Warrior Cats Gir52's Version

Chapter 1: Ravenpaw

When TigerClaw tries to attack RavenPaw, Ravenpaw tries to flee but fails, but when he tries to fight back he gets TigerClaw right in the face, he is much wounded and whimpers out, "RavenPaw I will find you, trust me I will find you, even with one eye."

RavenPaw flees and runs as far as he can and doesn't stop until he hears barking in the distance and stops and turns around to find the ShadowClan. While running towards the ShadowClan he runs into FirePaw and Blabbed," FirePaw you have got to help me TigerClaw tried to attack me and I scratched him right in the face and he said he was going to find me even with one eye, Help me I'm really scared."

"It's going to be ok just relax and WOW! You really did that, you stood up to TigerClaw," Advised FirePaw, "Here Take some of my meat you will need it if you are trying to go in to ShadowClan territory."

"No Thank you I will find my own meat if I want to survive," He denied.

"OK goodbye I hope to see you again," FirePaw replied.

"Will try my best to secretly see you, "RavenPaw answered. So then RavenPaw was off to seek out the Leader of ShadowClan, BrokenStar, But as RavenPaw was running to BrokenStar he noticed that the ShadowClan patrol was out and he ran right in to them and they took him to BrokenStar but as he was pleading for them not to kill him he asked, "May I please stay in your clan for a while? I will find meat for your clan become true to your clan and help it in as many was as possible please."

BrokenStar hissed, "Fine, but you must do as I say for ever until you reach StarClan."

He replied, "Fine that will be our deal."

BrokenStar said, "Leave now and find as much meat as you can."

So then Ravenpaw set out as he found meat and a new home for he did not like the ShadowClan very much. so he went out but he didn't get very far because he was tired and hungry so he brought meat back for the clan and then he went to rest and eat in the morning. The next morning RavenPaw woke up he went out of the bush and found everyone coming back with BlueStar in the patrols hands.

Chapter 2: RavenPaw and BlueStar

BlueStar said, "Unhand me, let me go, I need to get back to my clan," and a whole bunch more but by then she seemed like she was mumbling to herself.

"BlueStar what are you doing here?" replied RavenPaw.

"I'm here trying to save you from ShadowClan."

"Oh yeah about that I joined ShadowClan so yeah."

"Really I just thought…"

"Yeah you can release her and let her get back to her clan."

"No we cannot just release someone…"

"I said release her!"

"Ok we will just one more thing… GET OUT; get out of our clan right now."

"Fine but I am not going back to the ThunderClan, I will never go back there ever again!"

So then RavenPaw and BlueStar where traveling together across the ShadowClan lines. After that RavenPaw did not see BlueStar again he went to find a new home so he went to the twoleg place and found a timid little cat named Barley. Barley was a fun loving little kitten, he loved to play almost all day. "What is your name?"RavenPaw asked.

"My name is Barley and what would yours be?" Barley answered.

"Oh mine its RavenPaw." He said again.

"Nice to meet you, you're a strange looking cat."Barley said.

"W-w-what do you mean by that, and it's nice to meet you too." RavenPaw replied.

"Nothing, nothing at all." Barley said. After that RavenPaw was set to live with his new friend barley. But he was secretly seeing FireStar. He saw him when no one was awake so then he would be a little bit in touch with the clan he was born in.

THE END