This is my first FanFIC. Please tell me if I'm good or not. Thanks.
Summary: After the 4th book. Flyboys mysteriously came back after Max and the Flock destroyed Itex. Most of the story the Flock will be with Max's mom.
PLEASE REVIEW!!! Some constructive critisim will be allowed.
P.S. I do not own Max Ride or anything from J.P. The plot is mine.
Max's POV
Right now we are staying in a hotel somewhere in Canada. Flyboys have been attacking us for a whole freaking week! I am up to my neck with complaints from Total. Angel has been trying to shut him up, but its NOT working! Were going to work our way down to my moms house in Arizona. Were just going to go with the damn flow.
"MAAAAAAX, its COOOOOLD!" Nudge screamed for the umpteenth time.
"I know Nudge! Were packing to leave, just hold on."
"Max, the guys are all done packing. We are reading to leave when you are," Fang told me.
Finally we were on the road to moms. Just thinking about brings a smile to my face. Of course, Fang notices and mouths "what?"
I just shook my head. I was gliding through the air peacefully, the wind blowing in my hair. I was enjoying this rare moment.
Fang's POV
God was Max beautiful. Her hair was blowing in the wind. And when she smiled, my breathe caught every time. If only she new how I felt. The way I loved her. It's not like I would tell her how I feel. Just, like she would never tell me. That is IF she feels the same way. Oh boy, I hope she does! Don't worry Fang she does. She just doesn't want to admit it. Dang, Angel was reading my mind! Thanks Angel, and don't read my mind, okay? Okay Fang, sometime I don't even notice it! That was Angel. A sweet little girl, who knew way too much!
We are flying over Colorado right now. Max, was still in the lead. I don't know how she does it. She controls the flock like its no problem. I wonder if I could do that? Max's is going to be a great mom. I am surprised that nudge has asked for f-.
"Max, I'm hungry can we stop and eat?" Nudge interrupted my thought. I said that a little too soon.
"Sure Nudge, we'll fly for twenty more minutes then stop and find someplace to sleep." Max planed. I wonder hoe many times she hasn't even had a plan and something just pops up into the cute head. Angel must have been reading my mind because she snickered when I said "cute head".