I'm starting this side project. If you read it, reviews would be wonderful.
For those of you reading my first fiction Minds Balancing Point note that I haven't given it up I'm just revamping the chapters so there more fluid. This could take a long time, since I'm rewriting each one to smooth them out, but I'll update this in the mean time.
So without further ado may I present, Ramen My Savor!
Key:
"Blah"- regular speak
"BLAH"- yelling
"Bold", dark-angry/demonic
"Blah"-flashback thought
(Settings)
RMS- inner story break
RMS
---Brief overview:
Story starts at the conclusions of the fourth Shinobi war, Sasuke has backstabbed the Leaf after coming back from Sound after disposing his teacher. Sasuke has started his own hidden village on the underground remains of Sound that he calls the village of the Wind Mill in honor of his blood line. Submerged in a onesided war against four of the five major powers and rogue nin. Can Naruto stand up to this adversity this time without the help of the parished?
RMS
Konoha looked bleak; its denizens littered the streets like maggots covering a dead flesh carcass. The Hokage Mountains faces half-fallen half-crumbled long since entrapped and murdered women and children escaping through the emergency tunnels.
The rookie nine had fallen one at a time picked off at the least opportune moments.
Hinata had since risen in ranks and gained the name of the Violet Fist, killed in action in a Suna, Iwa conspiracy against Konohagure along with Chouji and a pregnant Kurenai.
Kiba an elementally renowned tracker burnt alive in his own home. The irony, the beastly man known for his extraordinary senses intoxicated by the smell Ink and blood coating his bedroom paralyzed by the gift he prided himself the most in that inadvertently lead to his pre-cremation with his son of two years crying hysterically on daddy's chest wondering why daddy couldn't wake up.
Shino the head of the esteemed Aburame had made it into anbu before any of the others. Shino drowned in the rapids of River Country, betrayed by small army Ne agents posing as Anbu some of them included his own classmen.
Sai the estranged artist of the Konoha killed in a confrontation with Danzo, killed and dissected in cold blood after being caught overhearing a plot between Danzo and Orochimaru.
Shikamaru and Temari the greatest Tacticians of the Nations died arm in arm sharing deaths embrace, back stabbed by an enraged inebriated, bodily-possessed Kankuro and the legion of puppet users under the late Sansori's command.
Ino went M.I.A in an undercover mission in Kumo years ago; her head sent back to the Rokudaime in a cheap wooden box complete with a letter and live video recording of the things that haunted the Rokudaime to this very day.
Team Gai was, killed in a conjoined assault between the remnants of the Akastuki and Sound. Lee and Gai opened all eight gates a piece after Neji's death.
The Hyuuga was the first to die struck in his blind spot by a spider web like spear. Gai and Lee merciless thrashed all the sound Nin and exterminated three of the last five members of the Akastuki, youth to hell retribution the only thing on the minds of the beasts of Konohagure.
Though they bested the sound Nin, reinforcements that arrived from Kumo, took the tired green men from behind, and forced them to watch as each individual Kumo Nin and Kisame rape Tenten in turn.
Lee made a break for Tenten and broke Kisame's neck with a Konoha Senpu but then was too battered to protect himself any farther. In addition, Gai was too, chakra exhausted and physically worn to continue and an indifferent Pein put Lee away.
Gai now brittle with age at 62 could do nothing but shed his youthful tears and plead with his attackers to stop on hands and knee before he too was executed by bodily possessed, nude, cut covered Tenten.
Tenten according to Konoha's resources was lost in a prostitution slave ring in the underground.
Kakashi and Asuma died fending off the freshly unleashed Ichibi assault in the Suna Konoha conspiracy.
Gara of the Sand unable to keep command of his tenant[s] due to years of strain on his seal performed Seppuku disgraced with his actions and lack of will power when he retained control, taking his mad brother Kankuro with him to his sandy demise.
The Konohamaru corps died somewhere between a chain reaction of explosions and the biological ware instrumented by the now deceased Orochimaru long since killed by his protégé Sasuke.
The only thing left of the Konohamaru corps was the bloody beat-up trademark scarf of Konohamaru, loitered on the crater that once was the Ichiruka Ramen Stand.
