Heyo0o Is SM here and I finally wrote the 1st chapter of My Big Fat
Egyptian Wedding. I would like to thank my faithful reviewers especially
Mijikai for giving me the name of Yami's father. This time I would like a
lot more reviews and I hope that you can give me some inspiration for the
story. Also, since I have no other way of communication, feel free to use
reviews to say other stuff. And please give me ideas for a side-story.
SM: OOOOOOOO Yami!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yami: What?
SM: Since u are sooooooooooooooooo hot. Would u mind doing the ugly disclaimer for me???
Yami: why me???
SM: Cause I need a big strong guy to do that for me!!!
Yami: Fine Sweet Misery does not own Yu-Gi-oh, My Big Fat Greek Wedding or anything else that might have a patent on it and everything else is hers so don't take it without asking!!! SM: Thank you!!!
Key: "words" -thoughts- anything else I will mention later
Story
"Yami!!!!"
It was an early afternoon on a cool April day in Egypt, or as cool as you can get in Egypt. Pharaoh Solomon was sitting on his throne waiting for his grandchild, Yami, to come back from his room with the Dark Magician following closely behind.
Slap, Slap, Slap.
Solomon could hear Yami's sandals hitting the hard marble floor. Just then, the sound stopped and seconds later, Yami emerged after obviously trying to calm his breath.
"Hi Grandfather!" Yami said,
"Me and the Dark Magician were just playing."
-He acts so childish for 17-
-But then again, he didn't have much of a childhood- Solomon thought quietly while he remembered what his grandson lived through.
FLASHBACK
From the early age of 8 to his pre teens, Yami had been secretly beaten by his father, Shabaka, when Shabaka had found out that Yami would be next to hold the place of pharaoh in Egypt and not himself. One day, Solomon's guard passed by during one such occasion and quickly brought the pharaoh to deal with it. Solomon was astonished with what be saw. Right in his own palace he spotted Shabaka, with his hand grasping the boy's neck; raising him high above the floor while the other was curled and ready for what seemed another in a line of many punches.
"Shabaka, what in the name of Ra do you think your doing??!!!!!"
Hearing the Pharaoh's voice, Shabaka dropped the young teen and quickly. He turned the face his father. Yami, after being released from his father's grasp sunk into the shadows in hope that he would soon be forgotten. He started clutching his soar neck, gasping softly. After some questioning that resulted in only prying more lies form his son, Solomon had heard enough to figure out that this was the explanation to Yami's mysterious bruises that were caused in 'training' with the Dark Magician. Shortly after this realization, Solomon ordered the guards to banish Shabaka from the palace and never let him back.
Reality
"Grandpa?, Grandpa!" Yami was staring at the pharaoh with his eyes deep with concern.
The pharaoh, after reliving the past looked up at Yami, studying him. After taking a closer look at him, he assured Yami that he was alright and just reflecting. Not trying to worry his Grandson, he did not mention what he had remembered.
"Yami," Solomon said, "I must say, 'You look so old'"
Yami, after hearing the familiar line was getting ready for a long speech.
"There comes a time in every boy's life when he turns into a man," Grandpa continued, not noticing his Grandson's bored expression.
"I believe that you should start looking for a wife, look in the towns for only EGYPTIAN women. And to help you with your finding, I will set a ball with all the women in Egypt to be there. Now rest my Grandson and think of what you are going to do tomorrow." With that, Yami walked off with his Dark Magician and went to bed.
-Weird, This is the first time the pharaoh has taken action on his words for my future.- Yami thought
SM: So, what do u think???
Note- 'You look so old' was from the movie My Big Fat Greek Wedding
E-mail me at Sweetmisery2790yahoo or review and I will respond
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SM: OOOOOOOO Yami!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yami: What?
SM: Since u are sooooooooooooooooo hot. Would u mind doing the ugly disclaimer for me???
Yami: why me???
SM: Cause I need a big strong guy to do that for me!!!
Yami: Fine Sweet Misery does not own Yu-Gi-oh, My Big Fat Greek Wedding or anything else that might have a patent on it and everything else is hers so don't take it without asking!!! SM: Thank you!!!
Key: "words" -thoughts- anything else I will mention later
Story
"Yami!!!!"
It was an early afternoon on a cool April day in Egypt, or as cool as you can get in Egypt. Pharaoh Solomon was sitting on his throne waiting for his grandchild, Yami, to come back from his room with the Dark Magician following closely behind.
Slap, Slap, Slap.
Solomon could hear Yami's sandals hitting the hard marble floor. Just then, the sound stopped and seconds later, Yami emerged after obviously trying to calm his breath.
"Hi Grandfather!" Yami said,
"Me and the Dark Magician were just playing."
-He acts so childish for 17-
-But then again, he didn't have much of a childhood- Solomon thought quietly while he remembered what his grandson lived through.
FLASHBACK
From the early age of 8 to his pre teens, Yami had been secretly beaten by his father, Shabaka, when Shabaka had found out that Yami would be next to hold the place of pharaoh in Egypt and not himself. One day, Solomon's guard passed by during one such occasion and quickly brought the pharaoh to deal with it. Solomon was astonished with what be saw. Right in his own palace he spotted Shabaka, with his hand grasping the boy's neck; raising him high above the floor while the other was curled and ready for what seemed another in a line of many punches.
"Shabaka, what in the name of Ra do you think your doing??!!!!!"
Hearing the Pharaoh's voice, Shabaka dropped the young teen and quickly. He turned the face his father. Yami, after being released from his father's grasp sunk into the shadows in hope that he would soon be forgotten. He started clutching his soar neck, gasping softly. After some questioning that resulted in only prying more lies form his son, Solomon had heard enough to figure out that this was the explanation to Yami's mysterious bruises that were caused in 'training' with the Dark Magician. Shortly after this realization, Solomon ordered the guards to banish Shabaka from the palace and never let him back.
Reality
"Grandpa?, Grandpa!" Yami was staring at the pharaoh with his eyes deep with concern.
The pharaoh, after reliving the past looked up at Yami, studying him. After taking a closer look at him, he assured Yami that he was alright and just reflecting. Not trying to worry his Grandson, he did not mention what he had remembered.
"Yami," Solomon said, "I must say, 'You look so old'"
Yami, after hearing the familiar line was getting ready for a long speech.
"There comes a time in every boy's life when he turns into a man," Grandpa continued, not noticing his Grandson's bored expression.
"I believe that you should start looking for a wife, look in the towns for only EGYPTIAN women. And to help you with your finding, I will set a ball with all the women in Egypt to be there. Now rest my Grandson and think of what you are going to do tomorrow." With that, Yami walked off with his Dark Magician and went to bed.
-Weird, This is the first time the pharaoh has taken action on his words for my future.- Yami thought
SM: So, what do u think???
Note- 'You look so old' was from the movie My Big Fat Greek Wedding
E-mail me at Sweetmisery2790yahoo or review and I will respond
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