Love,war and the pursuit of happiness. AN (in this story the ponies will be bipedal)
Prologue ,
The dust settled as the two ponys walked heat lines rising from the sun baked ground the more noticeable of the two walked slowly dragging his hooves along the packed dirt his coat white as snow yet showing singes of travel. He was the taller of the two but not by much his Kane draped over his neck is swayed being almost as long as a mares. He was a unicorn with a long white horn he wore a cotton shirt and his cutie mark was that of a shrunken and a music note on the inside. "it's hot and boring how long till the next town dude" white noise groaned to his large companion. His companion was a much more well build pony with a katana upon his back a straw jappinese style hat a dark gray cloak he swished his cloak with his wings reviling his orange body large wings and a katana as his cutie mark he rippled with muscle. "well the next town is ponyvill and should be over this hill" karmilla sighed "we've been walking forever it seems" he complained the hot sun beat down on the two travelers. They stopped and peered over the hill too see the town of ponyville
End Prologue
there you go if you don't like the prologue then stop or keep reading maybe itll get better and plz leave a comment also after this i will be getting an editor