Hi , guys ! :D Long time no see. After my first story , I tought I will never be able to write a story again. Yes, I was completely disappointed at my writting , but here is a new multi-chapter story . First chapter is a bit short , okay , very short , but I hope I will be able to write longer chapter next time . I would be glad to have your comments and opinions :) And , for the one who read my first story , what do you think about my grammar ? I think I improve my writing :)
So here is a story:
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Chapter 1
It was cold winter morning in the Forest of Silence . If you had been there , you would have tought that it was just causal winter morning. Maybe , for someone , it was. But not for Jasmine. She was sitting on the big brach on high tree , thinking . There was a huge mess in her mind. But it seemed like no one noticed that . Not Doom , not Sharn , not Barda , not even Lief . She was swimming in her own fears and disappointments . She was filing like no one can understand her . Again , not even Lief .
The same pictures were circulating trought her mind . Lief . With crown on his head . He was dancing . He was dancing with girl , probably Toran princess . So , this was result of all thing she did for him? When it was dangerous , she protected him as much as she could . She supported him when no one does . She loved him , when he was only son of the blacksmith . When no one knows anything about him , except that he was brave enough to stand in the way of Dark Lord . She was living like an animal in cage in that damn palace , just to be by his side . And , in the end , she dress up for the first time in elegant dress for ball . She got nothing except disappointment and sadness .
So what did she do ? She ran to the Forest of Silence . Without any word or explanation . She just couldn't stand behind him so broken . Behind him , she always wore mask of indifference and strength . She was never without it . And know , it was broken . She couldn't hide from her emotions , but she could hide from Lief .
She came to the Forest of Silence that morning. She was freezing , unaccustomed to low temperatures . Her breathing became ligher . She tought that she was going to die , but , tough she was weak , she look at the branch behind her . Filli and Kree were suppose to be there . But there was just Filli . She looked at him softly , but before she could do anything , everything left in the darkness .
Time passed . Jasmine suddenly opened her eyes . She didn't know where she was , or what happened to her . She just knew that she felt terrible . When she became more aware , she looked around her . She was in her old house . But how ? Then , she heard the steps . She reflexively reached for her knife , but someone took it away . She turned around to see who was that . And then she saw ….
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So , here it is ... Story is not clear right now , but , hey ! It is only first chapter . Write reviews please :)
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Thanks for reading ...