Hi, Guys I decided to rewrite this story and here is the first chapter =)
This story is heavily inspired by Yla568's TF-The messanger comic, Transformers: Exodus and is set in the Prime universe.
Warning: my naive language is not english. English is my second and I'm still learning. I am 16 by the way.
CHAPTER 1
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Cybertron home planet of the strong and mighty cybertronians, autonomous robotic organisms that inhabited the planet. There were different eras on the planet but the greatest time of peace and prosperity on Cybertron was called "the Golden Age".
But all things that has an begining...has an end. Before the end of "the Golden Age" there was "the Age of Wrath" Cybertron was invaded by the quintessons, a race created by one of the thirteen original Primes or more precisely Quintus Prime. They conqured Cybertron and saw themselves as a more intellectual race than the cybertronians.
They ruled Cybertron for a time and most of the population has no memory or document writen down during this time. While it was true that the quintessons was more advance than the cybertronians they weren't stronger and the cybertronians were able to push back the quintessons from their homeworld.
The removal of the quintessons had gained the cybertronians the technology to build space bridges and spacecrafts, so they could spread to the stars and colonize other words.
Though the space bridges had a set back. One day a ship encountered a rust plauge and the plauge spread trough the space bridges, killing millions.
Because of that Sentinel Prime had to destroy the space bridges and impose the caste system. The caste system was a heirarchy system that every cybertronians that came out from the Well, was sorted into. There was a high class and they often worked in the goverment, as scientist or artist. The middle classes were mostly construction workers and engineers, but could be working with programing and data. The lower class were labourer, working in industries and mines.
While this system was effectiv many cybertronians disagreed with this system espacially the lower class. One of those mechs were Megatronus that later would be known as Megatron. A gladiator who belived in a just society. Megatron gained many followers and caught the attention of the high Council.
One middle class cybertronian known as Orion Pax agreed with Megatron and they became close friends. Orion was student to Alpha trion who sought an appointment with the Council to ease the tension that surrounded the planet.
Megatron presented his ideals to the Council and arrogantly demanded to become the next Prime. Orion whoever didn't belive violence was the best means to achive justice, the Council sparks and minds were moved by Orion's words and proclaimed Orion to be the next Prime.
Megatron stormed out of the building and cut all tips to Orion and the Council. He proclaiming war and it was thus begining the civil war between Autobots and Decepticons.
Iacon the capital city of the Autobots has fallen into Deception hands. This city once stod for might and justice.
Now...it's a battlefield.
The Autobots are repeatedly trying to get it back but with no succsess. They haven't been able to win any major battles since Optimus...disappeared.
Megatron is the current ruler of Cybertron having all cities under his control. The Autobots had control over Iacon and Kalix but now Iacon has fallen.
The Autobots are fewer with eatch passing day and some has lost hope of ever winning this war. But. Sometimes the outcome of a war depends only on a little thing. And now one Autobot has found something, something that could bring back their courage and hope.
If...
He can stay alive to tell his friends.
A yellow and black Autobot slam a door open and takes one step out of his hiding place. Bumblebee takes a calming breath and looks around to see if anyone has followed him. "Phu...", he breath out relived. "Maybe they lost my trail now."
Bumblebee is standing on top of a building in an alley, beside the door he sees a Deception poster about joining the Deceptions. He frowns and looks around again. "No Decepti-creeps in sight, looks like I'm good today."
Though 'Bee may have spoken to soon, as Deception soldiers appear on the edge of a building over him. They localized his energy signal and followed it here. "There! Get him!", the vehicon commander shout. "He must not escape!" Megatron will not show them any mercy if Bumblebee gets away with what he stole.
"Scrap! Can't you guys just give up!" Bumblebee start running while the vehicons load their blasters. He must get away if he doesn't it will be the end for all Autobots. "I bet you can't catch me", Bumblebee taunts.
"FIRE!" 'Bee continue running but get closer and closer too the edge of the building. He can't jump that long and it's too little space for him to transform. "Okay think-think-think...the only way is down", Bumblebee thinks for himself. He can only hope that it's not so far down.
The blasts hit the ground only a few centimeters from 'Bee's feet. He can hear the sound of blasters fireing behind him and is terrified that he will get shot. Bumblebee takes a deep breath and jumps off the building.
Bee falls and falls...until he hits something and his optics goes dark. Falling unconsious.
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END OF CHAPTER 1
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