ok, 3rd fanfic is finally here! I've been obsessed about FMA for sooooooooooo long! I wish the anime had a better ending... so I'm making my own with some twists, my own character, and my own versions of eds rants (P.S. my friend is almost exsactly like ed, even the rants and personallity! wierd huh?)
Ch.1 the only thing i can give is pain
Ren hated himself. He was a prisoner in a lab yet the scientists didn't dare put any needles in him.
Not when they had his sister.
Her cries could be heard anywhere in the whole building, and when they actually let her return to her room, she was always covered in burns, scars, and always blood.
They kept him there to confort her, as well as restrain her. If she got even close to hurting them, they would threaten to kill him.
They knew it was better to threaten him then her because she wasn't afraid to die... she was afraid for him.
He wandered the halls trying to find the room she was being experimented on.
He was really starting to worry because he hadn't seen her for almost five days. Sure, it's happened before. But this time there wasn't anymore screaming... nothing, nada, zilch.
What scared him even more is that when he walked through the halls, no scientists where there, not even some who were rushing to the bathroom then loss the will do go once they saw, and smelt, the toilet.
He walked around, trying to find a sign that would tell him where his little sister was.
Something flashed in the corner of his eye. A scientist!
He ducked around a corner, silently following a pudgy scientist as he stumbled with his armful of donuts.
The scientist walked over to the coat hanger and bent it and it started to make a beeping noise. The wall opened up and the scientist ran inside, the door sliding shut just as Ren heard the clacking of his shoes on cement instead of tile.
Ren counted to ten then ran over to the coat hanger and did the same thing, opening the door to reveal a long staircase with gravel walls and a wooden door layered slightly with metal.
Ren walked down the staircase and peeked through the cracks of the door.
"Damnit, Slean! How many times have I told you not to go out just for stupid doughnuts!" A huge husky voice boomed. "The state is already close on our tail and I atleast want to finish this experiment and you are making it closer to our destruction!" Ren got a clear view of the husky voiced man.
He was bulky with a beer belly big enough to mistake it for a boulder. His deep-toned skin was completely the opposite of his short, spiky pale blond hair. His face was completely hardened and scary enough to send a forty-year old man crying for mommy.
"Sorry, Oscuridad, but I also retrived the vial of typho extract so we can be almost done the experiment with the girl." The pudgy man replied.
Oscuridad gave a hearty laugh, "Slean, the only way you could make me anymore relieved with you is if you have a blueberry jelly filled doughnut in there!" On cue the Slean handed two of the doughnuts to him which he slurped down so fast it was unnatural.
Ren moved his view to look to the right and his breath caught in his throat at the sight.
His sister was floating in a pinkish red fluid and every inch of her, needles were planted into her skin. Vines were wraped around her keeping her supended in the liquid, and her perfect raven hair cocooned the upper half of her body while dancing freely in the water.
The thing that scared him was that her eyes were squeazed shut, like she was having a nightmare.
But her waking up to this would be even worse than any nightmare.
The pudgy man walked over to his sister and put the black vial into a slot.
The needles potruding out of his sister's body suddenly started to inject the black fluid all over her body. His sister let out a silent scream inside of the water, opening her eyes to reveil her violet eyes changing to sapphire.
Ren couldn't take it anymore, he burst through the door ignoring the gasping of all the scientists he ran towards his sister and kicked the vial so it shattered in it's slot. He went over to the container and banged on it, trying to break it.
He stared up at his sister inside the container... she was staring at him.
She mouthed some words to him and he gulped and nodded. He ran pass the approching scientists, and out the door.
Ren bolted through the hallways, knowing which way to go since he knew these halls better than the scientists themselves.
He ran out the front door that he had never dared to pass through, and headed towards where he remembered his house would be.
Ok now i know what you're thinking. How could Ren do that? Well, for one, he was outnumbered, two, he couldn't break the container, three, since he was never experimented on, he dousn't have any super anything! He's just a scared boy who barely knows how to fight!
Kay, i want atleast 10 reviews before i start writing the next chap! oh, if you want it to go faster you can give me some ideas! XD