Chrono crusade
Hi im Alicia and mm well this is the first time I have every really posted one of my story's /fan fictions on the web and I find it a little daunting :/ as for this story I am not really shore were it will lead because im really one of those writers that just go with the flow and don't particularly pan ahead :/ so I apologise in advance is it all seem a little scatty at parts but I would really like some criticism and I hope to continue with this story :D
Disclaimer: I do not own chrono crusade or any of the characters in the series I just enjoy using others ideas and adopting them in my own ways…
prologue
It was dark too dark.
It was cold too, to say the least.
However if he wanted to be complacent then chrono could have just described it as feeling like freezing the world hottest solution and swallowing it hall so that your body would be over comb by mind numbingly cold heat.
But as I am shore you know chrono wasn't real the complacent type or even the 'human' type for that matter.
His hellish devils body had com accustomed to the cold due to his un-earthly low body heat.
Which of course was a surprise to most seems him coming from the fiery depths of hell and all, but alas it is not the fiery hell one is lead to believe but the fires of hell are actually piercingly cold causing even the very strongest devils to shriek in pain.
But that didn't matter right now. none of the only thing on chrono mind right now was a whirl wind of 'why?'
Why am I here?
Why am in in this form?
And why.. why am I alone?
Where in the hell? … No heaven is rosset?
The last thing chrono recalled was sitting on the porch of his and rossets short-lived but utterly loved home in the country and them dying in each other's arms.
So ? how was that? If you have any ideas im open for suggestions but you would probly want to use those for your self :/ any way thanks for reading this and I will hopefully be posting the first chapter some time this week so yeah
p.s love you all
p.s.s please review