This is my first fanfiction story so please tell me what you think ps my chapter will get longer
The new pirate era
Sabondy arcipeligo: "luffy hurry up the navy's coming we need to leave" said a man wearing a black suit with a blue shirt underneath as he was adjusting his tie
"Baka i no sanji" said a average height man wearing a straw hat he had blue shorts and a red vest
as they carried on running they saw a green haired man with three katanas running the opposite way "wrong way stupid marimo said sanji"
Grove 42: naaaaaaaaaaaaami swan rooooooooooooooobin chwam your prince has arrived
"Really i don't see any prince around here" replied Nami as she started searching around
"Nami swan you are so cruel" said a dumbstruck sanji
"Yo ho ho ho luffy Chan long times no see" said brook the walking talking skeleton
"Brook how about a song as we set sail" said luffy
Ok replied brook binks ne sake wo todaki ni youkiyo as they got deeper the sound of luffy, brook, chopper, usopp, and the rest of the crew's voice disappeared the science was interrupted by a loud voice
"Rayleigh i will do it i will become the pirate king"
and with that last shout the straw hat crew monkey d luffy, roronoa zoro, Nami, usopp, sanji, nico robin, franky, and brook set sail to the new world
please review and tell me your thoughts sorry for the eras my beta has been busy but promised me that she will beta my next chapter ps my chapters will get longer in the next chapter