Hey this is my second attempt at a fanfic, my first one went so well I had to take it down XD. Tell me what you think, I would love to get a review for this one :P.
"If the Earth could sing it would sing the song of broken promises, it would sing it to the tune of miracles, on the stage of our lives."
Michael Hindley, a few seconds ago.
The galaxy is filled with thousands of planets, no doubt each one holds something special, and each one is a treasure. Then why did they come to our treasure?
It started years ago, when petty things such as the absence of a button from a coat would concern us. It was a cloudless December night despite the cold some people just wanted to gaze at the stars, since they had been absent for so long. It was then that a great blue streak of fire illuminated the cold winter sky. The streak soared thought the sky growing larger every second, every eye was upon it, round the world people huddled around television sets hoping to see the new blue star. Men of science where most astounded by it as their instruments told them that it was just beyond mars. One question rang out thought the world that night; it echoed the thoughts of a one race of life.
What is it?
By sunrise the comet was closer it was just past the moon, it was then that the sense of awe that had enveloped the world turned to one of fear. For this object would surely leave it mark on the surface of the earth, and it was likely that that mark would cost the world dearly. However as the object approached the earth, a remarkable event occurred and the object slowed and delicately pushed its way thought our atmosphere just above the skies of Canada. Now lets us experience this event first hand from one Wendy Testuarburger.
Wendy's P.O.V:
Wendy fell backwards onto her bed she wore her normal attire that had not changed much since her childhood, she wore bright yellow jeans, A thick purple coat with large black buttons holding the two sides together. Her face was that of any teenage girl; so full of product, her eyes where a deep earthly green, almost brown unless you looked closely. Her hair was the colour of charcoal, this was only in shade however its texture was that of velvet, she normally wore on her head a pink beret, but this lay on a table not far away. At this moment in time Wendy was on vacation with her Parents in the Canadian city of Calgary. Her parents had insisted on going away on Christmas, so that Wendy could " experience Christmas in different cultures", but Wendy was a smart girl, her test papers proved that , she knew it was so that they could look at retirement homes, so that when Wendy finally moved out of the house they could fly off to their retirement home and leave behind the dangerous life that South park offered. But Wendy was content to play along. Wendy reached in her pocket and grabbed her phone, she was happy to have an Iphone, it was in Wendy's opinion the most amazing device made by man. She quickly phoned her go to girl, Bebe Stevens. The phone rang three times, until a click was heard then, a intake of air.
"Hey darling" Wendy said in a sing song voice, a slight smile growing on her lips
"Hey Hun, how's Canada" said Bebe Stevens in the same singsong voice Wendy had used.
"Cut the crap Bebe, You know why I called" Wendy said in what she hoped was an angry voice.
"you calling about that stick up your arse" Bebe said in very casual voice.
Then a moment of silence followed , which was shortly replaced by the laughter of the two girls.
"So did you see it then?" Bebe asked in an eager voice Wendy could almost imagine Bebe leaning closer to her phone.
"Course I did it's literally, coming down right next to the city I'm in" Wendy said in a excited voice.
"Oooooh this is so exciting Bebe" Wendy said almost jumping up and down on the spot.
"Oh I know it's gonna be so cool" Bebe said her excitement levels nearly matching Wendy's.
" So how's Stan then?" Wendy asked her voice returning to normal.
"God Wendy I don't know, why don't you call him and find out." Said Bebe her voice was as if she was explaining something to a very small child.
"Oh yeah sorry Bebe, call you back" Wendy said, some embarrassment creeping into her voice, her cheeks had turned somewhat red
"Ok then baby" Bebe said her voice suddenly going very high pitched and sweet.
Wendy chucked at her friend, then ended the call. She quickly Selected Stan marsh from the contact list, but before she could press call, a tremor shot though the ground sending tables and chairs to the floor, as well as Wendy's Bert, as she bent down to scoop it up, suddenly a bright blue light filled the room, the light was so intense that her windows appeared to made from the blue light, Wendy quickly stuffed her phone into her pocket and placed her Bert on her head. With that she dashed out of her bedroom toward the hotel room balcony, as she stepped into the sitting room, A new feeling washed over Wendy this was not excitement of eagerness, no this was the cold grasp of terror, something suddenly felt wrong. She didn't want to be in this place anymore, she wanted to be in South Park with her friends and with her Stan. As Wendy stood there fighting with the terror that now gripped her, she was horribly thrust back into reality by a chorus of screams coming from the streets, and the sound of explosions. It suddenly occurred to Wendy that her parents must be down there.
"oh shi*" Wendy said out loud, and with that she had run towards the doorway towards the stair well , as she raced down the stairs, she heard footstep ascending the stairs fast, she rounded a corner to she a tall man with a greying ginger beard and hair, dressed in jeans and a chequered shirt, holding in his arms a Women with short black hair streaked with silver wearing a flowery summer dress, her face was turned towards the man's chest as he carried her, but Wendy saw crimson stains on the mans shirt.
"WENDY!" her farther shouted his brown eyes widening, Wendy saw that her mother did not stir at her name.