A surprise and unforeseen nuking that had taken Ayame and old man Ichiruka with it.
Tsunade of the Sannin was killed in a drunken sleep in the midst of her office by a curse mark possessed Shizune, then Shizune by a anger induced Jiraiya. Shizune had received the curse mark from the snake himself after he snuck into Konoha one night and in attempt to put Jiraiya under his control with a perfected curse mark. Sadly for Shizune Orochimaru's spy's had given him the wrong directions.
Jiraiya died in an ambush against Pein of the red moon organization. The aged Sannin held his ground and pushed his ex-student to his limits matching Pein Ren'nigan with his Sage mode, had it not been for a surprised interference by Madara he might have come out with fresh oxygen to spare.
What remained of the clans was, exterminated in a terrorist bombing inside each individual clan home three hours before the Rokodaime's inauguration.
The only thing left only thing left was last three members of Team 7 and a child no older than ten…
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(On top the crumbly remains of the Hokage Mountain)
"TEME"! The blood battered Rokudaime Hokage of Konohagure snarled.
Sasuke paid Naruto no mind converging, his attention to the package held nimbly in his right arm.
"GIVE HER BACK", Naruto shouted.
Sasuke eyed Naruto's changes and frowned. "Is that any way to greet a friend"?
Naruto's face turned a dry shade of red. "You lost the title of friend the day you took my eyes away". Naruto growled.
Sasuke's frown resonated. "If I recall correctly Naruto-kun it was your Sakura-chan that butchered your…'pretty blues', not I."
Naruto stared steely at Sasuke.
"After all I was the one kind enough to give you a new set, wasn't I"?
"Kind my blond ass you abducted me"!
Sasuke eyes twinkled darkly. "Abducted, drugged, experimented… all dust in the wind as far as I'm concerned".
Naruto looked taken aback. "You what"?
Sasuke placed the flat of his available hand over his mouth.
"Oops", Sasuke said with a chiding smirk.
Sasuke chuckled and waved his free hand at Naruto dismissively. "Guess I forgot you slept through that", the raven-haired ninja taunted.
Naruto formed fists. "You BASTARD", Naruto yelled charging the Uchiha head first in blind rage.
While Naruto rushed Sasuke red faced, Sasuke looked back towards the conscious bundle in his arms then looked to the incoming blond-Kage.
Sasuke predatorily smirked. "Think about what I'm holding Naruto", Sasuke called out to Naruto taking out his Chokutō on his right shoulder with his left hand placing it to the nozzle of the burlap bag in a clean motion.
Naruto stopped in his tracks tears threatened to escape his once cerulean now mismatched eyes…. Sai's eyes...
Naruto looked at the ground at his feet standing shoulder to shoulder with Sasuke.
"Why", Naruto muttered barely audible.
Sasuke stroked the bag in his arm and drew a stray whimper. "You brought this own yourself Naruto-kun".
Naruto raised his head to eye level with Sasuke. "What the fuck are you talking about bastard"?
Sasuke glowered albeit at Naruto. "Language Naruto, language have you know sense of decency … there are children present after all", Sasuke finished with a smirk placing his blade deeper into the bag. A small red blotch started to spread visibly outside the bag matching a bloodcurdling scream from within.
Naruto stepped back fear on his face. "STOP"! Naruto shouted to Sasuke.
Sasuke tightened his grip on his Chokutō. "Now why would I ever do that Naruto, enlighten me".
Naruto face reddened more noticeably. "STOP SCREWING WITH ME AND LET HER GO"!
Sasuke puffed his lips and remained silent.
A ninja with a Haiti adorning the Uchiha crest on the forehead protector appeared.
The brown mopped ugly scared Chunnin kneeled in front of Sasuke ignoring a slowing enraging Naruto.
"Lord Sasuke… mission accomplished". The Chunnin uttered. Sasuke smirked in satisfaction and dismissed his soldier who had then turned to face a now anxiety stuck Naruto.
Sasuke looked at Naruto in disgust. "Pathetic, you live so closely to your social attachments Naruto, it's left you weak."
Naruto didn't respond as he casted a mourning look into space. "Th-that w-was I-Iru…
Sasuke looked darkly at the bag in his arms. "Surprised Naruto? Surprised that one of your dearest companions would betray you again. You're too much like that fool Hiruzen for your own good".
