I know I had this up before, but I found some errors, and now I have severely planned out. Like, chapter-by-chapter. I literally sat there with the book and wrote down what I would do for chapter fifteen, or whatever. It's got snippets of conversation from the boooooooks! It will be exactly 31 chapters long.


Just an unclaimed kid from the Hermes cabin, that's all.

When she had stayed back at camp, she'd just been another camper. She was never singled out for anything – quests, her total awesomeness (okay, she wasn't perfect, but she had a slightly-above-healthy self-confidence), or even her odd obsession with microwavable food.

In fact, the only exiting event in her life was when she (accompanied by Casey Beyr from the Ares cabin) had joined Kronos.

And that was also when she met Ethan Nakamura.

And this is a tale of Eyepatches and Revenge.


"Are you sure we should be doing this? We could get into big trouble..."

Her companion, an unusually undersized, tanned boy from the Ares cabin, looked at her and snorted. "Scared, Mallory?"

Lacey Mallory rolled her eyes. "No, I'm not scared. I just don't want to be eaten – or maimed – or killed, though I think eaten would kind of be the same as that...But not necessarily, if you think about it...ew, mental images."

"Would you just shut up?"

"Sorry," Lacey muttered, looking at the ground. "Where did they find it?"

"They were over by the rocks, I think. Split up?"

"Sure."

Lacey flicked on her flashlight, searching for the crack in the rocks they'd supposedly found. Of course, it could be a ruse, for more attention than they already got. Sure, it was a bit...mean, to think that way, but she didn't care. It was perfect Percy Jackson and his little girlfriend – though they hadn't admitted it – the wonderful Annabeth Chase.

But, she wasn't focusing on that now. She was focusing on getting out of there. She didn't know why Casey wanted to leave, he was claimed, at least, but she didn't really care. She had someone to help, and he was good with a sword. Ares kids were useful, sometimes.

"Hey, Mallory!"

Lacey's head snapped up. "Did you find it?" she called back. Casey appeared around the group of rocks, a grin splitting his face.

"Hell yeah!"

She blinked. She hadn't known that he'd wanted to get out of Camp Half-Blood this much. He seemed genuinely excited, and the only emotions she'd ever seen Casey experience were pain, anger, and...well, the need to get some sleep.

"Coming?"

"Hm? Oh, yeah," Lacey said, following him to the entrance of the Labrynth.

"Ready?" Casey asked, eyes gleaming.

"Yeah, I guess," Lacey said. She bit her lip, looking into the dark cavern.

Casey flashed a grin at her and maneuvered his way into the Labrynth. Lacey took a deep breath and, turning off her flashlight, followed.

She landed on something soft. "Gettoff," a voice muttered from underneath her. Lacey scrambled off of her friend.

She fumbled for her flashlight and switched it on to see a bruised and annoyed Casey. "Could you have not landed on me?" he grumbled, glaring at her.

"Sorry."

"S'okay," Casey sighed. "Ready to go explore and possibly get killed?"

"Always."


So, how was it? I got rid of a few things, added a few things, y'know, stuff like that. :) And I know it's a bit short, but later chapters will be longer.