Hey reader it's Michael (change account name) I've been working on "Visitors Of Miracle City" I've been changing a lot of things because one of the authors (you know who you are) read it and email me tips on how to change this and make it sound a bit better. I did it then decided to change some more things so here's chapter 1 but edited I'm going to be doing the same for Chapters 1 - 4
Visitors of Miracle City
Chapter 1
Their Arrival
Somewhere on the outskirts of Miracle City, a group of teenagers with two teenagers one the age 18 and the other 16 watching the city.
"Miracle City a spicy cess pool of crime and vil- said an unknown voice but is cut off while narrating.
"Cut the narrative shit and let's just going Michael we're all tired ok." Said another unknown voice
"Alright Fine Axel. Hey Zoë, Dante Lets get going get." command Michael
He then looks around for them but can't seem to find them
"Where are they at?" Michael asked Axel.
"You know them, being lazy like always. Sleeping probley like how I was before you decide to leave. Axel telling Michael.
Michael then pulls out his double barrel revolver and fires into the air to get them out of hiding.
"ALRIGHT we're coming" said Dante
"What's your problem we're just trying to catch some Z's" said Zoë which sounded very tire.
Come on get on your motorcycles, we're leaving" said Michael
"I know we have to leave but its 10:50pm you may not think that's late but we're tire from traveling all day. Said Dante trying to convince Michael to let the team sleep and leave tomorrow morning but failing miserable.
"What?, Axel not complaining and he usually complains about these things" Michael said pointing at Axel then looks and sees him pasted out on his motor cycle (Axel is passed out on his own cycle not Michael's)
"We can sleep when we get inside the city now get on your cycles and lets get going."
Command Michael. Michael then hops on his black and Navy blue Ninja Bike. Axel jumping on his red and blue Safi fire side flame sports bike, Dante starting his red and black low rider, and Zoe getting on her purple and blue cruiser cycle. As all four of the teenagers rode off on their motorcycles and headed off towards the direction of the city.
"Hey Michael, why are we going to this city called "Miracle City" is there something we need there?" Axel asked Michael
"We're going there because THEY probley want find us." Said Michael who sounded very serious because you see Michael is a very serious guy that's hard to convince but if you get to know him he's a pretty nice guy.
"Michael relax a little. Why do you take everything so serious? Take a break every once and awhile." Said Dante trying to make Michael relax.
"I can't because take breaks because you know, all you know what HE took from me it's been two years after her death, and I going to get revenge on him but if I'm going to get HIM, I – I mean we're going to need help from the hero or villain he hasn't decided yet, that lives here with his friend." Michael said to Dante
As all four arrived in the city there is a great explosion that startles them all
"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!!??" all four of them said at once almost making them crash.
Then the wall of a building is destroyed by a boy dressed as tiger flies out of the building into another with a female skeleton in a red and black dress decoded with bones and skulls and a mystic looking golden guitar in her hand walks out of the smoke from the flames from the burning building.
"You will pay for that EL TIGRE!!!!" said the female skeleton with her right fist in the air.
"Up yours Santanna" said the tiger dressed boy
"Whoa you tell him Manny!" Said a blue headed girl
"Frida I said go take co-" Manny is then cut off by a red laser blast hitting him sending flying again with Frida running over towards him to see if he's okay.
"Manny? Are you ok?" Frida asked which her voice sounding very worried
"But Dada, I don't wanna feed grandpapai bacon while he's in the bathtub" said Manny but with a voice that made him sound drunk.
"nope he's not okay" said Frida with a annoyed face
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING GIRL RUN!!! Michael cried trying to warn Frida
"Run? Why would I r- did it just darker all of a sudden" Frida said hoping to be right and praying that she wasn't wrong
"Frida Suarez." Frida then trembles after hearing a creepy voice say her name she turns her head and sees Santanna of the Dead "Hehehe prepare to die- slice MY ARM!!!" Santanna yelled in pain
"Come any closer bone bag and you guitar is next" Michael threaten her with his samurai sword named Yamato at her neck and his gun Silver Death at her guitar.
