Hi there. Well this is pretty much my first time in the Beyblade section. I
just moved out of the Yugioh and is trying my luck in here. I hope you like
it. I was inspired by another story. But due to the fact that I read so
many I can't remember what it's called so if you're story seems somewhat
similar to this well then it was you're story that inspired me. Well let's
get this started.
Warning 1: Not for Michael lovers and White Tigers lovers. Slight bashing of White Tigers and a whole lot of Michael. You have been warned.
Warning 2: Rating may go up. Mentions rape in later chapters.
Warning 3: Hints of Yaoi in it. Not to much though.
Warning 4: Ray is paired up with OC if don't like leave
Disclaimer: Nagareboshi doesn't own Beyblade
I dedicate this story to LingXiaoyu (Did spell it right?) In thanks for chosing me. Thanks look at the bottom to see what I'm talking about.
More than meets the Eye
Chapter 1 Introduction
Hello, I'm Cheryl but my brother and friends call me Hoshi. I'm sixteen and the second command in our "little group". My brother is captain or leader whatever you're going call it. What is this little group you ask? Well it's called the Bladebreakers. It sounds strange I know but that's what we are. We beyblade and have bit beast to help us. Not only that we take bit beast from others. As terrible as it sounds we're actually the good guys. How, you ask? That is a good question. We steal Bit Beast from those who either don't deserve it or it doesn't belong to them. We mostly steal parts, information and bit beasts from our rivals and enemies the White Tigers.
Hmm what else? Oh I know, meet my Bit Beast, Nekangel or Neka for short. Neka is a cat-angel Bit Beast. I'm sure you can tell by the name. Neko = cat, I dropped the o and add angel.
Now I'm sure you want to meet the rest of the team.
There's Kai our cold team leader. But as cold and rude as he acts I still love him. He is my twin brother after all. He doesn't act like it but he loves me too. His Bit Beast is Dranzer, a fiery phoenix.
Then there's Tyson. Well let's just say, he can be very annoying at time. But he's always cheerful and looks on the bright side of things. He wants to be the best there is when it comes to beyblading. Well he certainly got a long way to go seeing that he has to beat me and Kai first.
Yeah Tyson actually did the unthinkable. He beat Kai once and actually got my cold-hearted brother to smile for no reason. I didn't even have to help, Tyson did by himself. I couldn't believe my eyes.
Well any way, Tyson's Bit Beast is Dragoon. This blue dragon Bit Beast just rocks the sky with his storm attack.
Now we can't forget Max. This kid is so cheerful it's freaky. But like Tyson he always looks on the bright side. His Bit Beast is Draciel more of a defensive Bit Beast but is someone not to underestimate.
Then there's Kenny or Chief. He upgrades all of ours blades and is like a little brother that keepings on bugging you for money. Actually to be more correct he bugs you about eating right and practicing for our tournament, but he's cool. Dizzi, his Bit Beast who's stuck in his laptop, can be just as annoying but then you just can't live with out them.
So there you have it. This my team or rather my second family. I would tell you more about me and the rest of the team but Kai has a mission for Tyson, him and me. Oh well I guess this will just have to wait. What I didn't know was that this mission well was going to change my life.
~*~
Hello there. I 'm Ray. I'm sixteen and living with my friend Mariah. My friends and I call ourselves the White Tiger. I guess I'm the odd ball in our group. It would explain why the others treat me like dirt, but I'll live though no matter what they do to me. Even if they do hit time to time. Why not fight back time-to-time or even leave? Well I guess it's the fact that I nowhere else to go and these guys are my only family even if they hurt me.
There's Lee leader of the White Tigers and we can't forget Mariah. A girl who I love like sister but she treats me like a slave. Then there's always hungry Gary and mischief Kevin. I don't know what these guys do at night or during the day sometimes. All I know is that something was going to happen and boy was it going to change my life. This is my story and how my life changed with just one meeting with the girl of my dreams.
~*~Out of Ray's POV~*~
Ray walked down the streets. It was late at night in China and all the streets were pretty much desert. He was out getting some vegetables for tomorrow dinner. Suddenly someone grabbed into a dark alley.
Now normally Ray would have fought back. But Mariah had given him a bad beating before hand so he was in no condition to fight anyway. All he saw was a flash of gray-blue hair. Then a cold and harsh voice rang in his ears. "Give me your Bit Beast and you'll walk away safely for now."
