This is my first story so I am encouraging reviews and I would enjoy a few tips on where it could be improved, I'm not saying I will implement it but I will consider it. I decided to kick it off at the start of the school day.
No disclaimers for this, I have made up the characters and story line so I am pretty sure I own it.
Warning: flaming is discouraged on my stories, failure to comply will result in a visit from Chuck Norris P.S. You may be kicked
Jackal walked to his class room and took his seat. Most people just hung out in the room, chatting with their friends, but Jackal just stared out the window. He was thought to be odd by most people. I guess if you consider a good sense of danger odd.
When the teacher walked in everyone took their seats and began taking notes. Suddenly, in the middle of class Jackal stood out of his seat and climbed the wall onto the ceiling like a lizard or insect. He crawled to the nearest vent and managed to get inside of it. Three seconds later the principal came in looking for him. "he went into the vents" said one of the male students. The principal rubbed his head and searched for him.
Jackal eventually reappeared after class and stretched his muscles "I swear those vents are shrinking." Jackal pulled out his lunch and went outside to a bench to eat. When he was finished he noticed a familiar figure in the distance, and walked towards it. "Hey Seiki." he said high fiving his childhood friend.
"What did the principal want" he asked with a few ideas already in mind.
"I may or may not have stolen the bolts off his tires...along with the doors" he replied putting his hands in his pockets and walking to the town.
Seiki scoffed and followed Jackal "Where are you going we going? School hasn't been let out yet."
Jackal walked through town into the market district. It was a windy day so he figured he may as well get a haircut to keep his hair from irritating him. "maybe I should color it" he pondered messing with his 5" long black bangs. "what color?" asked Seiki, who would never cut the blonde hair he loved so much. "Blue" Jackal responded as he came to a halt and 1 second later a man came tumbling backwards out of a bar as though he'd been punched.
"I could have fallen over" he said to Seiki as he started walking again. He walked into the salon and got a haircut along with getting it colored blue. The next day of school was going to be interesting.
The rest of his day went according to his everyday schedule. He went home ate dinner and went to bed.
He never really slept for long. He only needed about 4 hours of sleep then he could stay awake for a week. He spent the rest of the night walking through the silent town, as if he was patrolling for something. Most people never noticed, and when they did they dismissed it as a dream.
He was walking through the farm fields when he heard a growling sound from behind him. "there you are." he said as he turned to face the 12 foot tall chimera that stood before him. "Well aren't you a rare sight" Jackal snapped his fingers and a pillar of amethyst crystal rose up impaling the chimera. "if only you were a challenge" he dissipated the crystals and disposed of the dead chimera. He then went home and prepared for school.
Jackal was late to class the next day due to helping an old lady with groceries. When he finally made it too class he burst through the door and roundhouse kicked the teacher, which he would probably regret later, and sat in his seat. Everyone looked at him with dropped jaws at what he just did.
When the teacher got up he requested that Jackal go to the principal's office, and Jackal complied. On his way out he saw a girl sitting outside the door. Looking surprised at the boy with the short blue colored hair that had just entered class with a ruckas being immediately sent out
"wow" Seiki muttered, not expecting that to happen, but everything Jackal did usually happened for good reason. Once the teacher had lost his lightheaded-ness he announced a transfer student. He gestured for her to enter and she introduced herself as Naomi Kuroki. "Maybe this is why Jackal got himself sent away" he said to the student next to him.
Jackal: I actually just wanted to kick the teacher
Me: I don't care I write what I write so shut up and deal with it
Jackal: CAMOFLAUGE disappears
Me: O_o