I'm re-writing this chapter becuase I got some really amazing constructive critisim from TheWrtrInMe and I feel like I could do much better so, here it goes.

Somewhere Up In Mars.

"Tim, where's the rock?" Lila asked her husband, walking into his hi-tec office where he was working. The office had cameras every-where so that he could see what was going on in his home-planet of Mars.

"What rock, dear? Number 024678?" Timothy asked.

"Yes, that one." Lila said, sitting down next to Timothy to view the cameras.

"It said that it was sent to Ms. Wakerburg an hour ago." Timothy said.

"Well, where is it now?" Lila asked.

"Uh, oh." Timothy said, nervously shifting in his seat.

"What?" Lila asked.

"It's in Seattle, Washington." Timothy answered.

"You sent an alien baby fetus to Earth?" Lila asked, slapping her husband across the face.

"Yes." Timothy said.

Back To Seattle

Freddie saw Sam walk out of the door to the Bushwell. She was walking closer to a strange rock with a pink glow in the middle of the town, right outside of Seattle. "Sam, what the hell are you doing?" He asked, before pulling a sweat-shirt over his head and walking out the door, closer to the strange pink rock. "SAM!" He called trying to get her attention.

"Freddie." Sam whispered, waiting for her boyfriend to walk closer to her before she continued walking. She walked closer to the pink rock and laid a hand on it.

"SAM!" Freddie said, putting his hand on top of hers in an attempt to get it off. The rock pricked both of their fingers.

"OW!" Sam and Freddie screamed, jumping backwards. The light transfered out of the rock and landed on Sam's stomach, staying there for a second before vanishing.

"Sam, do you feel any different?" Freddie asked, slowly walking closer to his girlfriend.

"Yeah, I feel worse, like I'm going to puke." Sam said. Freddie thought about what had happened for a moment before he came to a conclusion. He wasn't sure what had happened, he just knew that he had to get Sam to a doctor, NOW!

I hope you liked this, I personally like this one a lot better because it gives so much more detal then the last. Please R & R, the next chapter will be up soon!

PLEASE REVIEW!~Juli