Well this is my first fanfiction, so all readers are definitely going to have to help me here. I'm new and therefore know i'm crap so am waaaay open to critique and ideas and advice. Anywhoos enjoy.
Prologue
Her thick dark lashes were webs trapping prey, drawing innocents in. Escape, impossible. No choice but to fall into the trap of the molten abyss that is her eyes. Her beautiful, endless eyes, that both were a window into her soul and a tool to capture souls.
She skulked the shadows of Paris, terrifying, heartbreakingly jaded. She stood, drained carcass in hands scowling at the sky. BAM, she rammed her head into the brick wall, crumbling to the ground when she felt nothing, suffered nothing, still holding her victim in her hands.
Alice reopened her eyes, she found her sister.
Chapter 1 BPOV
All I want is to feel the pain I deserve, the result instead being a huge dent in the wall in front of me. I looked down to stare at the villain still in my hands. Who am I to call this man a villain? He killed a man, but I've killed dozens. Admittedly they were all evil and on the verge of committing dreadful things, nevertheless, I am a monster. Dejected thoughts continued to swirl around my head as I put aside the body and made my way back to the apartment that was my temporary residence.
I sat with music blaring, vibrating in the air until a scent hit me, to sweet to be human. I immediately moved to a hunting stance and listened. The thoughts were wordless, pure joy, love and friendship until a pixie-like creature burst through the door to scream, aloud and in her mind, "BELLA!".
Next second, we were both on the ground, normally this would be a distressing situation but I could see that this person was good, to the very core.
Oh my goodness, I've found you, I've found you, I've found you! The excitement of it all, we need to start spending time together immediately! Conveniently we're in Paris so a new wardrobe for Bella will be easy, we've got a lot of work to do though… I heard Alice think.
"STOP!" I screamed, embarrassed for being a little too loud. "Who are you? What are you doing here? And how do you know me? And nothing's wrong with my clothes!" I then said a little more gently.
The petite girl with the jet black hair and topaz eyes then replied, "Sorry, I'm Alice unknown last name, I don't know my human past. And I'm here for you. I can see the future and I know that you and I are meant to be the best of friends… sisters." What else did she ask? "Oh and yes, there is a lot wrong with your clothes but I suppose we could get acquainted before that changes, I can wait till tomorrow." I think, well I suppose I could plan it out in my head first. Well she is particularly beautiful; I suppose making her look good won't be hard.
I smiled, I could see the vision in her mind, and I could see that we were going to get along just swimmingly.