Yea, this is my first ever fic. I would like an someone to read my stories before they go up. By the way I do expect some reviews hopefully.
The Suprise:
Whoa, what is it with those two. They are acting stranger than usual. Cleon was thinking about his best friend, Nealen of Queenscove, and his crush, Keladry of Mindalin. It was breakfast for the squires, and there was an unusual silent tension hanging between Kel and Neal. As soon as a new squire entered Neal and Kel were pushed from his thought as he saw her enter the room, her name was Serna and had transferred from training in Tyra. It was the job of the squires to make her feel comfortable. " Serna, would you like to sit with us?" Cleon asked and forgeting about Neal and Kel.
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Half an hour earlier in Kel's room:
Just as Kel was finishing up her practice dances, there was a knock on her door.
"Kel. It's me, Neal, can I talk to you?" Kel's heart started pounding like it would leap out of her chest. Why did Neal want to talk with her. She opened the door to see a crest fallen Neal.
"Neal," she exclaimed, "what happened. You look…. different." Neal took a deep breath and started, "Kel, I know you like me, don't say anything ( she was about to ask how he knew), and I don't want to ruin our friendship, but I don't like you like that. Don't get me wrong but I just don't feel the same way as you do. I'm so sorry, can you forgive me?" Neal took a deep breath, he said that all in less than 30 seconds. "Kel?" Kel was still trying to process the information.
" That's ok. I'll see you at breakfast." Kel tried to say this in her best Yamanio voice but faltered. "Kel. I--" Neal did not get a chance to finish for Kel pushed him put of her room. When she was sure he had left she threw her self on her bed, not careing, or forgetting, she had not finished her pattern dances. Lalasa heard her and managed to calm her down before breakfast so the boys would not know what had happened.
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"Hi Cleon, hi Kel, hi Neal." Serna replied in acceptance of Cleons offer, bring over her older brother, Cyrus. She looks so much like Kel, but Kel has a different……personality. Kel is shy, while Serna is very out going, meaning very hyper, when she gets sugar. Cleon had been comparing many of the court ladies, and even some new girl pages to Kel. Kel and Serna look exactly alike, ever since Kel let her hair grow out. " Uhhhh… Serna, could I talk to you after breakfast?" Cleon was surprised to see it was Kel who had talked. It was then he realized there was something major going on.
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" Yeah, Kel. Is it a guy or family you need help with?" Serna had a…… eye for stuff like this.
" It's a guy. Neal found out I like him, and told me he did not like me like that but still wants to be friends. I don't think that I could handle that." By this time Kel was crying.
" Kel, I personally know at least two guys who really likes you if not more. The first one is my oler brother Cyrus," Cyrus was 2 years older than Serna but was as old as Kel, he was handsome with short black hair with blonde highlights, but on the short side, as is the case with most Tyraians, at only about 5'4, 5'5. He had ice blue eyes that were very friendly to friends, but can be very unnerving if you were on his bad side, he had a tan from the short time they had spent in the Great Southern Desert, and was quiet, and strong. He was training at the palace to become a Tortollan knight, rather than trying to finish their Tyraian knight training to help their war torn country, like his sister. Kel liked him just as much as she liked Neal because of his great personality. "And Cleon also likes you ." Serna finished.
"Cyrus likes me, does he want to go out, like that like? " Kel asked very excitedly. Seeing the expression on Kels face at the mention of Cyrus, Serna was sure she would return Cyrus's affections. " I can talk to him….." Serna said slyly, leaving Kel hanging.
^-^ so how'd you like it. As everyone else says all charecters are Tamora's except for Serna and Cyrus ( sound anything like a guy any of you people know. 'cept for the blonde highlights and the tan , he sounds exactly like one of my friends ). I'm going to talk to Tammy about letting me co-own Kel and co. ( just jokin). Ok, please r/r. More to come.
The Suprise:
Whoa, what is it with those two. They are acting stranger than usual. Cleon was thinking about his best friend, Nealen of Queenscove, and his crush, Keladry of Mindalin. It was breakfast for the squires, and there was an unusual silent tension hanging between Kel and Neal. As soon as a new squire entered Neal and Kel were pushed from his thought as he saw her enter the room, her name was Serna and had transferred from training in Tyra. It was the job of the squires to make her feel comfortable. " Serna, would you like to sit with us?" Cleon asked and forgeting about Neal and Kel.
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Half an hour earlier in Kel's room:
Just as Kel was finishing up her practice dances, there was a knock on her door.
"Kel. It's me, Neal, can I talk to you?" Kel's heart started pounding like it would leap out of her chest. Why did Neal want to talk with her. She opened the door to see a crest fallen Neal.
"Neal," she exclaimed, "what happened. You look…. different." Neal took a deep breath and started, "Kel, I know you like me, don't say anything ( she was about to ask how he knew), and I don't want to ruin our friendship, but I don't like you like that. Don't get me wrong but I just don't feel the same way as you do. I'm so sorry, can you forgive me?" Neal took a deep breath, he said that all in less than 30 seconds. "Kel?" Kel was still trying to process the information.
" That's ok. I'll see you at breakfast." Kel tried to say this in her best Yamanio voice but faltered. "Kel. I--" Neal did not get a chance to finish for Kel pushed him put of her room. When she was sure he had left she threw her self on her bed, not careing, or forgetting, she had not finished her pattern dances. Lalasa heard her and managed to calm her down before breakfast so the boys would not know what had happened.
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"Hi Cleon, hi Kel, hi Neal." Serna replied in acceptance of Cleons offer, bring over her older brother, Cyrus. She looks so much like Kel, but Kel has a different……personality. Kel is shy, while Serna is very out going, meaning very hyper, when she gets sugar. Cleon had been comparing many of the court ladies, and even some new girl pages to Kel. Kel and Serna look exactly alike, ever since Kel let her hair grow out. " Uhhhh… Serna, could I talk to you after breakfast?" Cleon was surprised to see it was Kel who had talked. It was then he realized there was something major going on.
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" Yeah, Kel. Is it a guy or family you need help with?" Serna had a…… eye for stuff like this.
" It's a guy. Neal found out I like him, and told me he did not like me like that but still wants to be friends. I don't think that I could handle that." By this time Kel was crying.
" Kel, I personally know at least two guys who really likes you if not more. The first one is my oler brother Cyrus," Cyrus was 2 years older than Serna but was as old as Kel, he was handsome with short black hair with blonde highlights, but on the short side, as is the case with most Tyraians, at only about 5'4, 5'5. He had ice blue eyes that were very friendly to friends, but can be very unnerving if you were on his bad side, he had a tan from the short time they had spent in the Great Southern Desert, and was quiet, and strong. He was training at the palace to become a Tortollan knight, rather than trying to finish their Tyraian knight training to help their war torn country, like his sister. Kel liked him just as much as she liked Neal because of his great personality. "And Cleon also likes you ." Serna finished.
"Cyrus likes me, does he want to go out, like that like? " Kel asked very excitedly. Seeing the expression on Kels face at the mention of Cyrus, Serna was sure she would return Cyrus's affections. " I can talk to him….." Serna said slyly, leaving Kel hanging.
^-^ so how'd you like it. As everyone else says all charecters are Tamora's except for Serna and Cyrus ( sound anything like a guy any of you people know. 'cept for the blonde highlights and the tan , he sounds exactly like one of my friends ). I'm going to talk to Tammy about letting me co-own Kel and co. ( just jokin). Ok, please r/r. More to come.