Ratchet & Clank: A New Story
Cool-Dolphin: This is my first story, so I'm hoping for some tips on what I can improve on.
Disclaimer: I don't own Ratchet or Clank or any games in the series. I do own the made up stuff though
Chapter 1: Introduction
Two months after the Dreadzone incident, Ratchet became a big star! He had his own TV-Show called Secret Agent Ratchet. Ratchet had many fans. Ratchet was a commando who saved planets. Clank was known as the guy on his back, but he had fans too. Secret Agent Clank was cancelled due to the fact that people were watching too much Dreadzone. Ratchet was relaxing on the Kyzil Beach with Clank. They decided to go on a vacation since they had nothing to do on the Starship Phoenix after Skrunch became in charge
"Ah, Clank, his is the life", said Ratchet
"Yup", Clank replied while staring at the ocean.
"Hey, wanna take a swim", Ratchet asked Clank
"Ok, just wait a minute", Clank replied, then he equipped his hydro-pack and hopped onto Ratchet's back
Ratchet and Clank swam for half and hour, diving and splashing. When Ratchet got out, his phone started to ring. A screen appeared and said "You have 1 new message, do you want to view it", Ratchet clicked yes. It was Sasha
"Ratchet!" yelled Sasha "We have a big problem! There has been many thefts and crimes going on, and we found many clues, we also have a sketch." A picture of a Dolphin-like creature showed up on the screen. "We have no clue who it is though. We need some help" The screen went blank. Ratchet ran to his ship.
"Clank, our vacation is over, set a course for Metropolis"
"Ok" Clank replied
The ship powered and blasted off.
Cool-Dolphin: First Chapter complete! Hope you liked it.