Ray was confused on what this person meant. It sounded like a person his age. But what was a Bit Beast?
Suddenly there was another voice, "Kai let him go. He's not the one we're looking for." Ray could tell it was a girl. The grip on Ray loosened and Ray saw his captivator and the girl who saved him. Standing in front of him were a boy and girl about his age. The boy had a two-tone blue-gray hair and brown cold eyes. The girl on the other hand, had golden hair pulled back in a ponytail and soft sapphire eyes. They almost looked like light and darkness.
~*~Hoshi's POV~*~
Well this is interesting. We're out here in the middle of the night. Our sources told us that a White Tiger would be passing by here. Well my dear brother picked the wrong one. White Tiger or not this guy wasn't the one with a bit beast or at least yet.
"Kai let him go. He's not the one we're looking for," I said.
Kai let go over the boy. That's when I got a good look at him. There was no doubt that this boy was apart of the White Tigers. The cat-like features gave that away. Yet there's something different from this boy. His golden eyes were like mine. They tell a story that is not willing to be told. A secret that is locked within but couldn't be told or didn't want to be told. I suddenly feel myself being lost by those eyes. It was only until I remember why I was here, was when I snapped out of the trance. Turning to my brother, knowing that he would want an explanation to why I stopped him.
"Kai he's not the one we're looking for," I said again.
"But he'd still part of the White Tiger," countered my brother.
I inwardly groaned at my brother stubbornness. "Kai," I hissed, "He doesn't even have a Bit Beast yet, if you haven't notice yet."
"So what do you want me to do about," asked my brother. Right now would be a good time for Tyson to show up. Hearing a sound behind me I realized something, Tyson was standing behind me. Boy does that kid have good timing or what?
"I heard everything," said Tyson. Turning Kai he said in a low calm voice, "Hoshi's right Kai. Now calm down. Let's go home, Hoshi can finish up here." He glanced at me. I nodded before Tyson continue, "C'mon Kai please?"
Well I must admit it's very fun to watch my brother turn a bright red. Sure I can get Kai to do things like this, but it could take me hours. Tyson on the other hand could get Kai to anything actually almost anything. All because of love. Yep you heard me, my brother and Tyson are madly in love with one another.
Well needless to say Kai reluctantly agree and both he and Tyson walked towards home. As Kai passed me he said, "Make sure he doesn't follow us or tell anyone about this."
I nodded my head in response. I watched them leave hand-in-hand and disappear into the shadows. Turning back to the boy in front of me, I picked him up by the collar of his shirt. Growling in an dangerous tone, I said, "Listen here boy. I let you live tonight and if you want to continue living among the living I suggests you don't EVER tell about this run in. Cause if you do then I'll be force to hunt you down and kill you. Is that understood?" I let my eyes glow a dangerous red color.
The boy nodded. I dropped him and he hit the ground with a thump. Turning my back against him I walked into the shadows of the night. I knew he wouldn't mention this to anyone. Not if he values his life.
~*~Ray's POV~*~
For reason I believe every word that girl said. I knew deep down if I did tell anyone about this run in I would be dead. Picking up the vegetables from the ground from where they fell I could tell that wasn't the last thing I would see that girl. I had this gut feeling that this girl would be one I would most likely tell her about the White Tiger and what they do to me. But her eyes they reminded me of myself. Someone who doesn't really have anyone that understands you enough. That there was a secret you knew and yet no one else could possibly understand. It sacred me. I knew that Lee would hurt me really bad if I told anyone about the White Tiger's hideout. This is just great I have both sides threatening me and there's a bigger secret underneath that. And some people ask me if my life's hard. Some how I knew this was just the beginning of one big mess.
~*~
I WON I WON I WON I WON I WON I WON! I just checked this story I really really really really like. It's called Disney Beyblade. The Authoress turns the Disney songs into songs that the Bladebreakers, White Tigers, and All Stars sing too. And I won to sing with Ray. Yes I won! Hehe I guess I can get a little crazy at times. But thanks anyway!
On a lighter note I'm sure you pretty much figure out whom Ray's paired up with. By the way if you read my other stories this one has nothing to do with the others. Well review!
