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Lust walked slowly through the busted door into the abandoned warehouse. She had told Wrath, Envy, Gluttony and Sloth to meet her here, and as her eyes adjusted to the darkness, she saw that they were already waiting for her.
Wrath jumped off the crate that he was perching on, and asked Lust, "Why'd you call us here?"
"Yes", Envy joined in, "Do tell."
"Well..."Lust began. "I don't know about any of you, but I'm beginning to doubt Dante. Sure, she made it clear that it was our little mission to get the Philosopher's Stone created, and then safely deliver it to her, and in return, she would transform us all into humans. But I am beginning to believe that once she has the stone, she will only use it to help herself. I don't think that she actually intends to turn us into humans. That's just her way of manipulating us."
"So then, what are you planning to do?" Sloth asked, curiously.
"I have a plan that will enable us to get the Philosopher's Stone and use it on ourselves, without Dante finding out", Lust explained.
"What happens if she does find out?" asked Wrath, wide eyed.
"I've got it planned out so she doesn't."
"And, how on earth are you going to create the Philosopher's Stone?" Sloth questioned Lust. "We can't do alchemy, minus Wrath who barely knows the basics."
"We use an alchemist of course. The Full Metal Alchemist would be easiest to manipulate. He's already looking to create the stone, and also, I've planned out what to do if he doesn't cooperate."
"Beat him to death, right?" asked Envy, grinning evilly.
"No, of course not you idiot. If he died, then who would perform the alchemy to create the stone? We'll have his younger brother hostage, and if he tries anything, we'll kill his brother."
Envy sighed, "Didn't we already try this in Laboratory 5?"
"Yes, but it'll be more planned out this time. We'll make sure this time is better than before. We'll make sure we're well hidden, so that no one will find us and stop us, like Scar did last time", Lust said. The other homunculi nodded, and agreed to the plan.
"Finally, our chance to become human!" Lust exclaimed.
"Human! Human!" chanted Gluttony.
"Let's put this plan into action", Envy said.
"Are you sure this is a shortcut?" Al asked Ed as they began to walk down the dark alley.
"Yeah, sure it is", Ed replied. They were already 2 days late reporting back to Mustang about their latest mission.
It turned out that the alley led them right to Central HQ, and Ed quickly ran in and gave Mustang his full report, (sorry that there isn't a conversation with Mustang, I wanted to get right to the point) then rushed back out, and complained to Al that he was hungry.
"OK, we'll stop at the nearest restaurant", Al said, and they started back through the alley.
Suddenly, a familiar face jumped down from the rooftop and landed in front of the two brothers.
"Envy", Ed sneered. "What a surprise."
Then they heard someone jump down from behind them, also, and they both flipped around to see their mother's face smiling back at them.
"Sloth", Al hissed, as she extended out her arm as water straight into Al's armoured body, and fit herself inside of him. That's when she began controlling him from the inside.
"Brother!" Al screamed, as Ed dodged all the attacks that Sloth forced Al to do. But Envy attacked Ed from behind, kicking him in the back, and knocking him to the ground.
Ed got right back up again, and dodged both Sloth's and Envy's attacks, while also trying to inflict some damage on Envy.
Then a third attacker jumped down from above, and landed on Ed's shoulders, forcing him to the ground. It was Wrath, and Ed recognized him right away.
"Damn it", Ed swore, as Envy kicked him in the stomach. The loud cracking noise confirmed that Envy had broken one of Ed's ribs. Then Wrath punched Ed in the back of the head, while he was still on his shoulders. Ed grabbed Wrath's ankles, and threw him into the wall.
Suddenly, Ed felt something pierce his left shoulder. He turned around to find that Lust and Gluttony had joined the group of attackers, and Lust's extended nail had gone straight through his shoulder. Before he fell into unconsciousness, because of a blow to the back of his head thanks to Envy, he seen that the homunculus had Al tied up, and were loading him into a vehicle. It suddenly occurred to him that they were being kidnapped......