Lucky-sama: Hey all this is my first fic ever so please any advice and suggestions would be much needed!
Tensai-san:Yep that's true!
Lucky-sama: Anyways, I'll try updating whenever I can or weekly, it depends.
Tensai-san: *snickers* yeah if she isn't too lazy
Lucky-sama:Speak for yourself! You wake up at almost two in the afternoon!
Tensai-san: Anyways pushing that aside, on with the story!
Lucky-sama:Do the disclaimer Tensai
Tensai-san: *sigh* Fine, Lucky-sama and I, Tensai-san do not own Naruto or any of its characters we only own the OC's and our plot, doesn't that suck?
Lucky-sama: Thank-you, enjoy the story!
In Konoha…
"Take him Ryo, quickly before the council gets him!" Minato shoved an infant into his arms.
"Why? Why must I? Everyone will know he's not my son, he has blonde hair and blue eyes!" Ryo cried.
"This will do," Minato nicked Ryo's finger and let the drop of blood fall on the infant. The child's hair turned black, as black as night, the eyes, once a light cerulean blue now struggled to change to brown but failed, resulting in a dark blue.
"How did he do that?" Ryo gasped in surprise.
"A special ability the firstborn of the Namikaze family," Minato told him sadly.
"Why must I take him?" Ryo looked in his friend's eyes.
"The council believes that the firstborn of the Namikaze family will always bring destruction wherever they go, so they are killed, but I can not bear to see him killed," Minato looked away sadly.
"I will take him," Ryo nodded while silently cursing the foolish council.
"Good, now go quickly! Give him this when he comes of age," Minato tossed a black case after them.
"I will Minato, but what's his name?" Ryo stopped on the windowsill and deftly caught the case.
"Reiten, Reiten Tsubasa," Minato purposely added Ryo's last name, "He's your son now!"
"I'll take care of him, we'll visit, I promise my friend," Ryo disappeared into the night.
About a year later…
"The Yondaime is coming!" one of the ninja yelled.
A roar went up as the Yondaime; Minato Namikaze arrived on the bloody battlefield littered with bodies of fallen shinobi astride Gamabunta.
"You're the foolish Yondaime I've heard of ne? Konoha will not be the only one falling; Juubi is on his way to Suna!" Kyuubi laughed before lashing out and scarring Gamabunta on the eye.
"I'm sorry my son," Minato whispered to his second son cradled in his arms, "It matters not Kyuubi! Seal!"
There was a bright place of light and the Kyuubi vanished, leaving a limp Yondaime and the infant with the Sandaime Hokage standing beside them.
"I want him to be seen as a hero Sarutobi, tell him of his heritage when he comes of age," the Yondaime croaked before falling limp.
Screams filled the air as another shinobi's life was taken.
"I've got this!" Ryo waved the men back and started forming hand seals with Reiten tucked under his arm.
"Hello citizens of Suna! I believe it's time to die," Juubi crushed another ninja under his tail.
"Goodbye Juubi no Doragon but the only one dying is you! I'm sorry Reiten. Seal!" there was another bright flash of light and a wail. The light faded and all that remained was the child and the fallen Ryo Tsubasa.
About 8 years later in Konoha…
"Stupid villagers, stupid people, stupid village," Naruto grumbled as he walked down the street and to the academy, ignoring the insults thrown at him.
"Hello Dobe," Sasuke sneered.
"Sasgay-teme," Naruto retorted.
"Yo dead-last," another kid snickered.
"Shut up," Naruto snarled and continued down into the academy.
"Demon brat, what are you doing here?" A Chuunin instructor rushed him, fists flailing but Naruto didn't even move, he took the beating silently without any resistance, not even noticing when the beatings stopped and he lapsed into darkness.
In Suna…
"This is nice," Reiten commented idly as he sat atop of a plateau. Below him, kids were playing with a ball and one kid on the swings, looking sad and lonely.
"The ball's up there!" someone cried and Reiten saw the ball roll to a stop from where he was sitting.
"Go," Reiten whispered and a disk of swirling air formed and Reiten stepped on to it, the ball safely nestled in his arms.
"It's the monster!" The kids had spotted him, several stones were hurled at him but suddenly a wall of sand protected him.
"Run! It's Gaara!" there were several screams as the red-haired kid sitting on the swings got off of them..
"Arigatou Gaara-san," Reiten walked over, the black case tied to his back tightly and he let the disk dissipate.
"Uh you're welcome?" Gaara had never been thanked before.
"Would you like to play with me?" Reiten held the ball out to him.
"Yes, I would," Gaara took the ball from Reiten's hands gingerly.
"Why don't we play on the plateau? It's safer and much nicer up there," Reiten offered.
"Safer? I would like that," Gaara nodded as Reiten conjured another disk of air.
"Watch it, it's sort of uneven-gotcha!" Reiten caught Gaara's arm just in time.
"Arigatou…nii-san," Gaara whispered so softly that Reiten almost missed it.
"Not a problem, otouto," Reiten grinned as he helped his…little brother…his new little brother onto the sturdy ground
Somewhere hidden…
"I've had enough of this, I want them out now!" Pein hissed, his tone lower than what it normally was at the other Akatski members.
"Zetsu, Tobi go get Sanbi, Sasori, Deidara go get Juubi and Ichibi, Itachi and Kisame go get Kyuubi, now!!" Pein's voice was deadly quiet and sent chills down their spines. The said members fled the room fearing their leader's wrath, "Bring them all back in one piece, no roughing them up! Itachi, you will be training them!"
Itachi shrugged this off, thinking the leader was joking, but deep inside, he knew the leader never joked so it was probably true, but still he hoped it was the former one.
Lucky-sama: Alright that was my first chapter and I know it was a little short but I hate writing prologues so sorry about that all! I promise it'll be better and longer next time, that I swear. As for pairings, I have a few in mind but they'll be a surprise for later I guess. Advice and such would be much apprieciated since this is my first fic ever! If you have any suggestions then please include them in your review! Thanks!
Until next time-Lucky-sama and Tensai-san