Well, this is my first real story. For a very long time I would read fan fictions and be like " I CAN DO THAT SO MUCH BETTER!". And so, after losing a bet and 12 beers later, here I am, writing a new story and hoping to get other authors off their lazy asses and actually WRITE. But in the future I see this tactic back firing on me….so how about you read my story ,review it, and favorite it, it would defiantly help me out ,and spread my (hopefully )well received story
*DISCLAMIER* If I owned Naruto, he would be much more awesome and bad ass…..and have a super hot girlfriend….and way better moves…..and I would be fucking filth rich and not writing this for my own entrainment ( and hopefully others )…..goddamnit I'm weird ;_;
ON WITH THE SHOW
Sasuke Uchiha stared down at his former best friend and rival Naruto Uzumaki. Once upon a time he had thought the loser was completely useless, but he had proved him wrong, like many times before. The titanic battle they had had proved to Sasuke that Naruto was very strong, or at less as strong as him. And what about that angry red charka? He didn't know what to make of that, but maybe it would be better to take care of Naruto right now, while he was knocked out from the final clash…..he would need the Mangekyo Sharingan to fight his brother Itachi on a level playing field.
Sasuke slipped his hand into his kunai pouch then froze and smirked, almost in irony.
"You're lucky Dope that I don't have any kunai or charka left over, or less you would be died…but I just realized something. Would I truly be any better than Itachi, if I took the same route as him? No…no I wouldn't…." He whispered to himself in a soft, tired voice as he slowly stood up and walked away from Naruto, Sakure, Kakashi, Konoha, everything…he moved in the direction that lead towards him fulfilling his dream, to kill his bastard of a brother…..
While he walked away, he didn't see his old Konoha headband, with one single deep slash through it.
Kakashi Hataka looked at the ground, sadness maring his expression. He had finally arrived at the legendary Valley of the End, the former battle ground of the first Hokage Hashirama Senju and Madara Uchiha, former leader of the mighty Uchiha clan. It was ironic, in a sense. They were both related to the legendary figures, and by the looks of things, they had tore the valley up pretty bad. 'The apple doesn't fall from the ansectoral tree now does it?'Kakashi thought to himself in with a very dry sense of humor.
He was staring at two objects. To most people they would mean nothing…..but to him, they left enough evidence as to what had happened.
One slashed headband, and a patch of orange jumpsuit…
Sasuke had gotten away, and Naruto was gone….
He turned to Pakkun, his personal Ninken summon as the small dog walked up to him.
"Tell me something good Pakkun…." Kakashi said in a worried voice.
The dog slowly shook his head, destroying Kakashi's feelings of hope. "I can't smell Sasuke's or Naruto's scents….it's like they're just…gone."
Kakashi didn't respond as he looks up at the water fall, unknowing looking at where the final blow of the monstrous battle landed.
"I've failed you Minato, Kushina, Sasuke….Naruto."
Where was he? His entire body hurt, especially his chest. The world around him was all pain and nothing else…..how could he live like this? All he remembered feeling in all of his short 13 years of life was pain, with fine little bursts of happiness. He slowly opened his eyes and saw the roof of some forest that he didn't remember being in. Then it hit him, the chase, fighting the Sound Five, and the final battle with Sasuke….and how he tried to kill him multiple times. He shivered as he vaguely remembered how horrible and inhuman Sasuke had looked at the very end of the fight. That was definitely not human. But he was also surprised at himself. He went so far as to use one tail of the Kyuubi charka? He couldn't believe that, but that power he felt…..it was unbelievable.
He slowly pushed himself off the ground and held his head.
"Uh, feels like the god of hangovers I swear…"
He looked around anxiously then stretched his tired bones out, feeling them pop and said in a tired tone.
"I need to report back to Konoha and tell Sakure and Baa-chan what happened here. But first off, where am I?"He looked around the area, only seeing a forest he didn't recognize.
Suddenly his migraine became much worse as he held his head and groaned out in pain. He kept holding his head in pain before it went away and a gruff voice spoke in his mind
"God damn seal!"The huge fox growled out in irritation as his deep voice echoed in Naruto's head
The young boy stopped moving as he heard the deep voice vibrating throughout his skull and thought to the giant fox.
'Kyuubi? What do you want you dumbass fox!?'
The huge kistune growled in angry at the human boy and his sheer tack at insulting him.
"You damned human, how many times have I saved your worthless life from the villagers in Konoha, emeny ninja, and in your pathetic last fight with the Uchiha! If there is one thing I will ask for, it is RESPECT!"
Naruto froze once again at the sudden outburst of angry. The fox did have a point there…..it had saved him more times than he could count and hadn't really demanded much for those services. But it did own him rent in a twisted sort of way.
