I do not own Oblivion (if i did i'd have Lucien Lachance,and Martin,In my house)

AND,This is my very first Fanfiction so please reveiw and give me tip please :D.

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"Help!" The young breton shouted.

"Please,help, someone!"he cried again.

He lifted his sister up more,her arms slipping from around his neck.

The young breton struggled to see,the torrent of rain falling upon them.

They'd been attacked by highwaymen halfway to kvatch,he'd fought with all his power to keep his beloved sister safe.

But,the ringleader of the men had captured her,promising to kill her if he didn't hand over their gold.

They had nothing,no gold.

The ringleader waited a secound before plunging his dagger in the young girl's eye fell from it's socket,forked on the cruel man's dagger.

Her screams riped from her mouth,joining her brother's.

The man laughed,a cruel heartless laugh.

But,His partners did not..

"Krufin,y-you only said we'd rob them of their gold,not hurt them."one of the men who had been attacking the brother studdered.

Krufin's eyes widen,as if he'd just realized what he'd done.

He droped the girl,her cries heighting again.

He started to run,he ran back into the woods.

And,his partners followed,each taking one last look at the ,just before the last one ran,he turned to removed his iron sword from his side,and slashed at the boy.

His sword contacted the,mortified,boy's side,resulting in his cries reappearing.

Than,the last highwayman ran,off to join his partners.

The boy had kneeled in the pain,but soon understood that he had to save his sister,even if it cost him his life.

He looked at his man's sword had made a long cut,the blood was gushing,but his wound was nothing compared to his sister's.

Her entire left eye had been riped from it's home in her head.A dark hole,with blood pooring out of it,was all that remained.

He stood,forcing the pain into the deepest parts of his mind,his sister was all that mattered.


I'll continue if i get some good reveiws~of maybe if I get bored haha either way please reveiw.