Welcome to chapter one of "Una Bellezza Audace" (My Bold Beauty)! I hope you like, review and tell your fanfic friends! Great ideas, tips and help from the wonderful Portrait of a Scribe!
Chapter 1: The Auditore Brothers
Damn this accursed thing! I thought to myself walking down one of the great streets of my hometown. I wear these dresses to make my mother stop moaning at me to be a lady. Wearing a bright red dress, extending down to the ankles with frills and lace...ugh! This does not make me feel like a lady. Not. At. All. Shoving a hidden blade down a Templar's throat - now that makes me feel like a lady. I drop my skirts and take not one step when a group of boys runs past me, one of them yelling, "Uccidete l' Auditore!"
Auditore? Not Ezio again!
I lift my skirts and run after the group of boys. I know Ezio loves to fight the idiota! He could get himself killed! He is like a brother to me. I will not let him make a stupid decision that will get him into even more trouble again!
"Muoviti! Fuori dai piedi!" I tell people in the streets, softly pushing them out of my way.
"Vogliamo il vostro sangue!" A few of them said.
Good God, what did that boy do this time? The boys stop at a bridge and I unfortunately can't see past them to try and find Ezio. They have a conversation filled with insulting words when a young man's voice stands above the rest.
"Ehi, ehi! Cosa sono tutte queste parole forti sull' odio?"
Ezio Auditore. È maledetto idiota!
After an exchanging of words a rock was thrown into the air. After that all hell broke loose. About one minute later the fight was ending. My eyes went to the tall figure standing above the knocked-out men. His hair was dark and his face was handsome. Federico Auditore, joining in to finish the last of them. After that, Ezio's looked up from the man and onto me. When his eyes met mine, I couldn't help but smile at my friend.
"Beh, se non è i Auditore fratelli," I say, walking up to them.
"Lucia!" Ezio and Federico both give me a hug that I return.
"Così come sono i miei amici preferiti folli?" I ask, wrapping an arm around each brother.
Thank you for reading Chapter 1~! I hope you review to give any tips for the story! Much appreciated and welcomed! Now, writing this on my laptop at a friend's house and her reading it beside me, she gave a suggestion: Lucia could fall for La Volpe and vice versa. She says he doesn't get as much love as he deserves. So should Lucia go for La Volpe or be with Ezio?
Translaions of Italian:
*Uccidete l' Auditore! = Kill the Auditore!
*Muoviti! Fuori dai piedi! = Move! Out of my way!
*Vogliamo il vostro sangue! = We want your blood!
*Ehi, ehi! Cosa sono tutte queste parole forti sull' odio? = Hey, hey! What are all these strong words on hatred?
*È maledetto idiota! = The damn idiot!
*Beh, se non è i Auditore fratelli = Well, if it isn't the Auditore brothers.
*Così come sono i miei amici preferiti folli? = So how are my favorite lunatic friends?