"D-d-d dad" Wendy stammered her eyes fixed on the limp body of her mother hanging in his arms.
"Wendy get back to the room. I be right behind you." He said his voice starting to crack.
"But dad whats?"
"Just go. Go and hide" Her farther shouted pointing at her his voice was now heavy with pain, Wendy thought she saw some tears leave his eyes.
Wendy just stood there, eyes wide, she tried to say something, her farther fell to his feet placing her mother down on the stairs being careful not to turn her face to Wendy. "Please" he mouthed, Wendy gave him one last look and ran, she ran back to their room and hid in the kitchen she cried all the way, she cried until she heard footsteps entre her room with that, she stopped and pushed herself further into the cupboard she was hiding in. The footsteps sounded to soft to be human, Wendy thought, suddenly she heard a sound that chilled her to the bone, the door to their room was being opened.
Stan's P.O.V
"I still can't quite believe it" Kyle exclaimed in a excited voice, as both Kyle and Stan walked down the snow lined road.
"Yeah it's pretty cool" Stan said in a voice which hardly echoed that of Kyle's excitement.
"pretty cool, Stan an alien object will be landing on earth in a couple of minutes!" Kyle's almost shouted this last part, his green eyes widening with each word.
"yeah well let's just get to Bebe's house and watch then" Stan said in a slightly frustrate voice, Kyle just nodded, and they both quicken their pace thought the snow covered streets of south park. Minutes later they arrived at Bebe Stevens house, Kyle excitedly knocked seconds passed then the door was flung open by Bebe Stevens herself, not much had changed about Bebe Stevens since elementary school except for her height of course, and as Kenny regularly pointed out her chest size.
"Hey guys" she exclaimed as she launched herself into their arms, both Stan and Kyle hugged her back, smiles starting to appear at the corners of their mouths.
"hey it started yet?" Kyle asked his voice eager.
"Just about to come on in" she said as she ushered them inside quickly closing the door on the cold of south park.
As Stan and Kyle entered Bebe's sitting room they were greeted with a chorus of "hello" and "s going on", as well as the eager face of their entire collage class. They quickly located Kenny sitting with his back to the sofa, next to him sat a rather bored Eric Cartman.
"hey guys" Stan said sitting down next to Kenny, Kyle quickly sat next to him.
"sup guys just been keeping track of Redy" Kenny smirked nodding his head up to the red haired girls that sat above him on the sofa. A grin appeared on this girls face.
"been keeping track of you to, you man whore" she said a evil grin appearing on her face.
"so flattering" Kenny smiled, she smiled back, the evil grin had been replaced with a friendly glow.
"Hey Stan, Wendy is pretty lucky to get to see this first hand, huh" Shouted token across the rabble of excited teenagers.
"Yeah that's my girl" Stan shouted back, a goofy smile had started to appear on his face.
"Hey Stan did Wendy call you?" Bebe asked as she walked in her sitting room a bowl of popcorn in her hands.
"No she call you then?" Stan said turning to Bebe, his eyes hungry for answers.
"Yeah, she must have a bad signal." Bebe said as she sat down on the sofa, placing the popcorn on her lap.
"Ok turn it on then" shouted Kyle his voice dripping with anticipation.
Everyone stopped talking all eyes turned to Bebe's television set as it flicked to life, after someone selected the news channel the anticipation in the room was so immense that, it could almost be heard on the hushed breaths of the group of teenagers. As the television turned on the face of a news anchor wearing a blue suit and tie, and brown hair came onto the screen a grim look upon his face.
"We say again, that all communications with southern Canada have been lost, it is unknown though speculated that the blue comet or to give it its scientific name, anomaly B-17. Is the cause of this, we will of course pass on any information we receive." The report then cut to a flustered looking weather girl. The silence in Bebe's sitting room that only moments ago had stagnant with excitement, now crushed in around them, everyone felt the sense of dread that it brought with it. No one wanted to break it, and voice the question in everyone's minds.
What's happened?
"St-St-Stan do, want to try and, ring Wendy." Bebe stammered Her voice was quivering with shock Stan did not look in her eyes he was afraid that he would see the tears he was so desperately fighting back. Slowly he reached in his pocket for his phone and selected Wendy's name from the contacts. He held the phone to his ear, he held his breath desperately hoping for the silence to be broken by Wendy voice.
"Hello the mobile your trying to call appears to unavailable, try calling back later." Came a computerized female voice. Stan's face fell he slowly lowered his phone from his ear, he felt a hand on his shoulder , he looked up to see Kyle' about to say something, he also noticed that all the people in the room now stared at him their face filled with shock. In an instant rage and sadness built up inside Stan, then like a cobra it struck, Stan threw is phone across the room were it shattered against the wall Stan, looked at it, thinking how the shattered pieces so resembled his heart. behind him he heard Bebe begin to cry.
Stan remembered silently leaving Bebe's house, before he had left Bebe had laid a hand on his shoulder, and tried to smile at him but the saddens in her tear marked eyes, was like a mirror of how Stan felt. He silently left her house, he silently walked home with his friends, he silently walked to his room, he silently cried all night.
So what you think? Should I continue or not, Let me know XD.