"I might want to listen to him granny if you know what's good for you said Zoe with Amy and Raphael her 9 mm hand guns named after her parents (look up Ebony and ivory because that what her guns look like) point at the back of her head and the other at her guitar.
"you tell it babe" said Dante for some reason half drunk.
"already drunk Dante wow and its even pasted 10am oh wait it is. That was stupid to say." Axel said smacking himself on the forehead "and that was stupider. Ouch that hurt"
Dante then comes out of nowhere and points the golden buster blade sword then splits into four glowing swords and floats around them and the tip of his drill sword touching her back with Axel having his having his two revolvers (Trigun series) pointing at her and his dark energy weapons like spears, swords and daggers surrounding them
Santanna then strums her guitar hundreds of banditos surround them
"WE WARNED YOU!!!" as all four of them slicing away with their swords and firing way with smoking gun shells falling to the ground.
"DAMN!!!. Don't mess with the guys and girl." Frida said who was very impressed
"hey kid, you ok?" Michael asked who was putting his sword away and then puts away Silver Death in gun holster on the back of his waist.
"uh…. Yea I'm ok. Thanks for asking." Frida said which all of a sudden in shock at what just happen.
"well might go and check on your friend." Michael suggested then points where he is.
"HE'S NOT MY BOYFRIEND!!!"
"Whoa, didn't say he was." Michael held his hands in defense
"Ohhhh, uh well..." Things then get awkward. "I'll to go back and check on Manny." Frida then dashes towards Manny again with everyone but Michael going "WTF"
When Frida gets to Manny she shakes him, slaps him about 7 times, makes loud noises, yelled his dad is home and his house is trashed, and Finally she does the one thing… she kisses him Manny wakes up then widen his eyes to see his best Friend kissing him.
"AY DOIS MIO
FRIDA!!!! WHY'D YOU KISS ME!!!???" Manny cried that
Michael
and the others could hear them "what the hell are they arguing
about?" Axel asked then yawns
"That was the only thing that popped into my head Manny" Frida replied back at Manny and blushing red as a tomato
Lets just forget about this agree?" Manny said sticking his hand
"Agree, so you ok?" Frida asked lifting Manny up to his feet.
"Yea I'm ok but where's Santanna at, did escape or something?" Manny asked looking around for her
"Actually these three guys and one girls just killed her it awesome!!!" Frida cried then jumping up then down
Michael and his friends then walk towards Manny and introduce themselves.
Hello there I'll like to introduce ourselves. My name is Michael Primas (Pree-mus) I'm 18 years old. I use the "Yamato" it type of samurai sword and my gun choice is a double barrier revolver named "Silver Death" and I'm the Team Leader
The spiked red head dressed in the black coat is Axel Flame age 16. He uses two heavy revolvers his left one is black and the right is silver the rounds explode on impact, uses summoning dark energy like weapons and the Team keeper upper and back up planner also don't ask whys his Last name is Flame.
The guy with the black hair is Dante Samuel age 17 ½. He uses a solid golden buster bale sword that splits into 4 blades and a drill sword. Guns of choice are 2 duel wielding golden desert eagles that are five times deadlier than any other the left gun clip is a knife and right gun clip is a grenade with a golden Uzi that capacity of 200 bullets and a Barrette 50 Cal. runs at inhuman speeds and he's the team sniper and likes to party ALOT"
Dante cuts Michael says "Wanta party while holding condoms and pills and 2 six packs?" the Zoë cuts Dante off and yells "NO ONE WANTS FREAKIN PARTY DAMN IT… well at least not yet." Zoe said then kissing his check
Then finally is Zoë Rose age 17. Uses to wrist blades and duel wield two 9mm rapid firing hand guns named after her Parents who are Amy Rose and Raphael Rose and turn invisible. She's the Team Assassin and she's Dante's Girlfriend so don't mess with her in the wrong way or he'll kill you. Seriously I'm not kidding at all he really will kill you. Together we're
The Shadow Riders" Michael said finally finishing that mouthful.