Naruto: bloody whirlpool
story start
The sound of feet running was heard as a small boy no less than the age of nine was huddled in between a small gap between two walls. Attentively the small blonde with strange scars shaped like wisker marks on his face poked his head out to be sure the villagers went following him, as he didn't see anyone he thought he was safe,
just then a tall bulky figure appeared behind the blonde and growled '' i got you now demon'' and shouted out '' i found the nine tails'' the blonde petrified only screamed out in fear as he was dragged before the gathering crowd.
A few shinobi watched with interest as the demon was held before them '' you will pay for your crimes scum and we will finish what the 4th couldn't , we will destroy you'' with that the wannabe executioner lifted out a blade that glinted evilly in the mid afternoon light,
the man brought the blade down or at least he tried to because just before it reached the young boys neck a blade of water shot out and blocked the blade as well as incaseing the boy in a sphere of water protecting him.
The blonde was curious about the water protecting him, the shinobi watching jumped in to action thinking the demon had regained some of its powers and they tried to get close to the boy but when they did the water would lashed out and try to strangle or impale them.
Mean while the villagers were running around in a panic, the man who held the blade had the blade taken away from him by the water and it had imbedded itself within the man's skull the blond boy inside the sphere looked on with glee that the man couldn't hurt him anymore. Just then an old man with red robes and an oval shaped hat entered the alleyway.
'' ANBU!'' the man shouted his voice filled with menace, within a second six different people all dressed in black and with animal shaped masks were by his side, '' kill anyone here but the boy'' the anbu did their job swiftly beheading anyone close to them, the shinobi though put up a fight but they were no match for the elite soldiers. Mean while the old man had walked up to the water sphere were the boy was, the boy was knocked out from the shock of seeing so much death in so little time.
The water as if sensing the man was not going to harm the boy did nothing as he approached, when the man got within arms reach of the child the water disappeared. The old man reached out and grabbed the boy before he hit the ground.
The old man looked upon the scared blond in regret '' I'm so sorry Naruto'' the man said '' I'm so sorry that i let this happen again''. And without another thought he bounced away to the nearest hospital.
when the old man reached the hospital he orderd for a nurse strait away, a nurse appeard as if out of no where and took one look at the young boy, '' Hokage- sama no direspect but we don't treat demons''.
the witherd old haokage was furius'' Nurse THIS BOY IS A HERO AND WILL BE TREATED AS SUCH''
The nurse fearfully reaplied with a yes and hurryed the hokage to a room that he could pu the young child in.
Mean while
Naruto woke up with a start he looked around and saw a sewer '' Great the dumbasses put me in a sewer..real original jerks'' just the he heard a booming laugh in front of him
" Boy, what are you talking about, and you do realise we're in your mind gaki''
Naruto jumped about looking for the strange voice that sound a little bit feminie. just then he stood in front of a large gate, but that wasn't the thing that made him scared it was what is in the gate that made in freak out. "what the hell's a giant rabbit doing in a gate"
" YOU DARE MOCK ME Mortal me the great and powerful kyuubi no yoko queen of maki" thundered the beast, Naruto replied with ' if your so mighty than why are you stuck in a cage"
Kyuubi responded with a growl '' its not my fault I'm in here and making your life miserable, its that yodaime hokage's fault"
'' hey the yodaime was a great man'' Naruto yelled back " yeah? if he's so great then why did he curse his own son to a life of suffering''
'' the yodaime had a son?''
''yeah and I'm looking right at him"
"M-m-me?"
''is anybody else here nimrod''
Naruto took offense to that and said '' come down here and say that to my face you overgrown fur ball"
'' very well" said the kyuubi
just then red chakra seeped through the bars and the fox keeped shrinking until it was around naruto's height, kyuubi also changed forms,
Naruto had to cover his eyes at the brightness of the chakra and was surprised when he saw a girl his age with red flowing hair that stopped at her waist with
white porcelain skin
''pretty" Naruto said shyly, the girl blushed at the complement and said '' you're not so bad yourself ''
'' So your the kyuubi that the yodaime supposedly killed'' ''that's right brat''
''Hey your as old as me'' Naruto said insulated
'' Demons age every 100 years'' '' so are you the one that made the water go all around me?''
''no that was all you or rather your bloodline'' i have a blood line?'' yes from your mother''
'' you knew my mother?'' no but i knew the uzumaki's''
''What does my bloodline do?'' '' it allows you to have complete control over water and even blood''
'' R-R-R-really'' Naruto stuttered awed by his own abilities. '' yeah now wake up someone's calling for you''
'' wait will i get to see you again'' kyuubi blushed at the thought at seeing him again
''yes all you have to do is think about being in here and you will come"
As Naruto woke up he recognised the pearly white of a hospital room, as he looked around he saw the hokage looking at him with regret " it happened again didn't it old man'' the old man sighed and nodded his head. '' sadly yes'' '' why does it keep happening, is it because of the kyuubi" '' h-h-h-how do you know about it'' '' well it becomes pretty obvious when you have her tell you personally''
''Naruto don't listen to anything she tells you "
'' really because she is a hell of a lot more trust worthy then you are right now"
The hokage winced and told him he was allowed to leave the hospital. As Naruto was leaving he saw a lot of people staring at him fearfully, ' i guess word travels fast' he soon reached his apartment that was graffiti and in ruins but still standing some how. Just before he went to bed he looked in the mirror and vowed to himself he wouldn't be pushed around any more and that he would destroy every one that opposed him. In side his mindscape kyuubi grinned at the effects of her being inside him took effect he was starting to act like a true uzumaki's.
And scene
well this is my first fic and I'm still thinking about giving it up i need reviews saying if it's good or not to continue writing it or not
till next time ..maybe shadows chaos