Naruto grumbled out to the fox in thought 'I can a least give you that…..you do deserve it…..unfortunately ….'
The huge fox snorted, the noise echoing in Naruto's mind. So he had finally gotten a little trust from the human? Sadly he was enjoying the conversation with him, being alone and not having anything to talk to for almost 13 years really makes one crave conversation.
"At least I have that…..now; we have a very important subject to talk about human."
Naruto raised an eyebrow at this
'You actually want to talk to me? Ok, what is this about?' He asked in a suspicious tone.
The Kyuubi spoke in a very serious voice as his next spoken words shocked Naruto to the core.
"Konoha thinks you are died, killed by that weak Uchiha…..and I think you should keep it that way…..Naruto"
Said child sat in shock and thought out to the giant fox.' What do you mean, they think I'm died?'
The fox snorted and said "After your fight, you were knocked out. I managed to take control long enough to make a run away from the border. No one from Konoha knows you are alive to put it simply '
Naruto thought to himself in shock. They thought he was died? Wouldn't they come looking for him? Of course they would, they were his friends! But now that he thought about it, he didn't have many friends. And the ones he did have didn't really like him…well expect from Rock Lee, but he was really, REALLY weird. Naruto thought out to the fox. 'Why should I leave Kyuubi need to save Sasuke from that Snake freak that wants to take over his body?'
The large fox said to the young boy. ' That boy does not want to be saved Naruto….he is obsessed with killing his brother, and he will most likely fail in that sense….his brother is just to powerful for him and you to fight as you are. Plus, he is part of that organization that is made up of 10 S-rank ninja…and if there is one thing I want you to listen to boy, it is this. Never fight an S-rank ninja…..the ninja that defeated me was an S-rank, so I should know this kind of thing. You must become strong, train harder than you have ever trained if you are to survive them. And Konoha will hold you back once they see that the "Demon" is getting strong enough to fight such high ranking ninja. If you die, I die. The same way around to. We must work together if we are to survive them…so Naruto, are you willing to leave the people that hate you behind and move on to make your own mark in history? You may not be able to be the Hokage, but I think I know a way around that…..'
Naruto sat still, lost in thought. (Sadly something he didn't do often enough).He thought of his awful childhood in Konoha, how he was beaten so much. Honestly, why hadn't he left sooner? Because he thought it would get better. And slowly, it did, but only after he had saved the village from an insane Garra . But that was about it…he was always treated like a pile of shit, and that's how everyone saw him…and all of his friends thought he was just weak. He clenched his fist in angry but whispered to the fox.
' Let's do this….let's become so powerful no one can hurt us….together, we will become the ultimate team! No one will hold us back anymore…..no one, no thing!'
The Kyuubi chuckled as he heard the boy. ' Good…..but we will have to train your body to extreme conditions, also your charka control leaves much to be desired..'
Naruto pouted at this. 'Hey, I know that! I'm just not any good with controlling my charka ok?'
The Kyuubi chuckled a little. ' I know, who do you think was fucking it up so much? It was funny seeing you struggle…..but you still need to work on it ,its pretty fucking bad .'
Naruto growled at the fox as he began walking deep into the forest. 'Fucking Fox…'
The rookie 9 and all close relations to Naruto stood in front of a teary, red eyed Tsunade . She looked them each in the face, and then slowly whispered out.
"Naruto is dead….killed by Sasuke in battle…."
Everyone stood there, shocked to the core. Naruto was dead? No way, he never gave up on anything…no one thought he would die…..but what about this thing about Sasuke killing him? Everyone could see they were close friends!
Sakure took a step forward. "W-w-what? Naruto is dead? H-how?"
Tsunade turned her head and looked at her. She knew she loved, as in how a child thinks of love, the Uchiha boy, who really didn't give to flying shits about the girl. Talk about never giving up the chase!
She said in a quiet voice to her. " He was killed by Sasuke Uchiha trying to bring him back to the village. We thought he was kidnapped, but apparently he left on his own accord …all for power…" She knew why he left, so he could kill his brother. What he didn't know was that his brother did it for a purpose, to prevent a civil war that would have torn the village into two. His brother was a true un-sung hero whose tell would never be told. It was sad seeing such a promising young man ruin his entire life to save his village that now hated him, and now even the brother he loved wanted to kill him.
Sakure's lower lip trembled as she said." That's not possible! Sasuke would never do that to Naruto!"
The Godaime Hokage stared at her as a tear slide down her eye. " I do not think you know how much hatred Sasuke had in him for his brother, and how much love Naruto had for YOU, a girl that ignored him completely and wanted to go after a completely spoiled brat. Naruto died trying to bring back the boy you "love". Tsunade held her head as tears flowed down her cheeks.