Naruto didn't move nor reply just stared plainly at the bag in Sasuke's arms.
Sasuke started to redden at his inattentive audience.
"Now it's time that you make a decision Naruto, one last chance", Sasuke hissed into Naruto ear.
Sasuke took a couple of steps away from Naruto and roughly dropped the bag in his arms on the ground and untied it exposing a little blond blued girl no older than ten.
Sasuke pushed his shin into the back of the little one and pressed his blade onto the base of her neck. "Either you surrender all allegiance to Konohagure, and joined me as my vessel and I kill the thing you hold most dear. On the other hand, I beat you down and make you…. Well let's just say some of my troops have strange fetishes for ten year olds." Sasuke finished cackling darkly. "And then I kill her".
A lone tear caressed Naruto's cheek. Why", Naruto spluttered innocently.
"You can blame your fool counsel for that". Sasuke said chuckling.
Naruto didn't reply, only looked on at Sasuke in his face a mix of emotion, turmoil, regret and confusion being the most perceptible.
Sasuke looked at Naruto dumbly. "Okay dobe I guess I'll have to break it down for ya. I got what I wanted from the albino bastard. I put him away and now that I got what I wanted from Konoha… It's time to put Leaf away… for good this time"
Naruto bit his bottom lip. "But has the leaf ever done to you", Naruto asked choosing his words carefully.
Sasuke's eyes flashed red. "You Konoha fuckers took away my purpose, you took away what I strived for, and you made me forsake my clansman and destroyed my life's ambitions before my very eyes. You have made all the pain and suffering all the isolation and training I had to put myself go to waste."
Naruto eyed his daughter slowly. "Sasuke you didn't have to"….
Sasuke tighten his hold on the girl and pierced skin. "DON'T YOU TELL ME WHAT I DID OR DIDN'T HAVE TO DO NARUTO. YOU DON'T KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO BE TRULY ALONE HOW IT FEELS TO HAVE EVERYTHING TAKEN AWAY FROM YOU BEFORE YOUR VERY EYES WHILE YOU STAND IN LINE LIKE COWS FOR SLAUGHTER. WHERE ALL YOU CAN DO IS WATCH AND PLEAD, BEG AND DEGRADE YOURSELF FOR YOUR OWN SELF PRESERVATION. SO DON'T YOU TELL ME THAT WHAT I DID WASN'T NECESSARY"!
Naruto face sobered up and he opened his mouth to speak.
Sasuke knew that Naruto was about to relate so he beat him to the punch. "SHUT THE FUCK UP JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP NARUTO. DO YOU THINK YOU KNOW WHAT I WENT THROUGH? SURE, YOU THINK YOU HAD IT ROUGH. BUT DO YOU THINK I GIVE A FUCK ABOUT THE KYUUBI? I'VE KNOWN SINCE THE CHUNNIN EXAMS TWENTY FIVE FUCKING YEARS AGO"!
The female in Sasuke's custody closed her eyes in freight and broke into a cold sweat. Her breath was labored, tears refreshed the tried saltwater stains over her cheeks washing streaks through the dirt and blood on her face.
Sasuke looked down calming down vaguely. "You claim to know where I come from and what I feel, the trauma, the drama… but you don't know shit Uzumaki. However, since seemed so hell bent on saying otherwise…. I'll introduce you first hand, to what I experienced that day.
Naruto glanced coolly at Sasuke for a moment then directed his attention back to his daughter.
Sasuke sighed 'emotionally'.
"But I digress". Sasuke pulled out an old fashion hand watch a dangled it in front of Naruto with his now free right hand. "Tic, Tock…Namikaze"
Naruto looked at Sasuke flabbergasted, "How the hell do you know about that", Naruto asked slowly never taking his eyes off eyes weeping daughter.
Sasuke tapped the sharp ends of the blade against the girls neck repeatedly drawing screams and blood, though the cuts were only paper thin.
"It took some digging on my part, but it was the only way to get Iwa and Kumo to work together with me". Sasuke looked at Naruto coldly. "Especially with all the animosity you started between our nations.
