless (both by ) I hope you like all three!

Cammie POV

I didn't ask to be like this, the daughter of a principle and all. Much less this kind of school. A spy school.

The kind where Dr. Fibbs want you to help them with their sharpie that shoot flaming bullets out of the tip AND writes.

You know, that kind.

I sat in my usual seat next to my usual window in my usual room, even though my usual was completely unusual and abnormal.

Bex, Liz, and Macey were all asleep, their breathing light and soothing. Liz was curled up in a ball, and she looked so innocent in sleep. Macey was graceful with one hand in her hair and the other across her stomach. Bex on the other hand was still, a calculating look on her face yet changed by the devilish look she always had hidden within her features.

"It go boom," she muttered, her lips barely moving.

Before I have the chance to restrain it, a laugh comes out

I wish I had the humor left in me to laugh, but my lips stay shut.

I turn back to the window. The view outside was amazing, it had mountains and grass and everything a view could have. But in my grief, I couldn't appreciate it.

I look to the spot where he told me to look. He had pointed right there and whispered in my ear "Over there, see it Cammie? Over there, that's where I'll be. I can't tell you exactly where, but if you miss me, just look over their and know I'll be looking back."

So everyday, I sat in the same spot, never sleeping, always staring, waiting for him to come back. I've barely slept in 64 days. I always say it's because of work, and never say that it's because of him.

Zach

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I'll try to post more soon, but It's gonna be hard because of school, so cut me some slack here.

I know this was kind of short, but I promise to try to make it longer next time. I really will.

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