I'm deciding to rewrite this story, considering the REAL name of the man on the destoried boat,

Also, I recently learned the Sharks name is "Bruce"

Ben Garner was a farily regular guy, who always loves going on his boat. He pratically lives on the thing.

Unkown to him today, will be his last boat ride.

It was late at night.

Bruce was swimming around trying to find something to eat. When he noticed the shadowy figure of Ben's boat. And started heading up.

Ben was sleeping when suddenly he felt a large force hit his small boat. "What the hell was that" Ben though, before he looked down at the water, looking for wharever it was that hit him.

All was quite.

Suddenly Bruce leaped into the air, and David quickly moved. But the creature. Avoiding Brice from decapitating him, but the huge great white still managed to bite into the back of Ben boat, completely destoring it, in one lone bite.

The impact made Ben fall off the boat, and he cut his leg on a sharp piece of wood.

Smelling the blood, gave Bruce even MORE reason to attack. And Ben knew this and tried swimming to a near shore.

Bruce's fin cycled around him abit, and Bruce wipped his tail against Ben, very harsely.

Ben was still swimming for it, but suddenly Bruce grabbed him from off view, and Ben was seen being quickly tossed under, in a matter of seconds.

From under water. Ben saw Bruce intensely holding his leg in its jaws, and dragging Ben deeper and deeper into the dark ocean ground.

Ben tempted everything possible to escape the unnaturally large Shark's bone crushing jaws.

Eventually Ben got loss, but cost him his entire leg.

But still, Ben used the moment to start sprinting to the serface.

Noticed him, and quickly jumped over, knocking Ben against a wall like area, and Ben screamed horribly before being ripped to pieces, carzing the water to be filled with great amounts of blood.

At the end all that was left of Ben was his chewed up head, witch floated to the bottom of the ocean, Bruce spat out a tooth, witch landed at the same spot.

Both of witch would be found by Hooper in the film.

With lots of blood coming from his mouth, Bruce swam off, happy with his meal.