Naruto gave Sasuke a sad grin. "So that's how you did it, you took advantage of Iwa and Kumo's hate of my father to your advantage… you underhanded bastard", Naruto growled.
Sasuke clicked his tongue. "Now didn't we just have a chat about that vulgar Namikaze? I know for a fact you don't adhere to such idiom".
Sasuke got a solicitous look. "I think I'll do you a favor Naruto".
The blue-eyed girl gained a hopeful looked staring watery eyed at her father.
Sasuke smirked. "You know what they say Namikaze-kun… hear no evil… speak no evil", Sasuke finished with a dark incentive.
The girls blue eyes widened in freight and began to quiver.
Naruto was too late to catch onto the significance of the message the Uchiha had sent him, and paid for it through his only child.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH"!
"MIZU"! Naruto yelled distressed as he watched Sasuke lob off the ears of his little girl and reach slowly for her mouth.
Naruto grew three crimson chakra tails and attacked Sasuke mercilessly, self-salvation be damned.
Naruto threw a rocketed fist at Sasuke who caught off guard was flung into the ruble of the Hokage mountain from the strength of Naruto's punch.
Looking down into the rubble a tear stricken Naruto whispered, "Thank you oba-chan".
Naruto hurried to his daughter's side and whispered out comforting words to settle the stilled child.
Wait stilled?
Naruto checked on his bloodied daughter and ripped off the softer, cleaner undercoating of his battle armor to stop the excessive external bleeding, Mizu was losing pints of blood by the minute.
Mizu looked up a Naruto shakily.
"Ottosan"?
Naruto opened his eyes relieved that should wasn't in shock. "Hush now hon, save your strength."
Sasuke stirred under the rubble.
Mizu coughed violently and spat a glob of crimson blood onto Naruto's white Hokage robes. "Ottosan… I can see akkasan."
Naruto kissed Mizu's forehead.
"Mizu", Naruto whispered.
"Sh-she's waving hi… why is kaachan so cold oottosan", Mizu spoke incoherently.
Mizu started to choke on the liquid escaping her body.
"Damn it", Naruto cursed to himself his hands turned a potent dark green as he performed the only medical jutsu he knew to successfully un-clot Mizu's blocked esophagus.
Mizu looked on at Naruto blankly her skin paling, "I'm cold oottosan but its not windy… and the suns shining so bright (coughs)… why am I so cold oottosan"? Mizu finished with another violent hack.
Naruto started to cry openly, he was losing her and he knew it. "Do you see a light Mizu-chan"?
Mizu eyes started to lag. "Y-yes oottosan… it's so warm... but why is kaasan so cold"?
Naruto choked out a sob and moved the girls head onto his lap continually pressing into her wounds to stop the bleeding. "The light Mizu… go to the light", Naruto chided.
Mizu's eyes started to glaze. "But kaachan's her oottosan….she says she has to stay here. Why can't kaachan come to oottosan…I want kaasan to come… why kaasan's legs broken… the lights so… cold"
Naruto cried into the blood-matted scalp of Mizu as she to fell victim to another mad man's war.
A loud pop cut into the father daughter seen as Sasuke popped his dislocated and likely broken jaw into place.
"Cute", Sasuke said whilst dusting him off.
Naruto held Mizu closer. "Bastard", Naruto growled losing his foxy characteristics.
Sasuke looked amused. "Going to fight me without foxy-kun… how noble of you Naruto"
"Bastard", Naruto chanted again.
Sasuke smirked. "If you couldn't protect the village or your little hime from me even with the fox…. What makes you think you can now?
"YOU FUCKING BASTARD"!
RMS
And that's all she wrote!
Akkasan/kaachan (ect) are different ways to say mom.
ootosan-dad
Mizu-purity
This came to me while writing my other story, so many openings to proceed this chapter. I could turn this into anything from a time travel fic too a angry vindictive terroristic Naruto fiction or even both!
Hmmm liking the sound of the later but you never know. I'm writing this story on a wim so no set plots!
How often this is updating or if it is even updated depends on you guys, no promises with this fic. I'll update whenver an idea hits me and they hit paper while I revise my other story.
All that's left is for you to review, hope you enjoyed yourselves!