My Immortal

A fan fiction about a fan fiction

As written by Justin Hesse/ Niju the Neutral

(AN)

After reading the original My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie I found my self in a need to show how I liked it. I had to choose a means by which to express myself that fully covered the story, so I chose the way Tara disgraced Harry Potter. Fan Fiction. Unfortunately beyond this message, you will be able to understand most of what I write. Sorry for a lacking of Lulz, but I honestly find it neigh impossible to write in an obvious mis-fashion as Tara.

I will start off in the beginning and try to recreate the entire story, but maybe in a good way. Essentially I'm correcting her story however, if I get bored I might randomly kill off characters, including the Immortal Ebony (Enoby) and replace them with sensible people. Maybe, maybe not. If I do they will die in a means that I like and find fitting for them. Thank you and enjoy

Chapter 1

Hi, my name is Ebony Dark 'ness Dementia Raven Way. I have long ebony hair with purple streaks everywhere and is tipped red. My hair runs down my face at random intervals throughout the day, like it has a mind of its own, but is otherwise perfect in my own opinion. My eyes appear as tear drops and are a darker shade of blue. In fact some people say I look a lot like Amy Lee. (Please don't know who she is)

I would probably define myself as an average Vampire- student. You know drinking the blood of the students every now and again, but no one seems to mind, save for the fucking preps. The list of preps includes everybody but myself and myself. (If you wanted to know) Now I say that I'm an average vampire, well I kind of lied. You see I have straight teeth, you know no Fangs ad all that.

I suppose I should tell you about the school I go to. Hogwarts School of Witch Craft and Wizardry is the name of the school. Maybe I should have mentioned this earlier as well; I'm a witch (Damn one letter off). While at school we have to wear a uniform, I always get away with wearing whatever I want. I suppose if your teachers are afraid of you, you can do whatever you want. Granted it also means that they hate you for no apparent reason.

All of my clothes come from a store that is rather hard to find here in England, Hot Topic. In fact what I was wearing right now is from Hot Topic, a Black Corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I put on Black lipstick, with black eye liner and red eye shadow. I don't need any foundation; some times being a vampire has its advantages.

As I walked outside of the slytherin dormitory preps followed my every move with their eyes. Now not to be rude to them I gave them the vampire salute, unfortunately it's also known as The Bird.

"Hey Ebony." Shouted a voice.

I looked up to see Draco Malfoy running towards me. "What's up Draco?" I asked looking into his eyes.

"Nothing." He said in response

I would have loved to talk longer with him, but my friends called me over so I really couldn't