The rookies and their sensei's reactions where that of complete shock. They just couldn't believe what had happened to Naruto. The village had truly lost a great human being….
Jiraiya stood in the back of the room, frowning as he thought to himself. He knew Naruto wasn't dead, because if he was, then the elder toads would have told him so. No, he was not dead, just merely missing. He would have to find him and ask why he had left the village, but he had a feeling as to why he had left. He wasn't going to reveal this info unless he had to. He pushed himself off the wall and jumped out of the widow next to his old teammate Tsunade. When he falls to the ground he jumped on top of the nearest building and started to rush to the Hokage Mountain. Few knew what it actually hid beneath the rock. Some thought it was massive weapon cash, or a underground base where in case of war the cilivans could go if the village was attacked. And they were correct about these two guesses. Under each former Hokage head there was something special. In the firsts was a bunker, the seconds a weapon cash ,he thirds was a library of all Justus's collected by him, and under the Tsunade's soon to be build was going to be a state of the art hospital. But none but him and the Former Third Hokage knew what was under his old students Minato's head, and that's what he was going after. If Naruto had truly left the village for good, well then, he was going to take everything that was his to begin with. This village had kept it away from him long enough as it was.
Two weeks later, border of Kusagakure/Iwagakure
Naruto sighed as he pushed himself up the mountain he was currently climbing. He was carrying a pack of basic supplies, like food, rope, matchs, and the basics to survive when one is on his own. The fox had given him the place and direction to start on his new training. The Kyuubi decided that it would be best to train in the high altitude of Earth Country. It was a smart idea, and he never would have thought of it himself. Plus he didn't know of his father and how he had basically butt fucked all of Iwa with two justus's. This would be the last place Konoha would look for him, because Konoha had VERY tight relationships with Iwa, who was still butt sore over the , back to the training part. The high altitude would push his body to the limit and make his training much harder. Plus it was fairly isolated from people, so he could practice high profile justus's by himself. Naruto panted as he pushed himself higher up the mountain. He was covered in sweat and it was slowly getting harder to breath the higher he went up.
'Kyuubi, how much higher do I need to go?' Naruto said to the large fox as he gasped a stone and pulled himself up.
The Fox sighed as he heard his human counterpart. 'To the peak you little shit. That's where I kept my den hundreds of years ago. It's big enough for you to live in, trust me on that. Plus the mountain is hollow from where I created my home for this country, so this can be our base of operations so to speak.'
Naruto nodded as he listened. 'Makes sense…but why did you pick Earth Country of all places? Other than the high altitude ….'
The Kyuubi sighed .So he would have to explain to the kid? Ok he could deal. ' I picked this country because Konoha wouldn't dare to try and get into this country. As you probably know, Iwa is still bitter over the fact that they lost the last war. They won't let Konoha start stomping around looking for you.'
As he said this Naruto had finally pulled himself up to the tip of the mountain. He was so high up that he could atacully feel the clouds swirling around him. He said out loud as he held his arms open to the sky.
"We did it Kyuubi…..we finally made it….now time to start training and become strong!"
The large fox grinned at the young boy's excitement. "Yes we did brat… now give me 50 push ups and 80 crunchs, then run up and down this mountain 3 times."
Naruto sweat dropped at this. "Are you serious? Why the fuck would I do that?"
The fox growled at him, "How the fuck else are you suppose to train? And since your complaining, fill your back pack with rocks you little shit!"
Naruto said to him. "Fuck that shit, I just got done getting up here! Besides, how are you going to make me do it?" He said in a teasing tone to the fox.
The Kyuubi smirked as he heard him. "Well I doubt you want a boner for 2 weeks do you?"
"…..Fuck you Kyuubi…fuck you and your furry ass!" But even as he said this, Naruto was emptying his pack out and filling it with stones. He really hated that damn fox….
Said fox was chuckling in amusement was he watched though Naruto's eyes as he slowly started to walk down the mountain. He didn't dare say that he liked the kid, but he wasn't half bad. He had a good heart and tried to live up to the promises he made, plus he had a lot of hidden potential that he could use….when he was done with the kid, he was going to be a force to be reckoned with!
Well since I'm such a complete bastard I'm going to leave it there for now. I hoped you guys enjoyed and thought it was good. Now I'm not to sure about the pairing ,I have 2 really good one's one mind, but if you guys have any suggestions and have a valid reason why I should pick one ( or many ) girl/s then just drop me a message and I'll try to respond as soon as I can.
Now, since this is my first real story I'm total open to ideas that I could use. Like I just said,if you have an idea just give me a message and I'll see if I can put it in.
Another thing. While Sakure did get a little bit of a bashing today, that won't happen again. I just wanted her to see how far Naruto went for her.
But I have to go soon guys, so I'll see you guys on the next chapter!
Later, SilverKnight117 out