P.S. if you happen to read my other story, Of a deep blue I don't know if I mention it but Hoshi's real name is Cheryl as it mention in the story. Hoshi is just a nickname which I use more than Cheryl.
Warning 1: Not for Michael lovers and White Tigers lovers. Slight bashing of White Tigers and a whole lot of Michael. You have been warned.
Warning 2: Rating may go up. Mentions rape in later chapters.
Warning 3: Hints of Yaoi in it. Not to much though.
Warning 4: Ray is paired up with OC if don't like leave
Disclaimer: Nagareboshi doesn't own Beyblade
I dedicate this story to LingXiaoyu (Did spell it right?) In thanks for chosing me. Thanks look at the bottom to see what I'm talking about.
More than meets the Eye
Chapter 1 Introduction
Hello, I'm Cheryl but my brother and friends call me Hoshi. I'm sixteen and the second command in our "little group". My brother is captain or leader whatever you're going call it. What is this little group you ask? Well it's called the Bladebreakers. It sounds strange I know but that's what we are. We beyblade and have bit beast to help us. Not only that we take bit beast from others. As terrible as it sounds we're actually the good guys. How, you ask? That is a good question. We steal Bit Beast from those who either don't deserve it or it doesn't belong to them. We mostly steal parts, information and bit beasts from our rivals and enemies the White Tigers.
Hmm what else? Oh I know, meet my Bit Beast, Nekangel or Neka for short. Neka is a cat-angel Bit Beast. I'm sure you can tell by the name. Neko = cat, I dropped the o and add angel.
Now I'm sure you want to meet the rest of the team.
There's Kai our cold team leader. But as cold and rude as he acts I still love him. He is my twin brother after all. He doesn't act like it but he loves me too. His Bit Beast is Dranzer, a fiery phoenix.
Then there's Tyson. Well let's just say, he can be very annoying at time. But he's always cheerful and looks on the bright side of things. He wants to be the best there is when it comes to beyblading. Well he certainly got a long way to go seeing that he has to beat me and Kai first.
Yeah Tyson actually did the unthinkable. He beat Kai once and actually got my cold-hearted brother to smile for no reason. I didn't even have to help, Tyson did by himself. I couldn't believe my eyes.
Well any way, Tyson's Bit Beast is Dragoon. This blue dragon Bit Beast just rocks the sky with his storm attack.
Now we can't forget Max. This kid is so cheerful it's freaky. But like Tyson he always looks on the bright side. His Bit Beast is Draciel more of a defensive Bit Beast but is someone not to underestimate.
Then there's Kenny or Chief. He upgrades all of ours blades and is like a little brother that keepings on bugging you for money. Actually to be more correct he bugs you about eating right and practicing for our tournament, but he's cool. Dizzi, his Bit Beast who's stuck in his laptop, can be just as annoying but then you just can't live with out them.
So there you have it. This my team or rather my second family. I would tell you more about me and the rest of the team but Kai has a mission for Tyson, him and me. Oh well I guess this will just have to wait. What I didn't know was that this mission well was going to change my life.
~*~
Hello there. I 'm Ray. I'm sixteen and living with my friend Mariah. My friends and I call ourselves the White Tiger. I guess I'm the odd ball in our group. It would explain why the others treat me like dirt, but I'll live though no matter what they do to me. Even if they do hit time to time. Why not fight back time-to-time or even leave? Well I guess it's the fact that I nowhere else to go and these guys are my only family even if they hurt me.
There's Lee leader of the White Tigers and we can't forget Mariah. A girl who I love like sister but she treats me like a slave. Then there's always hungry Gary and mischief Kevin. I don't know what these guys do at night or during the day sometimes. All I know is that something was going to happen and boy was it going to change my life. This is my story and how my life changed with just one meeting with the girl of my dreams.
~*~Out of Ray's POV~*~
Ray walked down the streets. It was late at night in China and all the streets were pretty much desert. He was out getting some vegetables for tomorrow dinner. Suddenly someone grabbed into a dark alley.
Now normally Ray would have fought back. But Mariah had given him a bad beating before hand so he was in no condition to fight anyway. All he saw was a flash of gray-blue hair. Then a cold and harsh voice rang in his ears. "Give me your Bit Beast and you'll walk away safely for now."
Ray was confused on what this person meant. It sounded like a person his age. But what was a Bit Beast?
