This is the first chapter of my story. Its my first story so it would mean a lot if you guys leave some reviews. Also, tell me how I can do better on my story and let me know if I am copying someone's storyline. Sorry if there are errors in grammar. I'm not perfect. Thanks.
Oh, before i forget, I do not own The Lion King. Disney does. I only own this story and the made up characters. On with the story
Chapter 1
"Too slow Simba, I'm gonna beat you!" Bronko screamed he was running, he looked over his shoulder and didn't see Simba. "Simba?" he asked starting to get a little worried. "Simba?" he said a little louder. He retraced his footsteps and saw Simba just sitting there. What is he doing? Bronko thought. Simba was looking at something. Bronko followed Simba's line of sight and saw 4 lioness cubs sitting on a rock by the water hole. Simba's eyes were fixed on one cub in particular. Her fur literally, and I mean LITTERALLY glistened in the sunlight. She had striking sapphire eyes. Her name was Nala.
"Simba?" Bronko asked while waving a paw in Simba's face. Simba seemed to be in a trance.
"Huh, what?" Simba asked finally snapping back to reality.
"You have a crush on Nala, don't you?" Bronko asked while trying to hold back a laugh.
"No!" Simba said a little too quickly.
"Bet you do!" Bronko teased.
"No I don't!"
"Yeah you do!"
"No I don't!"
"Yeah you do!"
"No I don't!"
"Yeah you do!"
Simba finally gave in and said, "Fine. I guess I like Nala a little."
"Then go ask her out!" Bronko said.
"But we are best friends. She might think I'm wierd for asking her out"
"I bet she likes you too. She's been looking at you quite a lot lately."
"Really?" Simba asked excitedly.
"Simba, I know these type of things. Trust me."
"Alright. I'll ask her out!"
"'At a boy! Go get em!" Bronko screamed as Simba was padding off towards Nala.
TRANSITION
I was lying on a rock with my three best friends, Zana, Lola, and Kiko. I don't know why, but my eyes kept wandering over to Simba. He was talking with one of his best friends, Bronko. Simba looked so cute under the sunlight. Wait, did I just say cute? Simba was my best friend! He couldn't like me too. Could he? Before I could come up with an answer, Zana broke me out of my thoughts.
"Nala, are you looking at Simba?" she asked.
"No!" I snapped.
"Yeah you were. You like him don't you?"
"No!" Zana still wasn't convinced.
"Hey guys, Nala likes Simba!"
"They all started chanting, "Nala likes Simba! Nala likes Simba!"
I knew I couldn't get away with it now. "Okay. I guess I like Simba a bit."
"Then ask him out!" said Kiko.
I knew he didn't like me. He is the prince of Pride Rock and I'm just a stupid girl. "What if he doesn't like me?" I said
"What?" Lola asked. "Are you blind? He can't keep his eyes off you for three seconds!"
"Really? You think he likes me?"
"Uh, duh!" Zana blurted out.
"Okay. I'll go ask him out."
"You can do it right now because here he comes," Lola said.
I looked behind me and sure enough, there was Simba walking up to me. His face was alll red. I wonder why his face is red? I decided to push that thought out of my mind and do what I had to do. Now, he was standing right before me. He looked at me with those beautiful amber eyes. My heart skipped a beat. This is going to be harder than I thought.
Yeah, I know. Short chapter but this is my first story. I probably put too much dialogue in there so leave reviews about what i can do to make the story better. If I did anything good, tell me. Okay, till next time. See ya!
