Hey so this came to me. In this story its based on season 9 but McGee's family is dead except for Sarah. His parents and Penny died together in a plane crash. The McGee siblings are only ones left.
Then Sarah gets in a car accident. It's been three days of her coma and Tony decides to intervene as Tim hasn't been in work since and he misses him.
Tim sighed as his stomach growled. "May as well find me a nutter butter, you always were difficult to awaken" he mused.
Outside he let tears fall. He was so drained but he couldn't leave her. She was the only family left.
He left the room and went down the hall just missing his coworker who walked up.
"Timmy? You in here?" Tony called. He was relieved to find it empty.
His eyes traveled to the bed. "Hey kid, you know you're stealing my job young lady" he scolded.
She didn't even move and Tony sighed. "See, you're still doing it, its my job to make Timmy miserable" he said. The only movement he saw was Sarah breathing.
Tony sighed. "Don't make me beg" he whined. He waited a few seconds and stomped a foot.
"Sarah? Please, open those pretty eyes if you can hear me" he begged. He got no response.
Tony sighed. "Come on mini McGee, you're killing me" he whined. Again, no response.
Tony grabbed the chair by the bed and pulled it close to the bed. He then lifted the small frail hand and clutched it tightly.
"Come on kid, you can do it, you already got what I always wanted, you have a big brother and the best one at that" he said.
"Really? That why you pick on me so much?" Tim asked walking in with his treat. He picked up Tony's last sentence and decided to comment.
Tony chuckled. "Maybe" he answered with a small smirk.
"Huh? I thought you liked being an only child"
Tony shook his head and the smirk fell. "I was stuck with it Tim, I always wanted a sibling" he said honestly.
Tim stared in disbelief. "Seriously? Because I can tell you Sarah is a pain in the ass"
"But she is your pain Tim and you love her" Tony answered.
Tim saw the pain in his friends eyes as he said that. "Now I get why you got close to the girls" he murmured.
Tony nodded. "And you….I always wanted brothers and sisters….NCIS got me that wish" he said.
He then looked back to the unconscious woman. "But I know it's never the same as having one by blood….I saw you hug her in interrogation…I was jealous" he said.
"Really? Tony DiNozzo…jealous of a hug huh?" Tim asked with a mocking tone.
Tony stared at him with a hurt look. "Yeah Tim….come on is it that hard to believe I have feelings?"
Tim shook his head. "No…I'm sorry" he said.
Tony turned away. "Whatever" he answered and stood. "I'll just go McGee…sorry for intruding" he said bitterly.
Tim grabbed his arm. "You never intrude big brother….thanks" he said honestly. Tony smiled and Tim gave him a quick hug.
They didn't notice Sarah's eyes flutter. She was fighting still but finding it hard to wake up.
Maybe it was time for the rest of the team to give in to their own feelings.
So should I make a chapter of every team member and then end it with Sarah waking up? I was thinking it be Abby, Ziva, Ducky, Palmer, Gibbs and Vance less I'm forgetting people.