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Staying Strong
Through thick black smoke
I caught a glimpse
Of mom and dad's last moments
Their screams of pain
Pierced the still night air
Like I knife would cut through butter
Their bodies withered in pain
Like they were being attacked
By 1000 knives
I tried to help them
I really did
But someone pulled me back
They dragged me through my burning home
Like I were nothing at all
I tried to fight them
I kicked and screamed
Trying to escape
The clutches of my capture
I was dumped onto my wet green lawn
I slumped and began to weep
I was deemed healthy and well
But I felt more dead than alive
For my protectors
My parents
Have passed to the other side
Leaving me behind to cry
I felt like I was dead
Or dying at the least
How could I go on?
Now that I was all alone
Where would I go next?
How could I possibly manage
Without my parents wisdom and advice
I knew in my heart I must stay strong
That is easier said than done
It was like a chunk
Of my heart was torn out
Like I would never be whole again
I felt raw sorrow and grief attacking me
Again and again and again
The hole in my heart
Seemed to grow every second
I knew I wouldn't last long
For my heart
My soul
My very essence
Had left me
My body was like an empty shell
I tried to think
To gain composure
I tried to remember
The happy times that I once had
At that I thought I felt my soul
Becoming whole again
My life became meaningful
My body filled again
I knew my parents
Would be sad to see me die with them
I knew that they
Would want me to stay strong
To move on with life
Never to forget
And always remember
But never to be swallowed by grief
I knew that this was right
for I must stay alive
I knew I had my brother
I was not totally alone
I must move on
And forget my own pain
I knew that I was needed
Not wanted
But needed
Buy my younger brother Dan
I knew I must protect him
When no one else would
I would have to stay strong for Dan
