hey this is a divergent story with a twist hope you like it xx
chapter one: the choice
tris pov:
so this is it then, where I choose to spend the rest of my life. I stand looking out on to the monstrous swarm of people leaving for work, dressed the same in their standard clothing and walking out of the same unoriginal grey homes. I had no choice not really. I couldn't leave my mom and dad after caleb left us for...erudite , I can't believe him I mean he knows about how they are trying to bring down abnegations reputation and now he's trying to help them. I never saw this coming I mean I kind of knew that most of us abnegation were going to stay and I kind of assumed that would include caleb, but I guess that he had made other plans.
I wonder what he thought when he sat there with us at dinner listening to our father tell us about what those terrible people in erudite were doing, for all we know he was probably secretly agreeing with them. I should of noticed something... anything mean, he was my brother he was always the one who would tell me off for not sharing my toys with the other children. for not helping our elderly neighbours with there shopping, he was always so much better at this then me but he made his choice and I have made mine. my mom and dad are downstairs cooking breakfast, I did offer to do it but they seemed happy for the discretion.
its hard to tell how there taking calebs sudden absence but I wouldn't forget my mothers face when he let his blood drip over the bowl of water, it was momentary but her expression looked so much like a Childs. my normally strong determined mother looked so weak and pitiful like all the air had been suddenly taken for her lungs and her eyes reflected with pain, a level of pain that I have never seen before and I am sure that I don't want to again. how was I meant to leave after seeing that, what type of daughter would I be if I left them after such a devastating blow so I stayed for the ones I love.
tobias pov:
what can I say about yet another choosing ceremony, well we got a few transfers but not as many as we have in previous years but hey were doing okay. their was one girl who looked like she might transfer to dauntless but she stayed with abnegation in the end which doesn't surprise me in the slightest actually as her brother transferred, well I'm guessing brother as they had the same surname he went to erudite. it must have been a bit of a blow I guess for the family and the faction but that is just how it is I guess.
we have some good strong transfers this time a girl called Christina jumped first today, as I saw her blue jacket flying towards the net I must say that I was surprised. erudite are normally all talk but this one clearly wasn't, as she landed I saw her face and was kind of taken back as she was quite pretty. I am not trying to say that all people form erudite are unattractive but she one of the more attractive erudite transfers I have meet, which is not that many but anyway I noticed her. I don't normally notice girls much, and no it's not because I am into guys but I'm not against that ether, I just haven't meet anyone worth paying attention to. so overall apart form Christina the whole ceremony was the same as last year but then again what I was expecting, not even I know that but something is brewing and I will find out what it is.