Suddenly there was another voice, "Kai let him go. He's not the one we're looking for." Ray could tell it was a girl. The grip on Ray loosened and Ray saw his captivator and the girl who saved him. Standing in front of him were a boy and girl about his age. The boy had a two-tone blue-gray hair and brown cold eyes. The girl on the other hand, had golden hair pulled back in a ponytail and soft sapphire eyes. They almost looked like light and darkness.
~*~Hoshi's POV~*~
Well this is interesting. We're out here in the middle of the night. Our sources told us that a White Tiger would be passing by here. Well my dear brother picked the wrong one. White Tiger or not this guy wasn't the one with a bit beast or at least yet.
"Kai let him go. He's not the one we're looking for," I said.
Kai let go over the boy. That's when I got a good look at him. There was no doubt that this boy was apart of the White Tigers. The cat-like features gave that away. Yet there's something different from this boy. His golden eyes were like mine. They tell a story that is not willing to be told. A secret that is locked within but couldn't be told or didn't want to be told. I suddenly feel myself being lost by those eyes. It was only until I remember why I was here, was when I snapped out of the trance. Turning to my brother, knowing that he would want an explanation to why I stopped him.
"Kai he's not the one we're looking for," I said again.
"But he'd still part of the White Tiger," countered my brother.
I inwardly groaned at my brother stubbornness. "Kai," I hissed, "He doesn't even have a Bit Beast yet, if you haven't notice yet."
"So what do you want me to do about," asked my brother. Right now would be a good time for Tyson to show up. Hearing a sound behind me I realized something, Tyson was standing behind me. Boy does that kid have good timing or what?
"I heard everything," said Tyson. Turning Kai he said in a low calm voice, "Hoshi's right Kai. Now calm down. Let's go home, Hoshi can finish up here." He glanced at me. I nodded before Tyson continue, "C'mon Kai please?"
Well I must admit it's very fun to watch my brother turn a bright red. Sure I can get Kai to do things like this, but it could take me hours. Tyson on the other hand could get Kai to anything actually almost anything. All because of love. Yep you heard me, my brother and Tyson are madly in love with one another.
Well needless to say Kai reluctantly agree and both he and Tyson walked towards home. As Kai passed me he said, "Make sure he doesn't follow us or tell anyone about this."
I nodded my head in response. I watched them leave hand-in-hand and disappear into the shadows. Turning back to the boy in front of me, I picked him up by the collar of his shirt. Growling in an dangerous tone, I said, "Listen here boy. I let you live tonight and if you want to continue living among the living I suggests you don't EVER tell about this run in. Cause if you do then I'll be force to hunt you down and kill you. Is that understood?" I let my eyes glow a dangerous red color.
The boy nodded. I dropped him and he hit the ground with a thump. Turning my back against him I walked into the shadows of the night. I knew he wouldn't mention this to anyone. Not if he values his life.
~*~Ray's POV~*~
For reason I believe every word that girl said. I knew deep down if I did tell anyone about this run in I would be dead. Picking up the vegetables from the ground from where they fell I could tell that wasn't the last thing I would see that girl. I had this gut feeling that this girl would be one I would most likely tell her about the White Tiger and what they do to me. But her eyes they reminded me of myself. Someone who doesn't really have anyone that understands you enough. That there was a secret you knew and yet no one else could possibly understand. It sacred me. I knew that Lee would hurt me really bad if I told anyone about the White Tiger's hideout. This is just great I have both sides threatening me and there's a bigger secret underneath that. And some people ask me if my life's hard. Some how I knew this was just the beginning of one big mess.
~*~
I WON I WON I WON I WON I WON I WON! I just checked this story I really really really really like. It's called Disney Beyblade. The Authoress turns the Disney songs into songs that the Bladebreakers, White Tigers, and All Stars sing too. And I won to sing with Ray. Yes I won! Hehe I guess I can get a little crazy at times. But thanks anyway!
On a lighter note I'm sure you pretty much figure out whom Ray's paired up with. By the way if you read my other stories this one has nothing to do with the others. Well review!
P.S. if you happen to read my other story, Of a deep blue I don't know if I mention it but Hoshi's real name is Cheryl as it mention in the story. Hoshi is just a nickname which I use more than Cheryl.