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This is a revamped edition of a fan-fiction that I finished about two or more years ago. I just went back to look at it one day and I cringed so much at it. Like, how did anyone like that piece of shit? Like seriously, how? It's horrible. I can barely stand looking at it. However, I'm keeping the original up because maybe some of you reading this have never read it and want to see the crappy version before seeing this brand new, more likable one that still might also be cringe-worthy. You don't have to, though, unless you want to spot the differences with each chapter and trust me, there's gonna be some big differences between them. Mostly, though, the original is staying because everyone needs to know that I started off with being a shitty writer and now, I'm a slightly less shitty writer that's more descriptive! If you are someone who has read the previous version of this work, welcome back!

Honestly, the only real major difference is the massive change in descriptions so you have that to look forward to, I guess. I'm not gonna lie, it's gonna take me a long goddamn time to get each revamped chapter out so please, be patient with me, babies. The wait will be worth it, I hope. I mean, I promise!

And now, for a little extra whatever about this fan-fiction before you begin reading. It doesn't have anything to do with the story, not entirely, so you can skip ahead to the first chapter of this revamp now.


1) Lethal Love's theme song hasn't changed. Much. Originally, I had chosen the Japanese second opening of the anime. This time, it's the same song but in English and boy, Jonathan Young can fucking sing. He's hella bomb so check him out if you don't know who he is. He covers just about anything, really. He also got featured in two Google Translate Sings songs and it was funny as hell, like most of those songs are.

2) Alright, so, I'm gonna start with Sakae's theme. It's a Melanie Martinez piano cover for her song, Soap. Why is this her theme song? If you have heard the song, you'll know that the song is about being unable to hold in your words (least, that's how I see it) and when those words come out, regret settles in (again, what I got from it). I chose this as her theme because she tends to be having an inner struggle of sorts about what to say and what she should avoid saying, only for her to sometimes say something that causes some conflict, which leads to her feelings of regret. If you don't think this fits her at all, happily give me some suggestions and a reason why the different song fits her better.

3) Time for Kohaku and her theme. It's another Melanie Martinez piano cover, but it's for her song, Dollhouse. Why does this fit her? Her family is dysfunctional, imperfect. Outside, anyone who isn't close to her can't tell that she deals with some shit at home. And my reason doesn't stop there. No, I also chose this song because Kohaku is an imperfect person. While the song isn't about an imperfect person but an imperfect family, I still say that this fits her best because who's perfect? No one. Especially not Kohaku. I nearly had chosen Mad Hatter by Melanie Martinez but Kohaku isn't all that crazy, just overly aggressive sometimes.

4) I changed the love songs for our pairings. I only remember one of the original ones and that was Boy Like You by Ke$ha, that song being L and Kohaku's theme. Now, their theme is War of Hearts by Ruelle. A detective and an eventual college student. A cute weirdo and a violent troublemaker. An unlikely romance occurs between them. They don't want to love each other, mostly cause the feelings are very new to them both, but they find themselves ending up together anyway. Least, that's how I see it, now. This is a revamp, shit is changing; emotions are being made known more in the descriptions. And yes, I'm a fan of Shadowhunters. I'll make a fanfic for it eventually but it'll be without an original character getting with a canon character cause I ain't ruining ships, especially ain't ruining Malec. Malec is my otp, babies.

5) Light and Sakae, their theme is another song by Ruelle. It's called Storm. Yes, it's also from Shadowhunters. It's a great song, too, bitches. The meaning is self explanatory in the song's lyrics. Or, you know, it's a love song so I picked it without too much thought about it. We don't care much for their pairing anyway, right? Kohaku and L are the real deal here, am I right? I recall that pairing being the most loved. Somehow.

6) A lovely surprise for you guys. Not really. The fun facts remain. However, some new ones will be added at the end of each chapter and they'll be about a certain part of said chapter. Some will have multiple, but no more than three. It's even likely that some chapters might just have nothing new added, fact wise.


Changes From Original Throughout Revamp

1) Errors Will Be Fixed (Some Might Remain, Though; Can't Catch Them All)

2) Dialogue Will Be Added

3) New Scenes Will Be Created (Hopefully)

4) New Information Will Occasionally Be Revealed (Hopefully)

5) It Potentially Has Better Descriptions Than Previously, Thank God

6) There May Be Possible Changes From What Happened Originally (AKA, Some Actions or Reactions to Things May Have Changed For The Better or For The Worst)


Now, then! Enjoy your reading! Farewell!